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  • Doulou dalu: Reborn As Ma Hongjun

    Doulou dalu: Reborn As Ma Hongjun

    Book&Literature Harem

    4.9

    He didn't expect to come here when he died. He didn't even know why he would. All he knew, was that this was a world filled with monsters, literal monsters; creatures that could shake the world and scatter the lives of people around them like leaves. He refused to be a leaf. A footnote. He would rise to power, no matter who got in his way.

Moments

What is this small dick energy? I am intrigued View More

PersonMcpeopleface: To start, star ratings is a bull**** way to tell if something is good or not, the lowest rating i can give is still 1 star, so it's really an out of 4 rating system, keep that in mind as the the true rating of this novel is 0.6 stars and I think that's an accurate rating for the first 4 chapters.
To be honest, i spent about 15 minutes writing a pretty in depth review of what i didn't like in these 4 godawful chapters, but my finishing statement below made it all obsolete.
All in all, because of how the story is written the main character just oozes Small Dick Energy, though i can't put my finger on what specifically makes his dick so small.
Author, if you want i can clarify what i didn't like in these 4 chapters, just reply then i can give you some acutally constructive critizism if you'd like.

Guild Wars
1 day ago

PersonMcpeopleface: To start, star ratings is a bull**** way to tell if something is good or not, the lowest rating i can give is still 1 star, so it's really an out of 4 rating system, keep that in mind as the the true rating of this novel is 0.6 stars and I think that's an accurate rating for the first 4 chapters.
To be honest, i spent about 15 minutes writing a pretty in depth review of what i didn't like in these 4 godawful chapters, but my finishing statement below made it all obsolete.
All in all, because of how the story is written the main character just oozes Small Dick Energy, though i can't put my finger on what specifically makes his dick so small.
Author, if you want i can clarify what i didn't like in these 4 chapters, just reply then i can give you some acutally constructive critizism if you'd like.

Guild Wars
1 day ago

viveksale: Man where to start
1.Writing quality : Poor to say the least. constant grammatical errors, too much repetitions,too hard to follow up, lack to editing, totally fucking up consistency from chapter to chapter and dude watch the proportions man.

2.Updates: tooooooooooooooooooooo slow, like thrice a month slow

3.Story development : Dear writer decide first which type of story you want to write first . A VRMMORPG title, reincarnation title, a revenge story, a thriller or wanna make an original of this schlobberfest. Could've been much better if stuck to a single genre.

4.Character : Oh man simply one dimensional. a narcissistic schlog. It was ok for first few chapters but after that there is nothing much.

5.World: Meh others did it miles better.

Simply saying read at your own caution
#oh writer don't delete this (-ve) comment too

Guild Wars
1 day ago
^ Lmao, if that doesn't scream out desperate then I dunno what is haha. View More

Netherwolf: The story has some bullsh*t history tied to it and thats fine with me. The world development is pure and utter crap. The character have no depth whatsoever. The MC is too OP if your into that then it might be fine but for me it was bad. The currency exchange rate for in-game money is a load of horse ****. In my opinion the story has good potential if it has bit more depth and realism mixed into it. This is just my rant about the novel.

Guild Wars
1 day ago

bredel: the mc become the strongest and richest player in the game in just 4 chapter, by kiliing a single monster at level 1.

how hilarious was that?
just ignored those top positive 5 star reviews above, those just crap of bullsht from the translator/author smurf account.

Guild Wars
1 day ago

Suriel8224: The ranting every chapter makes me annoyed.
Mc treat people like trash but he is worse than those people he called trash.
I wonder how the fvk this ff got a lot of high stars review

Shield Hero with Barrier Magic
1 day ago
Yea, but unlike the games, the pokemon in this story has multiple tiers, so type immunity only works if the pokemon are in the same tiers and with ninetails being only at an elite tier, while gabite is at the king level and not to mention, also a pseudo legendary; its understandable that he could overwhelm ninetails. View More

FrostFire: Alolan ninetales is ice fairy smh...

Pokemon - A Mystical Journey · C274
3 weeks ago
bro why are you replying to me? I just corrected his spellings View More

RuthlessOni: It's Hyuga, Byakugan is Dojutsu...

Village Shrouded in Ice · C2
3 weeks ago
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Code Geass: Azure Prince
4 weeks ago

Febri99: Yeah! If you won't make aurora mc harem just say from beginning ,you getting me high hopes crushed,cause i think finally Erica have a rival for first wife position

How to Survive in the World of Campione with Fragmented Memories · C24
1 month ago

Nirvanic_Sun: xD. Her subordinate doesn't have to wear any of it, but he does? She doesn't strike me as the type to look down on a fellow campione so much.

Reminds me of Boa Hancock. I wonder if there will be an embarrassing moment? If he falls through the roof of her bathroom he might have to fight her for three laps around china

How to Survive in the World of Campione with Fragmented Memories · C24
1 month ago

Dzerx: My god he better not follow such stupid requests. On a different note, Aurora's plot ending irritated me and made her character pointless for being introduced.

How to Survive in the World of Campione with Fragmented Memories · C24
1 month ago

Loli_in_Disguise: Well you could always make into a great plot point to continue the story, dont know how you envisioned the end of this novel, but if you were to somehow want to continue it. Then after Yujiro dies(Which he will, no doubt about that lol) you could then release the zombie outbreak and revive him, completely with the zombie physiology. Yujiro can then run around killing grandmasters turning them into his generals and declaring war on humanity lol.

But yea, as I said great plot point and I hope it may come true, but I know how hard it is to write a novel and I would already be happy if you can actually end this book. Anyways your doing an amazing job so far and you do you

Another Hanma in a World of Martial Arts Anime · C16
1 month ago
Well you could always make into a great plot point to continue the story, dont know how you envisioned the end of this novel, but if you were to somehow want to continue it. Then after Yujiro dies(Which he will, no doubt about that lol) you could then release the zombie outbreak and revive him, completely with the zombie physiology. Yujiro can then run around killing grandmasters turning them into his generals and declaring war on humanity lol.

But yea, as I said great plot point and I hope it may come true, but I know how hard it is to write a novel and I would already be happy if you can actually end this book. Anyways your doing an amazing job so far and you do you View More

Mr_Annihilator: Uhh, Yujiro would continue to grow and become even more monstrous. Same goes for his sons, Jack, Baki, and Yukiro. Doubt the Zombies could even break Yukiro or Yujiro's skin either, so they'd be infection-free as long as they didn't eat Zombies.

Another Hanma in a World of Martial Arts Anime · C16
1 month ago
same, dunno why every other author makes their mc the brother of the lead character. It's just unoriginal and plain annoying. But I still would give a few chapters a go, cuz I ran out of novels to read lol. want me to let you know if it becomes good? View More

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One Piece: The Power System · C1
1 month ago
but bro its only anime and what you said are chinese novels lol.

But yeah your right there could be a lot of better options, but maybe the mc just recently marathons it, which is why he choose it. View More

glo_antttt: one piece has to be the least place to want to go other than hs dxd small world w/ a weak power system useful but weak!

while db is basically a mini multiverse, MGA such a grand & broad world, the renegade immortal's universe, desolate eras world(if you die here you can reincarnate as long as you become an immortal)

so many better options!

One Piece: The Power System · C1
1 month ago

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One Piece: The Power System · C1
1 month ago
relatable af lol View More

Issac_Moe: Was beating my meat but saw you released this

Another Hanma in a World of Martial Arts Anime · C10
1 month ago

Issac_Moe: Was beating my meat but saw you released this

Another Hanma in a World of Martial Arts Anime · C10
1 month ago
Dam bro, way to go on writing this review lol. But yea I completely agree with you, part 1 was good until the chapters leading up to the end (which I'm still pretty annoyed about.)

Like you I'm still gonna read on a few more chapters, but atm I'm not liking it lol. View More

SillyThoughts: So part 1 has just ended and part 2 just began when I’m writing this review. The first part is set in the warring states period of naruto and pt2 seems to be starting up in the city built during the first pt during the canonical period at a guess it’s only just started and the history mentioned has only declared 2 wars occurring but kind of brings in idea the other was butterflies out of starting but i could be wrong about that and the time period.

first part is a great read for any fan of systems existing in a fiction but being used minimally and watching a guy rise up to create a village.

But this first part ends abruptly in quite the unsatisfactory way. The last few chapters of the first part feel rushed as if the creator wanted to stop writing this part as foreshadowing of a disappointing method of death appears and then a completely different one strikes true.

Before that abrupt point I would consider this a must read of nartuo fan fictions along side “The Unwoven Threads of Fate” on fanfic .net or in a similar vain to this one the first act of “Shinobi: The RPG”.

Past the bumpy end of part 1 is hard to say as it’s not even got far enough to truly introduce the characters yet so I can’t speak on it as it’s really feels at the moment like starting a brand new story I will have to wait for time to give a verdict. But I would recommend if you like the idea of reading the story of a guy whose desire is to build a village of his own in the warring states period of ninja to pick this up and give part 1 a read.

But if you have read shinobi: the RPG especially during its original releasing know the ending of part 1 feels like it of a great story with some foreshadowing placed about getting closer to the end and yet it still feels so unsatisfying an end compared to the rest of the content running up to it.

But that also goes to show how great a story it is that, up to that point I got so invested in the story I was so sad to see part 1 end in such an abrupt manner.

I wish the author the best of luck with this second part, I am following and will read it as it is released and hope you continue to enjoy creating this but if you don’t enjoy this second part for whatever reason I hope you take a break and try writing something else or doing something else before you get to the point where you feel forced by us readers or your plans to finish and do so in a rushed weaker quality content.

And for any new readers questioning reading it, I’d say give it a go it’s worth the time to give it a go.

Village Shrouded in Ice
1 month ago
Mc is in deep Cryonics in other words his body preserved in ice. So he might still be alive. So yea we got a new mc now, which is honestly weirding me out lol. But yea I'm still annoyed at how it happends and would probably drop this soon lmao. View More

NoMoneyNoCry: Im lost. What happen?? Can someone tell me whats going on?

Village Shrouded in Ice · C63
1 month ago

Pvdro: Im big boy lost

Village Shrouded in Ice · C63
1 month ago

limiyou: i don't understand anymore

Village Shrouded in Ice · C62
1 month ago

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Guild Wars
1 month ago

Loli_in_Disguise: Why the statues tho? I mean considering the short life expectancy of ninjas, especially a special ops at that, they probably won't last long. So by then, can you imagine how many statues there'd be in a few decade or so. Alot lol

Village Shrouded in Ice · C52
1 month ago
Why the statues tho? I mean considering the short life expectancy of ninjas, especially a special ops at that, they probably won't last long. So by then, can you imagine how many statues there'd be in a few decade or so. Alot lol View More

FishThatsBlue: Thought about the 7 swordsman from hidden mist and went like.... well why the F not lol.

Village Shrouded in Ice · C52
1 month ago

Elsontiger987: I have no clue about this universe.

(.) (.)... · C0
1 month ago

Tonyorobsky: The system is bad. There is nothing about status, skills or inventory (though the existence of the inventory is implied). The shop doesn’t sell basic or intermediate skills/items, which makes earning points more of a chore than anything constructive. There was no « inner otaku » until Kuroka showed up, and the sudden appearance of stupid antics weirded me out. We don’t know if the protagonist is 14yo (4 years older than 10yo Murayama and Katase) or 17yo (as he was at his death and how he presented himself to Vali’s faction).

System in Another World
1 month ago

CestMoi: I'll assume that you've never touch/read novels outside the genre of harem, Si and wish fulfillments or your just really young and your hormones are all over the place.

A sypnosis is glimpse of how creative the author is, it is what draws in potential readers. His sypnosis basically screams "if youre a teenage virgin who wants to jack off then read this"

I dont know why but your Not a Review at all ticks me off. Ive read and browse countless of highly well written novels and trust me their sypnosis is in no where near as as lack of effort as this one.

System in Another World
1 month ago

manny0101: Hmmm perhaps. I really don't want that to be true though. I want Uzumaki with Ernie. They were annihilated because they were affiliated with Konoha and Konoha didn't give them any kind of respect by treating Naruto with extreme neglect and indoctrinated him to love Konoha. Sure they used the Uzumaki swirl on their Shinobi attire but they called Naruto practically clanless. They hailed the Uchiha like they were gods and gave that bi*ch Sasuke everything but the Uzumaki were forgotten. Hell, they were rarely ever mentioned. Konoha didn't deserve the alliance with Uzumaki.

Village Shrouded in Ice · C41
1 month ago
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