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So he sacrificed himself and his soul to save everyone? View More
A True Beginning · C45
1 day ago
Nice bro. I just hope he can’t take off the stupid eye patch soon or get and eye replacement of sorts. View More
All Your Fault!!!! · C18
4 days ago
I like the premise but it’s very confusing. You should use grammarly, it’s free. There are just a lot of wrong words. View More

Translator_kun: Could u please specify what u can't understand so I could improve on that sorry to trouble hope u could understand this is my first novel

Pirate Fire Dragon · C1
6 days ago
What happened to the other 20 something chapters I just read....? View More
der Fortschritt · C19
1 week ago
Definitely can’t be called chaotic good. Deadpool is chaotic good. This is more some Kilgrave type stuff, chaotic evil. View More

Lord_Hallow: Sooooo he’s super holy and a descendent of god and all of these righteous people and he becomes a mass murdering rapist sociopath? This isn’t serial killer tendencies... it’s complete sociopathy. If that’s the case then okay for sure but let’s call it what it is. He has no humanity and is not completely corrupted.

Just shamelessly getting a harem! The Tale! · C3
1 week ago
Sooooo he’s super holy and a descendent of god and all of these righteous people and he becomes a mass murdering rapist sociopath? This isn’t serial killer tendencies... it’s complete sociopathy. If that’s the case then okay for sure but let’s call it what it is. He has no humanity and is not completely corrupted. View More
Just shamelessly getting a harem! The Tale! · C3
1 week ago
That’s a lot of sacred gears... and kind of superfluous. With his system all he needed was to learn skills that correspond with those gears. He has unlimited energy so he can just use magic and skills for everything. View More
Just shamelessly getting a harem! The Tale! · C1
1 week ago
Ahhhh but twilight vampires are ridiculously strong and he’s pretty much ungodly. They would destroy the Arrowverse. Most hero’s there aren’t that strong compared to other media. View More

Santos2724: If I have to choose i will go with arrow but the thing is that I think that arrow is to strong for them with flash,supergirl and what your gonna do about Alice twinkle twinkle ✨ under the sun 🌞 and let’s be real a heat vision could kill her and him very easy and I know that they won’t be bad but that’s a example of the power level in there so I think that they should go to teen wolf or the originals but if I have to chose from feary tale and arrow I chose arrow so keep the good work I like your story so far

Werewolf Lord through the multiverse · C0
2 weeks ago

GH0STS27: Personally, I would like to see them go to fairy tail first and then go to the arrowverse afterwards, but then again I would also be fine with them going to DC, But if they do go to the arrowverse, you would need to rewrite the last chapters to make it look like they were talking about going to DC instead of fairy tail.

P.S. Mixing live action and animated is fine, their both fiction so to most people, it shouldn't matter.

Werewolf Lord through the multiverse · C0
2 weeks ago
Somewhere not super modern society.... he’s been in the modern world for a while now. He can already smack down pretty much anyone in the arrow universe so it could be boring but you do whatever you think works bro View More
Werewolf Lord through the multiverse · C0
2 weeks ago
I love when he becomes Glanpa View More
Grandpa Universe In Multiverse · C110
2 weeks ago
One word: pensieve! View More
Harry Potter but AU??? · C64
4 weeks ago
What about the cool ass wolf pup! View More
Ascending to Supremacy · C73
1 month ago
Hmmmm he can, but then he won’t have the knowledge himself. If that’s the case he could just use the gemino charm on each book and then have them digitized.

He’s looking for knowledge but as you’ve pointed out, his undertaking is a little ambitious. As his work gets harder and harder, I’m sure he’ll figure out a better solution. Remember that right now he’s just started going through all the books and is already stressed out. I don’t think it’ll take much longer for him to build a machine to help him with it.

I didn’t want to involve too many elves yet since they are literally all of the best hax. View More

Weirdo: Hirm, can't he just go to ROR and demand for all the knowledge available in Hogwarts? Then ask some free elves to help him to copy all of it ...

Welcome to the Akashic Records Office · C15
1 month ago
Not yet ;) he’s still got Kreacher for now. But let’s be real... you don’t go to HP world without taking at least a few house elves View More

Weirdo: Hurm, he didn't try to hunt soem free house elves?

Welcome to the Akashic Records Office · C11
1 month ago
Still here! I should have a chapter up later tonight. I was having some trouble with getting what I wanted to say on paper. Stay tuned! 👍🏽 View More

55b06: Where did you go?

Welcome to the Akashic Records Office · C13
1 month ago

xcution409: hg wells sorry

Welcome to the Akashic Records Office · C13
1 month ago
When’s he gonna use them sweet sweet eyes though? View More
Gaara · C88
1 month ago
Yes! Thanks so much! I was thinking about Time Machine and wrote Wells down by accident.

I made the change now! I appreciate you letting me know. View More

xcution409: hg wells sorry

Welcome to the Akashic Records Office · C13
1 month ago
You must have read my mind SwiftWolf! View More

Swiftwolfbeta: He can use occlmency as an excuse because that **** needs a lot of concentration and visulation and being a scicon of a noble family of course he will be taught minde defense

Welcome to the Akashic Records Office · C12
1 month ago

Swiftwolfbeta: He can use occlmency as an excuse because that **** needs a lot of concentration and visulation and being a scicon of a noble family of course he will be taught minde defense

Welcome to the Akashic Records Office · C12
1 month ago
Thanks for the comment. I use grammarly, so if there are any grammar mistakes, please let me know.

Anyway, I appreciate the read! View More

JanEmmmm7: The Grammar may not be that good, but at the very least the story is interesting.

Welcome to the Akashic Records Office · C11
1 month ago
I agree... or a classic xianxia scenario where he makes it just in time to crash the wedding lol View More

YamataNoOrochi: I hope this is not something ****ty like forced marriage. If so then please inform it early cause i dont want to waste my precious time reading something forcefully. If not then please make it harem!!!!!!

Fairy tail: Transformation mage · C29
1 month ago

YamataNoOrochi: I hope this is not something ****ty like forced marriage. If so then please inform it early cause i dont want to waste my precious time reading something forcefully. If not then please make it harem!!!!!!

Fairy tail: Transformation mage · C29
1 month ago
Ahhhh but he's not the Black Heir. Maybe I should go about it with the idea that he has business ideas for them instead of the future knowledge. They wont just teach him because of cash money, I'm quite sure of that. Thats why i used the future knowledge. View More

amaturewriter: MC is black heir...so he can easily meet king, just dont tell he is from another world, also there is no reason for him to tell others about the secret ****,,,he can just do it himself...

Welcome to the Akashic Records Office
1 month ago
I appreciate feedback and I will go back and change the Ritual portion. Right now MC is still giddy about being able to world travel and hasn't had the reality of it all catch up with him yet. He's lived the cushy life of a pureblood back when there were many of them around.

MC is extremely smart thanks to the intelligence boost he purchased from Kevin but it letting that get away from him due to all of the excitement of being in a new world and how sheltered he is as a Black.

If you have any recommendations for how to go about the Goblin issue, I'm all ears! I was having a hard time with it because there is no way he would be given an audience with the Goblin King without going through some type of channel.

Also, I was planning to do exactly what you mentioned for spells using our world knowledge i.e instead of killing curse or others , use a spell to cause an aneurysm or a spell to induce appendicitis amidst battle instead of a tripping jinx.

The MC will get a more hardened personality as he go through Hogwarts and continues his world travel missions. There will be some romance but I have an idea for that but I can't implement it until the third world unfortunately or I'd have to mess with a ton of stuff turning him into a Gary Stu.

Thanks for explaining, I've been pouring all my Covid19 stay at time into this and have been having a blast writing it. I don't know if there is a direct message function on here, but if you have any ideas or changes that might help the story progress along better, please let me know! View More

amaturewriter: oh damn....dude I'll agree to disagree....look as I said smallest changes things, dosnt matter what

....also the goblins....moneytalks yes for normal ****,,,,NOT FOR THINGS THAT MAY CAUSE GREAT DANGER TO THE WORLD..I mean this dude just said he was a person here on the orders of a greater being..plus he told it to a chump,, not the leader, get what I mean..its retarded....

Then theres the rituals....dude, **** like this is hard and occumalancy,,,only handfull of people could do it, its cannon..I was ok with MC cause I like OP MC and he is an *****, but his bru,,,nah man,,,,**** will and ****,,,,that **** is hard, it needs talent and will and body, kids cant do it..also if a kid [ the bro ] could do it, its insulting to rituals..this is why I said you didnt research...only handful of people could do either of those things

Also MC's attitude is too lax, he dosnt have the character of a person on an important mission, he just seems like an ordinary SI.....**; that when I called him a *****..ignore it, was a mistake.

Look i suppose it might hurt you and seem cruel if just assume and undermine your ****, so I am sorry BUT again I've explained..

heres some suggestion:

-Dont undermine Magic or the magical world.........many FF;s say wizards will lose and are idiots for not using computers but its wrong, its just that they have no reason for **** like that....they can create mini dimensions [the bags, newts bag, hog warts, the tents,etc]....time travel, manipulate **** and teleport just to name a few...., I mean a child could easily fight a small group of muggles...or just release a dementor, they are done...get what I mean...dont undermine the magical society or the govt...I mean bash em if ya wont but dont tell they are weak

-Re-write, the magical scenes,,I;ve explained why above.

-Make MC use our world knowledge and use modern science to do ****, like atoms for transfiguration and ****..bio for healing or curses, chem for IDK, something....just use modern knowledge for anything he does [HP world and others]

-Make MC smart, like keep him OP, OP MC is dope.but make him hide it,,,,make him use his intelligence most of the time to crush enemies. Make dark, not evil or nutty,,,just dark,,,,also no perverted pansy...

-Add some romance and fluff, no massive harem or moms or just dont make the romance like some **** from DXD, build it.

-all worlds go before cannon...


Look I like you....you explained and talked politely,,,,,and I like your ****, mostly cause its way before cannon and its multiverse travel..so continue, just fix your mistakes...GL BRU...again sorry if I hurt ya

Welcome to the Akashic Records Office
1 month ago
His brother didn't do occlumency by the way. View More

amaturewriter: dude..MC is an ***** SI, stop making him and his bro dude the same ****,,,,honestly, how could a kid learn occumalancy or even with stand rituals,,,,,it weird man,,,,stop doing it..no bash..its stupid is all I am saying

Welcome to the Akashic Records Office · C5
1 month ago
Thanks for the positive review! I will make sure to do that more from now on. The MC hasn't really had a chance to use any of his abilities other than Arc of Embodiment and his Realm.... which I'm now realizing I haven't stated has time dilation.

Thanks for pointing this out constructively and letting me know where I can make improvements to my writing. *thumbs up* View More

TurquoiseTurtle: Your grammar is amazing and I love the characters. I also love how the story is progressing but I do think you need to go more in depth and explain things like his powers and abilities or the things he gets from Kevin.

Welcome to the Akashic Records Office
1 month ago

TurquoiseTurtle: Your grammar is amazing and I love the characters. I also love how the story is progressing but I do think you need to go more in depth and explain things like his powers and abilities or the things he gets from Kevin.

Welcome to the Akashic Records Office
1 month ago
I appreciate the feedback, so now if you would, I would like a chance at a rebuttal.

Let's go through these point by point.

1. Rituals - Orion Black made it through three rituals. It was clearly stated the reason that the MC had an issue is because of the compounding effect the rituals had on him. These are rituals all of the Black family goes through and while it may seem intense, it was more mentally so. This is about will power, they have nothing to worry about with a large intake of nutrient potions for energy and their own magic to ensure a smooth transition.

Also, where is it that states the MC was an ***** before he was hired?

2. The Goblins - The MC is a contractor. I don't know if you know what that entails, but they are employees of a company hired on through outside contracts. He gives no craps about whether or not they believe him. He is there to do a job and get training as this is his first mission. The only reason he is an SI is because he was a bodiless soul previously with this time period being a perfect opportunity to kill some birds with stones. In the context of the story, he offered the goblins proof and they believed him enough to teach him skills. They don't need to like each other, they don't need to trust each other. Money talks.

3. Obviously cannon won't be the same... this was one of the reasons why I chose this time period and to fix another SI's mistakes. Just because the MC thinks everything is going to be all hunky dory doesn't mean it actually is. This is technically his first time with multiverse travel and the effects of time travel. His nonchalant attitude was supposed to play into the story. No one knows the ins and outs of their job when they just start.

4. Harry and Voldemort - The MC was inserted into the world after Voldemort was born, 3 years after to be exact as Riddle was born in 1926. Whether Voldemort has a change of heart or if things are progressing down the timeline as they would have. As I said above, this is a learning experience for the MC and he needs to sift through all of changes to see if this are still what they seem. There are many impacts that could occur due to the SI's meddling, whether they be to Riddle, Dumbledore, or Grindlewald. Riddle could be dead now for all intents and purposes, which would just check the box next to his mission to complete.

The MCs simplistic attitude, as if he was a super protagonist in his own Gary Stu fanfic, is intentional. My point being that he needs to understand that the job is more serious then he thought. And that this isn't just a multiversal vacation.

And so you know, I did a lot of research for this world, as well as the ones coming up. I have a full notebook filled with timelines, issues that could arise, and various character and item profiles. I even took a Harry Potter literature course in college as a senior before I graduated.

I don't really appreciate how you gave my story a 1 star when you said it deserved 3 stars, but I appreciate your review nonetheless. As this is the first review I've ever gotten, at least it means someone is reading my story.

I will try to make sure the issues you stated are fleshed out more from now on, sometimes it's difficult to see any issues since I have the road map in my own head to follow along to.

If you would like to try and be an editor for my story, I would gladly welcome it. View More

amaturewriter: To any who thinks I am being cruel, I have explained.....

Actual rating 3...heres why I gave 1 :

-MC is an SI who was an *****, dude does 7 rituals and learns occumalancy by the time he is 5 or 6, ....now this is okay..BUT the thing is his brother does it too...the bro is a kid, he dosnt have the mentality to do it, ....its retarded.

-The main reason for one star...the dude just tells a normal goblin that he is an SI [just read C7 you'll understand what happens]....dude, the goblins in HP were beings that didnt acknowledge deathly hallows existed, you fucking think they'd believe that a greater being beyond a god would exist...fucking retarded....also what MC tells he is SI?, at best you tell lovers,,thats it...**** its stupid...no matter the retarded contract MC does, its still stupid, dosnt make sense

-theres more...the reason why MC came was to HP was fix the mistakes of another SI, ....the author thinks cannon is same, this is stupid!..ever heard of butterfly effects?

....do you know what happens?....HP's grand daddy dosnt exist, cause of the previous SI......this isnt butter fly,,,thats fucking mothra...cannon is ****ed,,,for all you know voldy is good cause he had a change of heart. So how will voldy exisit...I mean if HP dosnt exist the prophecy dosnt exist and even voldy wouldn't exisit [as I said before...voldy could;ve just died for no reason cause of butter fly effects]


Look, it would've been cool cause MC is way before cannon and its multiverse but all the retarded **** author does makes this trash, no bash, just the stupidity is annoying.,,,no basic research or thought


Delete this and I'll spam your ass author.

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