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In my last life, I can't live the life that I want. in this Life, I shall live to my fullest. As a playboy Ninja, I shall kidnap the beautiful heroine from their own world. ...... this story is a Harem story, so if you truly despise Harem Novel, do not try to read it. Multidimensional world, with Naruto world as MC's homeworld. broken Grammar, kindly ask you to help me fix my broken grammars
Brezer: So every chapter nobody wants the fiancee in the story but she seems to keep showing up. Just digging the hole deeper and with him needing 1 wife and 4 concubines her personality wont work. The better choice would be the princess since she was raised around that environment.Super Emperor System · C32
southgamez: I I don't know... I like her as well but I feel shes a bit softhearted for SorenTraversing the Anime Multiverse with a System · C37
animes_vitions: You are going to make him hokage level at 13 aren't you?Dimensional Playboy Ninja · C0
NulZilch: There's nothing called space nature in naruto world. It all about seals and eye techniques. Minato upgraded flying thunder technique of tobirama which was based on summoning. And chakra control better than tsunade at 3-4yrs age? Does he even have any standard to compare it with? Might guy become one of the strongest person in naruto by hard work, and you can't get yours strong without any bull****ting?
You character don't have to act cringy/creepy towards girls. "Princess" "my waifu" it's all too cringy and creepy. Kids don't understand love of that kind. You can just have them act as normal friend build base for it, and can go for romance later. No need to include forced plot events like hyuga ninja attacking a normal civilian boy for talking to hinata(lmao, seriously?), and now the is kid actually going to stop a grown ass kumo ninja from kidnapping a girl(lmao again, please don't go the route of kyubi festival where civilians beat up naruto and hokage is evil who took all his inheritance). Hinata fell for naruto because he inspired her to never give up despite failing everytime and
being constantly ridiculed for it, not because he was some kid ninja god. Romance is simple, just write a common one where a guy or girl ask each other out for date if you can't think of anything. Ninja clans don't stop girls or guys marrying outside of clan, especially when the other party is a strong ass ninja.Dimensional Playboy Ninja · C0
ChikaYo: I don’t really care about Charlotte unusual ‘lover’ or whatever it is, what i don’t like is her attitude..
1. She doesn’t explain anything to James.
2. She doesn’t give James a chance to talk to her at all.
3. She is James fiancee but she keep avoiding him.
4. Without a conversation, how can their relationship start? If she doesn’t understand a simple things like that it just mean she’s still a kid and doesn’t deserve the Queen seat.
So yeah, even a woman with hidden motive like Amira is far better than Charlotte in my opinion.. Just reading Charlotte attitude towards James when he try to improve their relation already make me mad.. 😅Super Emperor System · C22
NotYourCat: You know author, she already becomes the most hated character in not even 20 chapters, and I know that you intended to make her become a major character...
But I just want to remind you, in all novels with the mc have a fiancee on the first few chapters, almost all of that MC's fiancee is a *****. And your introduction of charlotte's character is just like what the majority of that novel introduced the fiancee characters.
It'll actually okay if you make the mc ignore her, but you wrote it as like MC in love with her just because of her appearance, and make the reader really hate that the mc care about someone who likely becomes a potential ***** fiancee like other novel...
I hope the best for this novel, and it is up to you what you want to do to Charlotte, and if you really want to make her the main heroine, I hope you make it so that the reader will not hate, or get annoyed at her. Well, from the comments that I read is actually the majority of your reader already hate her tho...Super Emperor System · C22
Super Emperor System · C22
Burn_To_Ash: Let's just forget Charlotte and move on. I think Amira is the best girl. I don't like CharlotteSuper Emperor System · C22
NotYourCat: Just don't make mc become a horny dick and chased her skirt like a loser. actually, I really like MC's personality, and like what I commented on in the previous chapter, the mood killer of this novel is Charlotte.. MC should realize that if the girl doesn't want him why the F he should chase her skirt like a loser, he is a king, and it'll be easy for him to find a woman... If the reason he chased her is love at first sight... it is bull**** reason...Super Emperor System · C22
Super Emperor System · C22
《Strongest Furuichi》 · C19
NotYourCat: The only downside of this novel is the MC's fiancee, it is a mood killer for me and I almost stopped to read this novel because of it, you should change or make a conclusion about his fiancee, or throw her away from the story asap.Super Emperor System · C20
Super Emperor System · C20
ThatGuy1: Finally! The day after tomorrow has come..*crying tears of joy*《Strongest Furuichi》 · C16
SleepyBoiYudo: The day after tomorrow is longer than I thought.《Strongest Furuichi》 · C16
NotYourCat: Wtf, this novel become a xianxia,
Author, please just skip this arc already, it's fvckin borringDragonBall X: The Ultimate System [Re-Mastered] · C63
DragonBall X: The Ultimate System [Re-Mastered] · C63
Chado_Sama: Lol, will have another Chapter out tomorrow. Have a bit of time this week, so will hopefully be able to post four.How Much For Your Soul? · C46
2ndStudent: Because all the gamer in comment section wamt to feel superioir to the MC who, if you don't already know, IS NOT A GAMER
Really people, it's like cussing a sparrow which can't swimOnly I level up · C16
BOGEYMAN: Dont bother with that one author, he always fight with others especially when some berate/ judge his works. When you're giving an honest review to his works one way or another it will always be deleted so that keeps his works at higher star review. Always reboot his works and want more and more patreons even if he doest even have one finished work. His works are either edgy, characters are too dark and cringy, too much force plot so that it will follow the canon or something that he wants, too much op at the beginning then nerf them again and again ,and sometimes too rushed and always reboot them in the end. If I'm not mistaken his other account is the HaremGodZ besides this Ghostyz.Absolute Stealing · C23
NihilisticBeauty: The more you believe in something, the more it'll happen.
This guy believes he's destined for averageness. If he actually tried, and believed that he could do something, he would've done fine. His household is well off enough, from what I saw of the first chap. Employee of a big company.
Yup, if the author didn't decide to write about his sorry arse, he would definitely have stayed a loser edgelord.Requiem of Souls (Original) · C6
artemdeus: Add android 18 to the harem he can make gold out of thin air he's practically a sugar daddy😉DragonBall X: The Ultimate System [Re-Mastered] · C48
Stephen16: Author, that would be epic,entertain the thought pleaseHow Much For Your Soul? · C42
《Strongest Furuichi》 · C15
NotYourCat: The next chapter will be....
Around next year...
🤔🤔🤔🤔Harry Potter And The Rise Of Golden Falcon · C61
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