Webnovel Author: Grimm_Mason - Novel Collection

Hello, I am and the editor of this story so of of course this review will have some type of bias. Plus the writer is my brother sooo... Anyways, I have read the first one hundred chapters, albeit not edited and practically a glorified mtl, but nonetheless it has subtracted little from the story. It is not the greatest story, but it is Kane's first novel so I will say for a first it is amazing. The writing quality is good because of ya boi Grimm, so no doubts there. The updating stability should be fine since it has been written a hundred chapters in advance, so five stars. Story development will never be perfect, but I love the pace it has. Going from a humble beginning to the world stage without issue and smoothly. Character design is great for the characters that matter, while the ones that don't still have their quirks and such. My favorite character Ezekiel will not show up for a while and I will not spoil the story so its a shame, but I have absolutely no problems with the harem members that appear since they act and feel real. They have their own opinions, and don't just agree with the MC and follow like good dogs, they have their goals too. World background is a four out of five stars as it seems to not take too much of a focus, but I am biased and will give it five stars to help boost views. However, some of the environments are awesome, the rune beasts are not just simple animals and have unique powers, and each city is very distinct from one another. Overall, my favorite part of the story is when Kane creates his artfacts with cool abilities, the harem and its fun, the battles, and my number one favorite thing is the power system. Simple enough to understand, but diverse enough to stay interesting throughout. I recommend giving the first twenty chapters a try before dropping, and I also recommend giving it a try depsite the harem if you dislike such a thing. Thanks 3 thousand for reading this long review, I appreciate it. -Grimm