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Worst way to open a novel. The amount of spelling errors are insane. Are you a total troglodyte?

I would like to say first off thanks for clicking on this story, but also to give it som time. lemme explain, the first few chapters of this story were made years ago on another platform, and i only came back to it recently to contiue forwards, meaning that even with the edits and refribsihes ive made to the first few chapters they may still seem objectivly bad by some, but i promise you it gets better, and that i edit them when i can to fix any errors. also any and all criticism is welcome, Thanks for choosing Rise of the Rust, and Enjoy!!!

Star Wars - Rise of the Rust

Star Wars - Rise of the Rust

Movies · The_B1BattleDroid

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1k is way too strong for duelist kingdom.

Bonz frowned and drew his card: "I will use Emergency Provisions! I send my set trap to the graveyard and gain one thousand life points."

YUGIOH: It's Time to Duel!

YUGIOH: It's Time to Duel!

Anime & Comics · Yellow_Duck_Toy

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Another dual attack. As usual Yugi cheats...

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"Let's end this once and for all! Summon Skull, destroy that Hercules Beetle!"

YUGIOH: It's Time to Duel!

YUGIOH: It's Time to Duel!

Anime & Comics · Yellow_Duck_Toy

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Since when can you do direct attacks?

"My monster will now attack." Pegasus ordered: "Seems like it will end quicker than I expected."

YUGIOH: It's Time to Duel!

YUGIOH: It's Time to Duel!

Anime & Comics · Yellow_Duck_Toy

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I would assume Pegasus would cheat... he always does as Yugi stated, since he got that eye he never played a real duel. He should have known that MC played Waboku.

The two monsters stopped their actions and stood still in a daze. Pegasus clicked his teeth: " That trap only saved you momentarily, let us continue then..."

YUGIOH: It's Time to Duel!

YUGIOH: It's Time to Duel!

Anime & Comics · Yellow_Duck_Toy

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WHY? There is no tribute yet! Easy to summon it.

Otherwise, Felgrand will only be a 2800 attack beat stick, which wasn't something to scoff at. I sighed as summoning DDLF was already pretty difficult, counting the fact that all my monsters have no effect.

YUGIOH: It's Time to Duel!

YUGIOH: It's Time to Duel!

Anime & Comics · Yellow_Duck_Toy

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British gangsters do not present red envelopes.... nobody does that in the UK, especially in 1991....

"You too, Happy New Year, Sophia," Artel replied, presenting her with a large red envelope—a New Year's gift.

Harry Potter: The New Dark Lord Shelby

Harry Potter: The New Dark Lord Shelby

Movies · Kitty_Loves_Milk

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They should already be at -500 by now...

Learning that Snape had caught Harry and Ron added to Professor McGonagall's distress. With Snape's character, more points would be deducted, spelling a deduction of 300 points for Gryffindor that night.

Harry Potter: The New Dark Lord Shelby

Harry Potter: The New Dark Lord Shelby

Movies · Kitty_Loves_Milk

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Nice math. 0 + 15 = 20

"Congratulations to the host! The unlocking progress of The Ring of Power has reached 20%, and the 'Necromancer' ability has been successfully unlocked!"

Harry Potter: The New Dark Lord Shelby

Harry Potter: The New Dark Lord Shelby

Movies · Kitty_Loves_Milk

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Way too op. 15% from the getgo... I thought like 1% or 2% also Smeagol is not only 1/4 less important than Gandalf and Saruman....

"Ding! Congratulations to the host for successfully summoning Smeagol! The unlocking progress of The Ring of Power has increased by 15%!"

Harry Potter: The New Dark Lord Shelby

Harry Potter: The New Dark Lord Shelby

Movies · Kitty_Loves_Milk

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Replied to The_man_The_myth

This is one of the options that make sense. For example every muggle born is allowed to exchange a small sum every year as "goodwill". Of course it only makes sense with a hard cap on it... else they can just exchange 5 pound for 1 galleon... melt down the gold... get multiple times that amount... exchange for many more galleons and repeat until they are billionaires.

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Harry Potter: New World

Harry Potter: New World

Movies · HPMan

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