(надеюсь вы поймёте на русском) Дорогой автор, я понимаю, что вы, наверное, являетесь гуманитарием, но! Хотя бы попытайтесь, блин, хоть немного реалистично описать технологии. Это рассказ про изобретателя! Какой к чёрту сварочный аппарат из двух проводов и листа металла!? Ему нужен либо источник тока либо баллон со сжатым газом. Посредством чего происходит сварка, силой воображения? Что меня ещё триггернуло, так это то как сирион вскрыл замок на складе, даже не заметив. Для этого, знаете ли, навык нужен, а мы знаем, что у героя этому навыку взяться неоткуда. Ещё эти его постоянные восклицания о невозможности раздражают - очнись!, ты во вселенной мульт сериала, возможно всё. А так занимательное чтиво. Спасибо за главы.
Shouldn't 10 shadows be absorbed with the Mahoraga now? After the death of each of the shadows, they merge with one of the remaining ones. In this case, the logical completion of the technique will be merging with all the shikigami.
meh, A mediocre idea. Mediocre implementation. The language of writing using AI will make anything boring and uninteresting. A lot of illogicalities and inaccuracies of lore accumulate and make the reading process annoying. And a lot of other things that I'm too lazy to write about. In my opinion, the work does not deserve a full-fledged review - there is nothing to improve in it, it is half bad and half just readable. I'm sorry for the time spent. Oh! Frequent updates are a plus.
You may not have noticed, but this meeting was not an ambush, but an accident, which, of course, does not make sense if you think about it.
Zald's face darkened at the disdain in Alfia's gaze. With an annoyed snort, he replied, "Hmph, if it weren't for his dirty tactics, I would've beaten him to a pulp." A feral smile appeared on Zald's face. "He's mine, Alfia... After all, I still have to repay him for all these wounds."
Forge and Steel
Anime & Comics · Cozmooo
ha-ha-ha!
Noticing that the son of Coul will not open up his lip about the guy, Natasha merely shrugged before her expression grew serious, her eyes narrowing slightly as she leaned forward. "I presume you already know the detail of my mission from Agent Hill?"
Fate/Marvel: Chaldea Descend
Anime & Comics · Xeviouzzz
Where are the other 2 brilliant twists?
Where are the other 2 twists?!
[You have pulled: Zenin Naobito's Cursed Technique, Projection Sorcery! Rank: Diamond.]
In My Hero Academia with a Jujutsu Kaisen Gacha System
Anime & Comics · GAF_00_TW
It's scary.
- Monika - Doki Doki Literature club
Meta Essence Gacha in Marvel
Anime & Comics · Evans_The_Writer
but it would be fusion.
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Streamer in the Omniverse
Anime & Comics · Calleum_Artori
vimana
Ideas on ship names?
The Reincarnator's Tavern
Movies · GnomeBob