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After a bit more discussion, it was almost time to eat dinner so Vahn had told Anubis to ready the other children for the bath. The moment he gave what was previously a 'normal' order, Tina immediately shouted out before Anubis could comply, "No~nya! Unacceptable! Vahnya will never be able to develop restraint like that~nya!" Anubis looked at the small cat girl that was 'lecturing' her in a stern, albeit excited, tone.

Endless Path : Infinite Cosmos

Endless Path : Infinite Cosmos

Anime & Comics · Einlion

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I mean... 7 inches is quite insane... 4 inches is already quite big... probably in that ball park...

Hearing this, Michael grins to himself in satisfaction and begins taking his own clothes off, leaving the two both naked atop the bed. Her eyes were almost as intense as his were as she watches him undress, her eyes eventually locking onto his lower member. It wasn't anything crazy, but it wasn't small either. Either way, Tiffania didn't know the difference as her hand carefully begins caressing it, almost causing him to release.

Unbound Familiar

Unbound Familiar

Video Games · Niggross

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Thank you so much for your in-depth feelings on it so far! It means the world to me. I think the cringe lines(No excuses though) are from me being a relatively new writer tbh. I understand where you are coming from completely and I am trying to get better as I go but man is it hard. I do want to answer some of your statements however as I feel like it might be useful for other readers to know as well as yourself. I made a mistake when first bringing Tina into the story and I have tried to amend that by making her more tolerable. I, personally, like her character now though I understand others may not. The only reason she wanted MC to not attack the group at the hospital was that they were the ones that saved them in a sense. She loses this empathy quite quickly however and understands that survival is more important than trying to make the right choice in a situation. I noticed that almost all of the strong characters were related to Lucas so I have been trying to add some foreign characters that don't even appear within Lucas's line of sight in the meantime. I only wanted some characters to connect to him because I thought it would be good for the story in the short and long term. As for the high-level monsters appearing randomly... I have no excuse for... It was just me being a poor writer in the beginning. I try and explain some of the future ones and make explanations on why Lucas can find them but for the beginning, it really makes no sense with the night cat. I also plan on there being much more to Lucas's crafting ability but he actually has to develop as a person before he finally comes to the realization of just how powerful it can be. He is stupid. I'm trying to show growth but it will take time for his stupid monkey brain to progress to at least a middle grader's level lmao. The change should happen relatively soon after the current chapter I have written however so that is good.

ch 16 Chapter 16: Survivors and Newb Hero

Infinite Evolution in The Apocalypse

Infinite Evolution in The Apocalypse

Fantasy · maddaug

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Thank you lol!
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Good deactiptions!
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Man i hope my future isnt like thi….
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I fixed it. Thank you for pointing that out!
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