Premise sounds unique. couple of constructive criticism . 1. Use some online grammer check. 2. Conversation between MC and his mom sounds to rigid. it should be natural as it's between mother and her son . But apart from that . It's looks interesting .
ch 0 1 Myriad Mountain
Action · LivingVoid
It would make more sense if MC has background in gaming. So all the decision he takes like choosing Pandora Box and understanding his stats. Makes more sense
ch 0 2 Wild Expanse
Cosmic Peak
Action · LivingVoid