malhiharjot - Profile

Writer only have one good ability, one and only ability to brag about and stretch anything to make it long enough to made one chapter out one single line ,some time make two chapters from one single line. Last 10 or so should be one chapter and author Bragg and stretch them into 10 or many more chapters.

It was very good story but in the last few chapters writer just lost the rhythm and write it down anything like becoming king of all gods stealing godhood from other something.he should have keep it down to more human or super human lèvel or magic, instead of godhood stuff or spamming dragon fire on every thing without actual fights.

I was hoping he can accept his promotion to jonin with village pressure or compromise something and it's a good set back for his character development instead of going everything all right no matter the situation.either way it's a very good story.👍

It's very good story,l like the system because it did not make him superman and still with in humans limit. May be add some sacrifice some stuff

Haha one year able to make ring and negotiate lol ......... Why not 2 year older or younger then kushina, at least try to make little bit believe able. Lol anything .............

Result- how to become a good side kick of Harry Potter ,that should be a title of the story.. he just replaces Ron with a better version . ................ .........................................................

Writer should start writing songs instead of fanfic, no really really anything now Read the lyrics of songs in fanfic........................... . ............................ .

Only able to read first two chapters and not able proceed further,only for mental age 6 to 7 year, move further with caution. Idiots who give this story more then 3 or 4 stars.

Very good story,but fast paced one .it would have been very good if it has more detailed view or made cross over earlier..''.......''''.............................................'''''

It's a very good story and I like it,but at the starting MC was portrait as knowledgeable from different lives, why not make him also magic knowledge researcher from this life. Blood magic, shadow bender , skin changer or other stuf

To much praises for main character and freaking doing kisss at the age 11 year and in the 19's and from English girl,and freaking with 20 year old man, what a jerk.

Why is the writer crazy about quidditch game and broom , why not make his own with the freaking all knowledge about modern physics or other business stuff and make his family strong with other strong warding or enchanting something.

He just made over power god so that MC can do anything he want without any story, it's like who's the enemy, don't care we have a OP MC . that's it.

Freaking joke 🤣.in the name of HP fanfic, selling chicken nuggets lol fry potatoes In school...... ...........'........'''............................................................'...

#Chapter 11,Reparo charm for repair and author write it for cold to make his coke chilled. I don't even know,if I read next few chapters , if writer going to make same easy to search mistakes. Can somebody tell me,is it same in other chapters to?

It could have been any character but Naruto in to avatar lol nah leave a bad taste in your mouth.........,,................n . ..... ....,.......... .......................... .

It's very well written story and if we forget about Harry Potter instead use him as power template with new character. No fanfic writer put that much work in the story like that. They just copy paste the original story with small new op character tweaks.

Here we go again why no body make at least one good fire demon story instead of cheap hand dropouts.how many times he can f**k others in one story..............................

Why not this writer just write million, billion, trillions,or 1x, 2x,then 0000000000000.. 2nd why not develop phenix fire power teleportation from marvel that which is at least believable.1 to 10 chapter buying spreee this and that.

Not bad .. better then doing nothing only writing down same story as series rather then creating own little bit story. Give it go .just forget the age other cringe stuff or skip that part