No mention of or conversation with pidgeot at all?
He summoned the Riolu with the ticket… I would edit this part to reflect that.
Yet somehow, it was this Riolu that had come to him.
Pokemon: To The Top We Go!
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The story isn’t bad and the concept is great. Just some feedback. If you are using ai for grammar and whatnot, just double check sentence length and naming convention. Otherwise great job.
Ren gripped Pidgeot's feathers tightly, feeling the biting wind high in the sky, and looked down at the subjugated forest and airspace, his heart filled with boundless pride. He knew that his training in the outer regions had truly come to an end. Pidgeot had grown into a veritable king of the skies.
Pokemon: To The Top We Go!
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Is this AI? He already said in the part 1 of this chapter that they had left the outer regions. The repetition, run in sentences, and weird naming is feeling very clanker-esque to me.
Ren gripped Pidgeot's feathers tightly, feeling the biting wind high in the sky, and looked down at the subjugated forest and airspace, his heart filled with boundless pride. He knew that his training in the outer regions had truly come to an end. Pidgeot had grown into a veritable king of the skies.
Pokemon: To The Top We Go!
Anime & Comics · Re_noctis
Divine impact?
Without exception, they all perished in the Silver Wind and Divine Impact stirred up by Pidgeot.
Pokemon: To The Top We Go!
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Still no aura?
Choice specs would lock them into a move when carried.
Held Items: Choice Specs, Pidgeotite
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Is he not going to awaken his aura? I understand that it may effect the outside world, but it will make his stay here muuuuuuuch safer
I want to say the kid is Giovanni but that depends on the version
The box opened to reveal a stack of yellowed photographs—a child running in the yard, a family portrait at the front door, and an old man sunbathing in a rocking chair.
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original Welcome to the Akashic Records Office
A man get a second chance working as a contractor for the Akashic Records Office. See as he travels from world to world, as he saves worlds from corruption and occasionally picks up the groceries.15 Chs 308 Collections
He has aura now he can literally understand pokemon. Nothing subtle about the bond. Also where’s riolu? I understand the use of ai to write these days, but the issue with that is that ai hyper focuses and doesn’t account for background details from earlier parts of the story.
Through the subtle bond they had developed, he could feel Pidgeot's thoughts.
Pokemon: To The Top We Go!
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