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king_frosh
male LV 12For the many of you who enjoy my work be it the fanfictions or the Original novel and choose to support me, https://ko-fi.com/comicplug
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1. The many bracketed thoughts were unnecessary. You could do the Author's Notes after the entire chapter. 2. I don't know if it's because I translated it but the chapter is too jam packed 3. Also yes, the powers are too much. The best formula for a Fanfiction is to 1. Have an idea of how you want the story to end 2. Pick one superpower... Overpowered or not... It should be impactful meaning it should be powerful but flexible. Meaning you can use it for all you want without anyone complaining at some point
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hermanos parker
Anime & Comics · Xlr8_Chad
I haven't read them but I will do so today but not... I will comment on where I think you can work on Using the Paragraph comments
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I am James Kent
Movies · king_frosh
Sure, I'm always free to help
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It's still here on Webnovel... Just search I am James Kent (New) Its still under the same name and as for the new account... The name is 5imply_lucid
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I am James Kent
Movies · king_frosh
At least bro says it plainly
"I'm not a hidden expert, nor do I understand the methods of martial arts cultivation. You got the wrong person. I am also looking for someone to teach me martial arts!"
I Fabricated the Techniques, but my disciple really mastered them?
Eastern · Half a clear breeze
If I tell you that I forgot I was writing this would you believe me
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I am not Cyborg (Old)
Anime & Comics · king_frosh
I am moving all of my fanfictions to that account This should be for all my original novels. . So I know if I log in here, I am to focus on that
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It is now
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5imply_lucid
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5imply_lucid
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At that point, it's more of a coma than a death They state it that he is alive hut they had no idea how to actually bring him back to functional state The mauler twins was simply trying their luck and it worked
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because he actually can't
ch 117 Mors?
Deus: We are all Lords
Fantasy · king_frosh
Naturally
Of course, he didn't have any plans of doing so, he saw no purpose to it. There were millions of Orc, goblin and Elven settlements out there so why waste energy on creating them when he could just capture them and evolve them into what he wanted.
Deus: We are all Lords
Fantasy · king_frosh
The Guardians limited their genetic potential not their technological potential They are still very much on per with Kryptonians in terms of technology The difference is that theirs hasn't been explored as much
"Oh!.... I can do that with ease" James said with pride, he didn't need to know the exact plaque this was to know that he could easily defeat it after all the level of his technology was approaching a ridiculous level but what James was concerned about was the fact that Martian technology was useless before this plaque.
I am James Kent
Movies · king_frosh
If you are complaining about him not shaking the ancient one then you may be mistaken a bit The MCU Ancient one m is implied to be as old as Thor who is 1500 years old or possibly older because Odin references her Now she is also a woman who has scoured through time in ways, even Strange hasn't... Stopped her own death multiple times as she tells strange until that absolute point being the hospital scene. Now, she is also a powerful sorcerer who even Odin acknowledges... Mental arts would be basic to her So now mix multiple timeline views, mind reading, thousands of years of forgetton knowledge and lost time lines... That's the ancient one Compared to 200 years (Logan) Jean Grey (20 years) Xavier at max (500 years) None of them at this point in their lives had met anything with memories in the thousands of years MC could barely handle the minimum output from the Celestial ship and Ship was actively limiting what he could get meaning he only got around 1.2% of its thousands of years worth of knowledge Now he wants to absorb knowledge from someone who can't limit it and has knowledge going back (or forwards) billions of years due to her use of the time stone What do you think would happen?
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Marvel: Psychomimetic
Anime & Comics · king_frosh
Yes but even that fact came from President Superman He lost his powers and is still able to lift up to a ton or two under duress Also Clark has proven that his abilities are sort of tied to his mental state. He has flown in front of a red star that was surrounded by kryptonite asteroids before. So it's best to say that his weaknesses only work when the author wants it to
"Aren't the kryptonians under the red sun, just normal humans" James asked himself surprised.
I am James Kent
Movies · king_frosh
Lol
After a bit more explaining, he posted it on every social media platform he knew that had pages for such things. Twitter, Facebook, Quora, Reddit, etc. He posted it everywhere and hoped that the people on the internet would give him a suitable answer by tomorrow.
Cosmic Editor
Fantasy · king_frosh
He did but he was careless against her
Turns out that after all he had done to be mindful of the fact that all other lords had access to mysterious and powerful abilities too, he would be the one to fall to such an obvious mistake
Deus: We are all Lords
Fantasy · king_frosh
I posted a link to the Fandom Discord Server Rather than the one for my fanfic However you can still join both. One is meant to be bigger than the other One is just for my small fanfiction community
Moving (wrong server)
I am not Cyborg (Old)
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