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fey*

"Why you confuse? You guessed right the first time. I am a fey witch!"

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1 years ago
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"Why are you confused? You guessed right the first time. I'm a few wizard"**** Maybe it is just me but the Grammer gets way worse when characters trash talk in this novel lol.

"Why you confuse? You guessed right the first time. I am a fey witch!"

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1 years ago
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Didn't he cast this on 100 orcs?

Emery needed a lot of focus to just channel the spell and order one root into moving, and it was even harder for Emery to control both at the same time. The lightning fast speed the little creature exhibited also did not help in his endeavor.

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1 years ago
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beat* not beated

"Hmm… oh? He beated Lodos too? Pretty amazing." The deputy head commented when he saw Lodos getting thrashed. "This boy fights with both wits and tenacity, no wonder the crowd likes him. However, the reason he managed to achieve first place was merely because of those people around him and his fortune."

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1 years ago
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Only 15? That isn't better than before is it?

[Battle power increase by 15]

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1 years ago
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cauterized* is burning a wound closed. Sterilized is killing bacteria, cleaning out dirt etc etc.

The thing Julian did for him really burned his spirit. Thrax slammed the spear into the ground, as he forced himself to stand and cast a tier 1 fire spell [Heat Touch]. As his hand glowed a red light, Thrax proceeded to burn his own shoulder. When his wounds had been sterilized, Thrax lifted his head and shouted in rage.

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1 years ago
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teams***

[Total team of group 7 :121 team]

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1 years ago
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Horrible name is horrible. Bad Emery.

Hearing the agreement from the loud bull, Julian then quickly addes, "Alright then, Earth Magus it is." Turning his head towards Chumo, Emery saw him nodding his head in agreement.

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1 years ago
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I added it to my read list but I won't start it until it has a lot more chapters + regular updating. Been burned on way too many novels that stop around chapter 100 due to the author dropping it.

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1 years ago
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Ah. apologies. there are just some weird word choices. "A few walk beyond the large tree". "a few steps beyond" or "A short walk beyond" would be better. Translation novels do that often where they try to translate and it doesn't work right (few/short, walk/steps). Hence the confusion. There are a few places where you have that awkward wording in your book. Still loving it though!

"Ahh, yes dear. Could you kindly find me a couple of purple leaves from the herb garden? It's just a few walk beyond the large tree behind the hut. The dried ones here won't work for this man."

Earth's Greatest Magus

Earth's Greatest Magus

Fantasy · Avan