Alright I’ll give it a try cus cyberpunk is one of my 2 favourite styles along with steampunk and the characters are very well written I just can’t stand the fluff
I got to chapter 39 and dropped it. A few problems to many that make it a bit to boring for someone like me. 1 it’s written like it’s made by ai which isn’t the main problem but the fact that it contains sooo much waffle between every sentence there are is a sentence the describes the previous or the next one think like “he opened his mouth like it was the first time “I’m hungry” he bellowed like speaking to the heavens”. I get that this is a writing skill used to emphasise certain lines BUT THIS STORY USES IT EVERY DAMN LINE. It get boring and annoying. Second u give the uses one op system that basically makes him the strongest person in the verse maybe if he had to unlock it lvl 1-6 but no he can straight go to lvl 5 without delay with it only damaging his body, making all combat a bit boring. The story is also just a bit boring the two mc so far are actually quite well written but maybe it’s the fighting style but dialogue just annoys me😂 and it took the story in just a really non interesting direction. Honestly most of these problems wouldn’t turn me off the story but the writing style is sooooooo damn annoying it makes it basically unreadable.
Is the author okay?
Wait why is he mad at the larkinsons?
"That is somewhat true. We are still allies, but Master Benedict Cortez is not in a mood to collaborate with us at the moment. He may mellow out in a few years, and we can always bribe him with enough superdimensional matter, but I would rather look for alternatives."
The Mech Touch
Sci-fi · Exlor
Is it just me or is ves gettting dumber relative to anyone else?
He skimmed through them quickly but quickly got lost in all of the dense jargon, mathematical formulas and complicated theories.
The Mech Touch
Sci-fi · Exlor
Sooo star designers are acutelly more op than I thought 🤣 nice I thought all the hype stemmed from their brain and resources but no they actually
Ves had never heard of a method of fooling people by connecting a figment of your own imagination to the intended target!
The Mech Touch
Sci-fi · Exlor
I thought she grew out of this?
Gloriana scowled but did not argue the point any further. Being told to choose between the two male Star Designers was like trying to choose between two unpalatable meals.
The Mech Touch
Sci-fi · Exlor
I forgot these guys are giant 🐱
"Do not listen to the Larkinsons who are blind enough to think that we can keep tempting fate by ourselves. Recognize reality!" The campaigner shouted! "The new frontier has become more dangerous than ever, and only by seeking shelter from the Cybernetic Empire will we be able to guarantee our lives! Have you heard the amazing tech the Polymath and the Cybers invented during their Time of Isolation?"
The Mech Touch
Sci-fi · Exlor
This has probably been the best 5 chapter in the past 1 year
It’s not it’s a flat power system and this is just something the author keeps saying for some reason
In actuality, a person's talent remains the same, and apart from the fact that one would have no limit and their training speed increased, the [Seed of limit] did not help in regards to actual talent.
The Author's POV
Fantasy · Entrail_JI