He looked at Su Jiu and instructed her. "You, come and live with me."
General · Biting Peaches
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Hi! So your story is interesting and I love the dialogue between each character. Your description also gets better in later chapters. I'm still reading it, but so far I see nothing majorly wrong with your story. Can't wait to see how far you will take this story of yours and the new elements you will add to keep the readers engaged! Wishing you the best of luck with your story~!
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Urban · Jo_J
Omg, thank-you so much! I'm trying something new and I really want to see how far can I take this story. So I'm happy you liked it~!
A interesting story you have here ! Love how you took something cliche and made it unique . Yu Yan is a person I can somewhat relate to and I'm curious to see how her new life will play out~!
Yu Yan is an interesting characr , and not cliche like a bunch other transmigrators , who always try to save the kingdom of the body they took over , when their not obligated to make up for original mistakes !
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Teen · Harem_Queen