Alisa_Reni

3yr

Commented

What's it? A new chapter? Is the author resurrected🙃?

ch 0 2 Dispersal

RE: Fool Hardy Pirates

Anime & Comics · Sunset_Watcher

Alisa_Reni

3yr

Commented

I like your fanfiction☺. Keep it up!

ch 19 After Massacre

Naruto's Twin sister Hina

Anime & Comics · Yogichess

Alisa_Reni

3yr

Commented

You can redirect all the hatred of the Uchiha clan to Danzo and distribute the work in the village among other clans. Just other clans (and the Uchiha clan) do not participate in the management of the village, so they are not satisfied.

ch 18 Notice

Naruto's Twin sister Hina

Anime & Comics · Yogichess

Alisa_Reni

3yr

Commented

I like the relationships between the characters🙃. I hope Hina will remain as sly and smart in the future☺. It would be nice if she was good at gathering information. But the end of the Uchiha clan was trite...

ch 17 Bloodshed

Naruto's Twin sister Hina

Anime & Comics · Yogichess

Alisa_Reni

3yr

Commented

*Waiting for the sequel*

ch 11 Training

Naruto's Twin sister Hina

Anime & Comics · Yogichess

Alisa_Reni

3yr

Commented

Thank you for the quick appearance of chapters💕!

ch 10 Schedule for Daytime and Nighttime

Naruto's Twin sister Hina

Anime & Comics · Yogichess

Alisa_Reni

3yr

Posted

The beginning of fanfiction interesting😊! But I would like more descriptions and dialogues... I hope this improves over time🙃. There are few chapters, so it is still difficult to judge the main character🌸.