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It's bad, period. I admire you for being able to read 17 chapters. As I read I had the feeling I was watching Teen Wolf.

same

the story is a mess, 11 chapters and several "cool" powers. mc meets a stranger in the woods and abracadabra we are best friends. I wasn't going to waste my time any further, but since I didn't see any reviews written by an adult, I decided to do other readers like me a favor.

Thank you very much for answering me politely. As it was a +18 fanfic, I didn't have many expectations. But what got me, in addition to fulfilling wishes, was realizing that you were building the story from comments, from a stupid and horny audience.

Idiot wish fulfillment. Do I need to write anything else? Idiot wish fulfillment. Do I need to write anything else? Idiot wish fulfillment. Do I need to write anything else? Idiot wish fulfillment. Do I need to write anything else? Idiot wish fulfillment. Do I need to write anything else? Idiot wish fulfillment. Do I need to write anything Idiot wish fulfillment. Do I need to write anything else? ?

Congratulations

keep calm author san

Thanks

I've read a lot of bad things about this place, very very bad. But this fanfic is the worst.

It doesn't feel like Game of Thrones, it feels like I'm reading Moana, Cinderella or some other disney s.hit.

For me the platpuss was the last straw.

I had never thought of that, it makes perfect sense.