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  • Heavenly Pleasure

    Heavenly Pleasure

    Eastern Fantasy Harem R-18

    4.2

    [Cover is not mine.] A pervert man from the modern world had died, his soul was transmitted on the body of a young man named Qing Tian in the world of cultivation. Before his soul migrated to his new body, he found an old man who called himself a god and he was given five requests by the old man. After making all his requests, his soul merged with Qing Tian's body, he opened his eyes from his new body and found himself in the middle of the forest. Moments after he absorbed the memories from his new body he laughed while grinning. "Haha.. Let's screw up the girls hehehe..." - - Warning: This is an adult novel, for those who are not old enough or who are not strong with this kind of content. It is hoped not to read or leave this novel immediately, because I do not want to destroy the generation that is still pure. Thanks.

Moments

Maaf bro, udah di hapus sama webnovel, Jadi males dehh. View More

hacques_reird: Ampas sih... Buang waktu.

Heavenly Pleasure · C11
1 month ago
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MavisKazuha: Hello guys, author here.
I would be shameless to give 5 stars to my own novel hahaha ...
This novel is inspired by several novels that I read, maybe there are some similarities from them, but the whole story will be different.

Please enjoy!

Heavenly Pleasure
2 months ago

MavisKazuha: Thanks for the story, this novel is very good.
In fact sometimes I almost cry, every time I read a sad scene in this story.
But I was also entertained by the funny scenes in this novel.

Full Marks Hidden Marriage: Pick Up a Son, Get a Free Husband
9 months ago
Reading Status: C2165
Thanks for the story, this novel is very good.
In fact sometimes I almost cry, every time I read a sad scene in this story.
But I was also entertained by the funny scenes in this novel. View More
Full Marks Hidden Marriage: Pick Up a Son, Get a Free Husband
9 months ago

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Full Marks Hidden Marriage: Pick Up a Son, Get a Free Husband
9 months ago
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Full Marks Hidden Marriage: Pick Up a Son, Get a Free Husband
9 months ago
Thanks for the story, this novel is very good. View More

MavisKazuha: See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon

Full Marks Hidden Marriage: Pick Up a Son, Get a Free Husband · C2165
9 months ago
See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon View More
Full Marks Hidden Marriage: Pick Up a Son, Get a Free Husband · C2165
9 months ago
See this! I just gifted the story: Potion View More
Full Marks Hidden Marriage: Pick Up a Son, Get a Free Husband · C1
9 months ago
Oh, thank you for reminding me.
I want to delete it because the words look very inappropriate, but I forgot to do that.
Once again thank you, bro. View More

Silent_Moon: The synopsis is really disturbing especially tge turn those girls into bitches part... do you mean bitches for him or for everybody?


140 characters is a pain in the ass.

Heavenly Pleasure
9 months ago
Thank you, bro.
Later, chapter 11 will be updated at 07.00.
Please give review to improve the story of my novel haha..
Please Enjoy! View More

Acerlance: No problem. Improvement will come in due time.

Heavenly Pleasure · C10
9 months ago

EndlesslyHarem: i'm so sad for the mc, he's (East Dragon) :v need content with lemon,, and keep it going bro

Heavenly Pleasure · C10
9 months ago

EndlesslyHarem: hahaha :v nice story bro, keep it going, i will keep to read and support you

Heavenly Pleasure · C10
9 months ago
thank you for the review, bro. I will remember that.
Yeah, english is not my main language. View More

Acerlance: Think of a fight scene like it's a dance, having steps and executions and, of course, being performed on a stage. As a writer, you get to decide the flow of the fights and battles, describe the characters' general movements in a scene and correlating to the environment they are in, while emphasizing the miniscule details that may affect the outcome of the fight.

Give the reader the idea of what caused the fight, why it is so, and how it will go down. Most works I've read, with a few exceptions, just add fight scenes for the sake of showcasing abilities that would be forgotten or described vaguely to make it seem mysterious when it really isn't, forcing/rushing plot progression, or combining illogical decisions and reasonings leading to the fight, which may leave a bad taste.

While this is a mash-up parody of various novels and works, I am genuinely entertained by what I'm seeing so far. Sure, there are grammars mistakes here and there, but it can be fixed. This novel has potential, friend. Don't let the pressure get to you and keep doing well.

Good luck on your path.

Heavenly Pleasure · C10
9 months ago

Acerlance: Think of a fight scene like it's a dance, having steps and executions and, of course, being performed on a stage. As a writer, you get to decide the flow of the fights and battles, describe the characters' general movements in a scene and correlating to the environment they are in, while emphasizing the miniscule details that may affect the outcome of the fight.

Give the reader the idea of what caused the fight, why it is so, and how it will go down. Most works I've read, with a few exceptions, just add fight scenes for the sake of showcasing abilities that would be forgotten or described vaguely to make it seem mysterious when it really isn't, forcing/rushing plot progression, or combining illogical decisions and reasonings leading to the fight, which may leave a bad taste.

While this is a mash-up parody of various novels and works, I am genuinely entertained by what I'm seeing so far. Sure, there are grammars mistakes here and there, but it can be fixed. This novel has potential, friend. Don't let the pressure get to you and keep doing well.

Good luck on your path.

Heavenly Pleasure · C10
9 months ago

Sirocco: Summary of the chapter.
Her: it's not you! (Angry)
Him: crescent moon mark on your belly.
Her: it's you! (Cries)
Him: yep
Her: mom is dead.
Him: (vomits blood).
End. That will be 7 soul stones, thanks.

Dual Cultivation · C70
9 months ago

Pons: Bucking he'll the story is great but update is shakey

14o burn the one who did it burn baby burn baby burn baby burn baby burn baby burn baby burn baby burn baby burn baby burn baby burn baby burn baby burn baby burn baby burn baby burn baby burn baby burn baby burn baby

Heavenly Pleasure
9 months ago

JMelshan: 🙄

Heavenly Pleasure · C5
9 months ago

LoneMan: can't stop laughin hahaha!!

Heavenly Pleasure · C5
9 months ago

Earthshaker34: Killing you won't give me chapters so no you're safe... For now...

Heavenly Pleasure · C8
9 months ago

JMelshan: H-scenes and details 😍😍

Heavenly Pleasure · C8
9 months ago

GramDemolition: You have in essence only shown that the MC is OP , which by the way has already been covered in the previous chapters.It feels like youre putting off the interaction between him and his future characters.

Heavenly Pleasure · C10
9 months ago

MavisKazuha: Haha alright sir.

Heavenly Pleasure · C10
9 months ago

Chapat_86: He have OP techniques, and he want to downgrade the techniques? Just learn to control the output power...

Heavenly Pleasure · C10
9 months ago

MavisKazuha: It is true that I made the MC is the OP, you are not wrong about that.
But this is still in the hunting scene, this is even still part 2 -.-"
If I don't write this chapter, how can he get cultivation resources? do I have to write that the MC suddenly gets cultivation resources?
About MC interacting with other characters, it will definitely be there, but it needs a process. It is impossible for me to make an MC alone in the forest forever with the theme of a novel like this.

Heavenly Pleasure · C10
9 months ago

DaoPursuer: I agree.
Thanks for the chapter!

Heavenly Pleasure · C10
9 months ago

MavisKazuha: Wow, you almost even thought the same as my thinking, even though I haven't released part 3?
Impressive * Clap * Clap * Clap

Heavenly Pleasure · C10
9 months ago
Wow, you almost even thought the same as my thinking, even though I haven't released part 3?
Impressive * Clap * Clap * Clap View More

Master_of_Ero_Path: Surprisingly I don't quite agree with this. This is the first battle of modern man who transmigrate not apex cultivator who reborn. So I think this normal if the MC want to experience some battle not just casual punch that can shatter the enemy into blood mist, then he have to somehow provoke/persuade right? Moreover moreover doesn't the MC need beast core? . Even Saitama still looks for the enemy that can match him ever since he got bald lol😂. As for making the chapter waste I also don't agree with this. WHY?, Ok I will tell my view. First, In my view the starts is giving all language knowledge and you all know that is FORESHADOW. Then the shock after the first punch that make the both of mc and the fox startled is just for to BOLD LINE the power of Mc is ULTRA-STRONGER than the normal cultivator. After all he would go to the sect right? That wouldn't funny if the Mc only wants face smacking but the result is make him shatter like that😂.
But I know too because the long update you just seem cannot accept the little plot that seems insignificant. Yeah, I'm only can wish the chapter update is faster😌,

Heavenly Pleasure · C10
9 months ago

Master_of_Ero_Path: Surprisingly I don't quite agree with this. This is the first battle of modern man who transmigrate not apex cultivator who reborn. So I think this normal if the MC want to experience some battle not just casual punch that can shatter the enemy into blood mist, then he have to somehow provoke/persuade right? Moreover moreover doesn't the MC need beast core? . Even Saitama still looks for the enemy that can match him ever since he got bald lol😂. As for making the chapter waste I also don't agree with this. WHY?, Ok I will tell my view. First, In my view the starts is giving all language knowledge and you all know that is FORESHADOW. Then the shock after the first punch that make the both of mc and the fox startled is just for to BOLD LINE the power of Mc is ULTRA-STRONGER than the normal cultivator. After all he would go to the sect right? That wouldn't funny if the Mc only wants face smacking but the result is make him shatter like that😂.
But I know too because the long update you just seem cannot accept the little plot that seems insignificant. Yeah, I'm only can wish the chapter update is faster😌,

Heavenly Pleasure · C10
9 months ago

MavisKazuha: Indeed I also plan for that, but I write like that there is also a purpose.
You will know in the upcoming chapters.
Thank you for the review.

Heavenly Pleasure · C10
9 months ago
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