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I made it about 8% into the story before I had to quit. The MC is talking to himself non stop. Even in public he’s talking about a woman’s cup size like she’s not there in front of him or bragging about himself. He’s poor yet shopping for junk food, camping supplies, a PSP, and that’s just day 1. Having such an OP skill yet he wastes it wanting to find an in to rent a room, eat, and play games. He gets an op skill for stats stealth skills that help him assassinate mobs non stop and can level up 50 levels in one day if he wanted. His obsession with getting a sex slave on day 2 spending half his income is just dumb. Also the need to go into detail on his meals and the sounds he makes crunch crunch crunch, slurp slurp slurp, nom nom nom, etc. Wtf is that crap? I don’t give a rats arse what he’s eating or snacking on, how it sounds, what nuts he picks up to pass the time, how he cooks it, or the dialog he talks to himself about it how much he enjoyed eating it Chuni acting and eating makes up at least 5%+.of what I’ve read and it’s worthless filler for a higher word count. The only redeeming factor of the MC is his lack of interest he’s shown to lolis. Just stfu and level already… you have a connection to a major family so sell stuff for money.

No story is ever perfect for everyone. I feel this one was rushed. The system had almost no use other than gatcha and the shop. We see him allocating stats some times but other than that he’s supposedly killing tens of thousands of beasts for points. I skipped a bit towards the end wanting to avoid dates weddings etc for the story and it came to a dead stop without finishing it.. The ending was extremely rushed filled with non stop group cultivation batches but he wouldn’t do it for himself. I would have liked to see them finish here and to venture out into th multiverse.

I hate novels suggesting children as low as 4 years old fighting like some kind of pro. Choosing warrior over magic was a bad choice. I think 5% of the word count goes to “My lord” and other addresses. A 5-7 year old child given control over his territory and speaking to other lords etc like an equal and suggesting that either they join him or be his enemies. To the author I would suggest some tume skip. I hate these novels that Herve people spamming reviews.