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Kaitelin

Kaitelin

female LV 14

Just a voracious book reader 😶

2018-06-09 Joined Global

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From* her knowledge

Han Seoyeon raised her brows, For her knowledge, Wan Seulgi her best friend was very over the top for her boyfriend, sending unending praises and pictures of her boyfriend. Breaking up with the man, made her surprised. 

I’m The Boss’s Secretary?!

I’m The Boss’s Secretary?!

Fantasy · mata0eve

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would or soul?

Exhaling a mouthful of sigh, she heard her phone vibrated from her skirt pocket. It wasn't a message from her adorable little brother but rather her highschool friend, Wan Seulgi. She was her only friend who stayed by her side even as she finished her high school, a third-generation billionaire who has a rather kind would than the rest of billionaire children whom she knew in her high school. 

I’m The Boss’s Secretary?!

I’m The Boss’s Secretary?!

Fantasy · mata0eve

Kaitelin
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The flowers were beautiful, with most of the bodies being tubular, the purple petals fading inward from the edge to pure white.

Blind Spot

Blind Spot

Sci-fi · Get Lost

Kaitelin
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Unfamiliar yet familiar to you.

Nu Wan wanted you escape but his grip on her only tightened. How did she get into this? All she ever wanted was to find a place she belonged in and earn money to pay her bills. Why did she get entangled with such a man and why did her body react to his touch like they were familiar.

Rebirth: My Fiery Marriage With Mister Dragon!

Rebirth: My Fiery Marriage With Mister Dragon!

Fantasy · Little_North_Star

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Less than a centimeter to make it 2 m. for his height, a towering dragon, you can say.

The 199cm man trapped the nervous looking woman against the bedstead. He could smell that scent of that annoying goddess all over her. It was her, she was the one he had been searching for.

Rebirth: My Fiery Marriage With Mister Dragon!

Rebirth: My Fiery Marriage With Mister Dragon!

Fantasy · Little_North_Star

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Yup, she is the one.

Ye Gu had a guess, she could really be the goddess Nu Wan's reincarnation.

Rebirth: My Fiery Marriage With Mister Dragon!

Rebirth: My Fiery Marriage With Mister Dragon!

Fantasy · Little_North_Star

Kaitelin
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Lots of missing spaces between words: women and they, approach and you, and this.

Kaitelin
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female* humans

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its* cover

Her mother had named it. Said it reminded her of a type she'd known in the human world called a weeping willow. Like her mother's willow, the Weeping Tree's branches were high on the trunk and angled down, while all the thin growth and leaves—and pink and white flowers in the spring—cascaded towards the dirt. But if you pushed through the curtain of leaves and twigs that fell to brush the grass of the small clearing, inside you found a wide, nearly circular area around the trunk, completely clear and dry. She'd spent more than one summer storm under it's cover and never felt a drop.

Taming the Queen of Beasts

Taming the Queen of Beasts

Fantasy · AimeeLynn

Kaitelin
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Mostly on a rainy night.

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"Make that over hot chocolate, and it just might come true."

The Alpha's Claimed Mate

The Alpha's Claimed Mate

Fantasy · Caomelon

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People were right. Once you see someone's true colors and remove the blind of love from your eyes, you really see the ugly personality they behold.

Beast Alpha and His Cursed Luna

Beast Alpha and His Cursed Luna

Fantasy · AngelinaBhardawaj

Kaitelin
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Maybe from an illusionary plane.

He didn't know what had just happened, and he even doubted whether he had experienced a hallucination or a conversion disorder, but in any case, it was best not to disclose anything until he had thought about and investigated the matter thoroughly.

Blind Spot

Blind Spot

Sci-fi · Get Lost

Kaitelin
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starting gun from a track and field arena?

The noise of cars, the voices of students, footsteps, the sound of a starting gun from the distant sports field—all these sounds surged in like a flood, jostling to enter his ears and causing his eardrums to ache slightly.

Blind Spot

Blind Spot

Sci-fi · Get Lost

Kaitelin
Kaitelin
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2nd Father >> father (1st father is correct to be capitalized {as Maurice is addressing him directly} but the 2nd father should not be capitalized)

"Father!" Samantha's fourteen-year-old brother, Maurice, who had been watching his Father struggle on the ground, immediately stepped out of his hiding place.

Bride To His Darkness

Bride To His Darkness

Fantasy · Sky_Li_9922

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feets >> feet* (feet is already the plural form of ‘foot’)

"S…. Samantha….run away from here! Now!" Her Father coughed out his words with urgency, barely able to stand on his own two feets as his weak body instantly gave in.

Bride To His Darkness

Bride To His Darkness

Fantasy · Sky_Li_9922

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