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edoardoabbondio: Good way to ruin the novel out of nowhere👌

Fourth Prince's Debauchery · C88
4 days ago

YesEvil: Writing Quality: There are a lot of mistakes in any given chapter which greatly hinders the flow of reading. The most blatant mistakes are missing words or incorrect words such as "tales" instead of 'tails' or "of" instead of 'if'.

Stability of Updates: I've powered through 50 chapters so I am not up to the update waiting part yet, don't think I will get there though. Checking the history shows it started off daily but has switched to a weekly mass update. Mostly reliable so far.

Story Dev: Nothing really stands out, a bit forceful in moving the story along. Still in a stage where it feels like the story is in it's infancy which is fair for only having read 50 chapters.

Character Design: Cliche? But at the same time it only feels like we have gotten to know two characters, the MC and romantic interest. A lot of the characters are just there and they don't feel "alive". Just being there for the sake of needing to be there. I will admit I was happy that the MC showed glimpses of quality from his youth, however it just makes it seem like he never changed even with the reincarnation.

World Background: Nothing special, but it is early days. A lot to learn about the author's world in the future releases. I am a fan of the 'last bastion' start.

Overall I don't really find anything special about this title. My best way to explain how I feel is that I would not use SS or FP to read this novel. My advice to the author would be to improve their writing via properly editing their work and to flesh out characters so the readers will actually care about what happens with them.

Way of the Knights
1 week ago

Parag0n1: This review is based on what the author wrote. The criticism would be purely constructive and does not intend to discourage anyone from reading the novel.

Worldbuilding- 3/5
The shallowness of the description of the world is so apparent. I get it that they are living in a confined space right now, but it would be better if you try to be wordy on this case since a lot chapter will happen on this 'Place' on the upcoming episodes. There are a lot of places that are mentioned in the earlier chapters, as well. It will be technically competent if you mention it one at a time. In this case, your novel is a reincarnation genre where it would go wrong unless you can describe those places in a bit descriptive way in the following chapter.

Character-
The people around the lead exists just for the convenience of the story - without deepness - you can make your characters carry some emotions, not only acting like a predictable robot. Please make them a real human being.

Sentence structure- 2/5
A lot of paragraphs are so badly transitioned. It is making your lead looks like a multi-tasker. I rarely encounter grammatical errors and typos, as well. Which is good. Some punctuations are necessary for the readers to understand what is going on with the situations, and we can understand them clearly.

Overall- 2/5
I love this kind of novel; I guess it all matters how the authors writes it. For me, it would be a good read if you don't have stories to enjoy anymore. What can I say is, this story has a lot of potentials. Just read a lot of popular books out there and particularly learn how they transition every paragraph. I wish you all the best.

Way of the Knights
1 week ago

kaneki_sensei: I can't wait for him to become kage level and see mito😁

The Uchiha-Senju Immortal · C33
1 week ago

Supreme_Lin_Fan: FBI(agent1) : s*hit this is the first time someone is near to the true truth of our existence.
FBI(agent2): yes nobody will ever guess that we are the true strongest beings in the omniverse and all those ROBs are just low-class agents in one of our sections, also the true protector of lolis, WE are the creators of the universal law "Yes Loki no touch",those who don't obey the law, let's just say it's censored coz maybe there is lolis reading this, Yes we can break the forth wall, watch your as*es morherfvckers. WE ARE EVERYWHERE.

The Uchiha-Senju Immortal · C33
1 week ago

dei: First

Devil Fruit Powers in The Tower of God · C65
3 weeks ago

Navizy: First!

Devil Fruit Powers in The Tower of God · C65
3 weeks ago

Navizy: I'm faster. Hahaha

Devil Fruit Powers in The Tower of God · C65
3 weeks ago

dei: Awh man... im just late 2second

Devil Fruit Powers in The Tower of God · C65
3 weeks ago

Navizy: 2 seconds.

Devil Fruit Powers in The Tower of God · C65
3 weeks ago
2 seconds. View More

dei: First

Devil Fruit Powers in The Tower of God · C65
3 weeks ago
I'm faster. Hahaha View More

dei: First

Devil Fruit Powers in The Tower of God · C65
3 weeks ago
First! View More
Devil Fruit Powers in The Tower of God · C65
3 weeks ago
Keep up the Good Work. View More
Undying Flame · C2
3 weeks ago

Navizy: Third!

The Black Market · C74
3 weeks ago

Dylan_Suddarth: Dang it wanted to get first. But this is a really great novel and I look forward to reading it every day

The Black Market · C74
3 weeks ago

BEAST: Firsttttttt hahahahahahaa

The Black Market · C74
3 weeks ago
Third! View More
The Black Market · C74
3 weeks ago
I did but I resumed again, well, I only dislike the new characters and I also waiting for the Mc to arrive.
Overall, this Novel is good. View More

FishThatsBlue: I thought you quit reading this novel?

Village Shrouded in Ice · C68
3 weeks ago

Daoist922141: Boring........

Village Shrouded in Ice · C68
4 weeks ago

eyesofsky: Bored

Village Shrouded in Ice · C68
4 weeks ago

Juanroberts11: I really hoping the mc will come back soon and has revenge on all those who wronged his clan really really miss the mc.
Thanks for the chapter

Village Shrouded in Ice · C68
4 weeks ago
Ignorance is bliss, they say. View More

Arunavazael: I don't understand. Form what I know , dojutsu isn't your average cabbage that you could pick and put as you like. Dojutsu need compatible bloodline otherwise it would lead to severe backlash, huge amount of cakra needed twice or triple than the original user. Intense rejection etc. Danzo able to use lots of sharigan because Harashima Cell, Kakashi use only one eye yet make him exhausted after that, that Eye patched Kirigarure Guy also only has one byakugan. Moreover all of them can only use limited amount of original power. Even transplanted sharingan on edo tensei aren't able to conjure Susano. Even the killer of Asago clan able to retrieve the bloodline they should be unable to perfectly use Reitgan. Otherwise Reitgan can be considered cheap because can easily be used by the other. I wonder why Author didn't consider these factor?

Village Shrouded in Ice · C68
4 weeks ago

Arunavazael: I don't understand. Form what I know , dojutsu isn't your average cabbage that you could pick and put as you like. Dojutsu need compatible bloodline otherwise it would lead to severe backlash, huge amount of cakra needed twice or triple than the original user. Intense rejection etc. Danzo able to use lots of sharigan because Harashima Cell, Kakashi use only one eye yet make him exhausted after that, that Eye patched Kirigarure Guy also only has one byakugan. Moreover all of them can only use limited amount of original power. Even transplanted sharingan on edo tensei aren't able to conjure Susano. Even the killer of Asago clan able to retrieve the bloodline they should be unable to perfectly use Reitgan. Otherwise Reitgan can be considered cheap because can easily be used by the other. I wonder why Author didn't consider these factor?

Village Shrouded in Ice · C68
4 weeks ago

jeanpierregerardo: lol , when he returns, what awaits him xD, law will have wives, among other things, those clones if they .

A Ninja System · C40
4 weeks ago

airambach26: Get the pink haired ninja woman to mc, also Esdeath, Kuroka, sayo, childhood friend of Tatsumi and get more women to mc please

A Ninja System · C40
4 weeks ago

Light_snow: Thanks for chap , you need to edit this chap ,

A Ninja System · C0
4 weeks ago
First for the first time of the first week of the first month of the first year. View More
The Black Market · C67
4 weeks ago
Black Market. View More
The Black Market · C67
4 weeks ago

ksomk: The grammar is astounding for this site, but the plot happens to be highly condensed garbage that has taken the form of literature. Do not even bother reading this unless you are a harem obsessed moron, trust me.

Martial God Asura - Fan Fiction.
4 weeks ago
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