AJTP

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2018-09-15 Joined Global
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AJTP
AJTP
4 years ago
Posted

fun premise but the guy only makes sabers for 80+ chapters. You make a story interesting by including special weapons. The guy makes slightly different sabers for 80 chapters

AJTP
AJTP
4 years ago
Posted

Cannot even be bothered to proofread a synopsis lol. This is so bad and its getting sad, when something gets too stupid and ridiculous it's not even funny anymore

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AJTP
AJTP
4 years ago
Posted

Sounds like the same cringe trash that I have seen a dozen times, some people like the boring and predictable but please add something good for once.

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AJTP
AJTP
4 years ago
Posted

This novel feels ripped of another. Main character with weak stats, main character with special identification skill, main character forms a team with a big guy to survive the "tutorial", main character meets super strong crazy female, main character meets a regreszor and decides to team up with him, those points are from another novel. Read this one and tell me if the point I alluded to above are real.

AJTP
AJTP
4 years ago
Posted

Best trial read novel in months Best trial read novel in months Best trial read novel in months Best trial read novel in months Best trial read novel in months

AJTP
AJTP
4 years ago
Replied to Tomiwa_Banjo_3789

the raw is extremely different and way worse

AJTP
AJTP
4 years ago
Posted

It's better than the average trial read novel by a lot. The world is interesting, the writing quality is good. Feels so weird to have a good novel in trial read. This category has been plagued by brain-dead stories and tropes and the first 20 chapters of this one looks good. I hope this keeps going and this review doesn't end up looking trollish.

AJTP
AJTP
4 years ago
Posted

Author here! I have just started and am open to to criticism and advice, so if you have any please share. I am not a 100 percent sure where I will take this novel so if you have suggestions don't hesitate

AJTP
AJTP
4 years ago
Replied to JoSauer

Have you tried reincarnation of the strongest sword god ?

AJTP
AJTP
4 years ago
Commented

the time before christ, the time before slavery.... you gotta love those novels

Instead, they regressed to the time before Christ, to the time of slavery. They might even be said to have returned to the time of primitive societies that was far older than the era of slavery and wherehumans still acted like savages. 

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