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Kek got ntr'ed again big rip for our boy my lads. Anyways, the writing and grammar would need some work except that I find no other problem in this FF about a certain shithole of a server with insane members in it

It's interesting to see the protagonist having unique quirks along with interesting abilities. The way it started off really piqued my interest as I wanted to know more about how the mc will survive while being stuck in the body of that Barbara stalker lmao . I was impressed with how the plot progressed and also how shrewd, enigmatic and humorous the MC is really in this novel. I'm absolutely hooked on to this ff and interested in reading future chapters

Don't talk like you hate it or smtg Nanashi smh

Writing quality would require some work done to immerse the readers into the story more but except that, I find this to be a good start for a new author and let's pray that this novel reaches it's full potential. Also, I find this stream commentator "thesexer" to be quite an interesting person especially when he asks the FML for some feet pics.