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First off, I want to say my taste in wns is like a kid who only wants to eat MC Donald's. Interpret that how you want, but the basis is I don't normally read wns that are more slice of life focused. I'll start with what I like. The MC feels very real and has made me smile with his choice and accidental actions on more than one occasion in the first 2 chapters. I didn't see any grammar errors and the sentences felt smooth. To top it off, I'm a big fan of first-person novels. I think they are harder to right well, and the author has done a great job. Now to the criticism. While it does a good job of expressing who the MC is, I felt pushed away when the MC played video games for a combination of almost an entire chapter. While the results were quite funny to me and almost made the time spent playing the video games worth it, they were then rushed and confusing. After the MC woke up, I thought I had skipped a page or something. I'd have also appreciated it if Feng Qing's actions and how they met up were explained more than a joke about plot armor.
Book Title: The Young Master’s Idol Agency (Aimzay) Chapters 5/5 as of 5/29/22 Plot: Good Plot is a unique concept for a novel, Dude reincarnates into a web novel as a mob trash character. He then gets kicked out of his home for reasons. And meets the novels protagonist by accident. He notices she is trying to make money from streaming. And rationalizes that he can conquer the world by using Vtuber culture and the bombshell of an FL. Story flow: Convoluted Chapters are short, and pacing is a bit too fast. As in fast. Half the time I was lost what was happening. But overall, its only the 1st few chapters and the breezing through was to setup the main chunk of the novel the Vtuber culture. With Chapter 5 being the 1st taste, it appears like a awkward fit but we need to see where the author intends to lead us with this story. Favorite Chapter: Chapter 4 Ally Acquired? We finally met our MC. Beautiful and powerful as a cultivator. Straight to a fault and is wholly likable and proceeds to give her background she is struggling financially and trys to make money by streaming. She is not doing well. Luckily we have the MC. Favorite Character: Feng Qing Beautiful female lead, powerful cultivator and streams. Lol what is not to like. 3 things I liked 1. Vtuber Cultivator A very unique concept as cultivators is known to withdraw for cultivating sessions for long periods of time. However, them being arrogant individuals with loads of things to show off does in deed match being a vtuber. 2. Cultivators with Technology Another interesting concept, technology allows people to do thing beyond their normal capabilities. Cultivators improve their bodies and minds towards to limit to increase its ability. When would Cultivators use technology and when would they not. 3. TheSe*er Dude has a line in the novel, but is extremely noteworthy and hilarious, not for everyone though. 3 Things I didn't like 1. Short chapters Chapters are extremely short. Not enough to go on per chapter. 2. Pacing is too fast Pacing is very fast, not sure if its due to wanting to get to the good bits, but at 5 chapters the number of changes in chapter 1 to 3 are almost the entire plotlines of some books. 3. No background information on cultivation The concept of Vtuber Cultivators is the selling point, but not enough info is given for the cultivation aspects. Hard to follow or understand if the characters are strong or not. Actual review Unique concept and interesting premise, grammar and style of writing is good. Pacing for 1st 5 chapters is lightning fast. Will need to see if promise for meshing of Vtuber world and cultivation worlds are good.
Writing Quality- The writing quality is better then most I've seen on wn, but that doesn't account for much since there is a lot of trash writing here. The writing is a breath of fresh air compared to all the hot garbage that is usually on this app. Stability of Updates- The author said that they would want to upload daily but couldn't due to irl stuff so i'll give them the benefit of the doubt and leave it as irl things getting in the way of writing. Story Development- too early in the story. Character Design- Not much to complain about here, I hope that as story progresses the characters don't drop in quality World Background- So far the world seems very interesting and new. The integration of greek mythology, cultivation and systems is a unique take on all genres.
Writing Quality- 9/10 Updating Stability- 1/10 Story Development- 9/10 Character Design- 10/10 World Background- 9/10 Overall an amazing book! It has all the elements I look for while reading any web novel! I highly recommend this gem to everybody and anybody!
Chapters read: 5/5 Writing Quality: Pretty good its easy to read and it flows nicely Updates: ... Development: The plot seems a bit over the place at the start, but i guess its more of a gag type of approach? Character Design: Gorgeous Cover mate, also from what I have seen so far I have high hopes! World Background: Cultivation + Sci-Fi + Livestreaming ... amazing combo.
Great start, I already find my self laughing when Mc said something about find a toothbrush😂😂. Well I can see great potentials, so keep up the good work author
The novel is interesting and the slice of the little comedy was good. It's entertaining to red knowing how straightforward the MC..Overall I like this novel! thank you for writing this author!!
The chapters are clean and I can't see a typo it's my first time reading a story about cultivation but im sure that it's unique to any of the cultivation plots that I read before 5/5 on everything except updating stability 3/5 in looking forward for the next chapters
This is a really good story, what's nice about it is its characters, the writing quality is good yet could use a little bit of editing, there is not much to say about the story as yet since it only just started but from it, i can tell you that i will be good.
Well, this story is still in it's early stages so my review may be flawed. The writing quality is okay. story development,I can't say much since there's only one chapter. the updating stability is also fine. the author already mentioned he's quite busy with other projects so he can't be faulted. the world background is only sparsely explained but I know that's only because the book just started. this book, like the author's book has potential. I can see it. hope it's not dropped.
OVERALL - I liked The Young Master’s Idol Agency and I would definitely recommend this to others. PLOT - It was simple yet surprisingly complex. I felt like the author is going on a spoof comedic tone but I assume there is also chance for action. CHARACTERS - MC Gu Ling has a system and it is not a complex system. He has the potential to grow and as far as I read, he seems likable which is far more than I could say for some other novels. Since the novel has only 5 chapters, there isn't much space for the other characters to shine. it's not in any way a bad thing. Every character needs time and space for them to grow and I feel the characters in this novel would become three dimensional well-defined characters. PACING - Pacing was fast, almost too fast. My humble opinion is that the author should slow down a bit and describe the world around and what the characters were thinking a little bit more. It'd be great if we see more third person view. IMMERSION - As I mentioned above, because of the first person view, I feel like many things that could be done better are missing. 'Show, not tell' the author should take more time establishing the world around and the characters to make us immerse. Don't take it that I didn't immerse myself, I just want to get immersed more which the author can definitely do. EDITING - There are no major grammar mistakes or story flaw errors that interrupted my reading. Granted I'm not a native English speaker but I enjoyed my reading without a problem
A good story, I even thought that his little brother was cute then surprise (lol) I was confused on the first half but I was able to grasp it and like I mentioned it is a great story, especially the amount of comedy
Okay this was pretty good,..but I don't read such kinds of novel's though.. The world building is still in progress,, The MC is kinda interesting. Over all it's a good novel
A romance genre definitely my kind of book type, I like the characters lol each time I was reading this book it felt like reality and that's the best part of it,I loved the story, a little editing here and there will do but this won't stop me from begging for chapters will it lol? Readers !! ya'll need to check this book out.try it and you won't regret reading it.I[img=recommend]
The novel is good, the characters are flowing and I like your character building, I recommend it, good work author. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
It took me a while to get where this was going, but once it clicked, I couldn't stop grinning and chuckling. I would love to read more about the protagonist's relationship with his family, but this is only the beginning, so I guess I gotta be patient .
The story was interesting and the writing style of the author is different. I really enjoyed reading this story. Good work author, keep it up.
The story has a nice start and the grammar is honestly very good which I appreciate a lot... ( Mine's not that good😅 ) Anyways the world building is still in progress as it will only get better in later chapters... I hope you continue writing the book!
Obligatory author review! Pros and cons, QnA and something else Pros: No ha- rem 1st person Decent sized chapters Slice of Life(until something) (Trying to make em) >2D charas NO SYSTEM(despite what the reviews say 😭) Cons- If irl stuff happens, I’ll miss updates Not fully slice of life Story Pacing Overall, this + synopsis should give you a good outline of how this’ll go