Incredible showdown, amazing work author.
Brother... the jealous "prince" thats antagonize and assaulted him twice? He literally shot him in the back. Where's this supposed brotherhood coming from all of a sudden?
But first, he had to deal with Theon—his brother in all but blood, now his enemy by choice and circumstance. The boy who'd been jealous of Kole's place in the Stark family, who'd chosen Iron Islands heritage over Northern loyalty, who now threatened everything Kole had sworn to protect.
TV · Fanfic_Writer1
It seems like he purposely stays away from the ones at the most risk of dying. Then cries about not being able to change it.
"I couldn't save Ned. But Robb, Arya, Bran, Rickon—I'll save them or die trying. I swear it on whatever brought me here, whatever force gave me these abilities, whatever destiny I'm supposed to fulfill."
TV · Fanfic_Writer1
Jet Li. Unleashed
Danny remained expressionless, seemingly unfazed by Orlov's blunt description of his past. Perhaps the environment in which he had grown up had not afforded him much opportunity to express or even process emotions. John touched his chin thoughtfully; the man bore a passing resemblance to a kung fu superstar from his previous life.
Movies · MeowthTL
This is actually a pretty genuinely interesting scenario that I don't think I've ever seen in MC be in.
The horror bloomed inside him like a cold flower.
Anime & Comics · Milk_Is_My_Drug
I recognize I believe most of these and I love it. It's really hitting me in the nostalgia, the whole novel does really. I'd only advise that you be careful not to add too much Because it can get a bit messy to keep track and you might write yourself into a corner by being too ambitious.
Personally, I find it rather refreshing. It's actually been a long time since I've read a "true hero" MC character like this. Most SI stories have the MC be at least "gray/neutral" with most leaning towards flat out sociopathic killers that murder people left and right for personal gain or just because they looked at them funny and have the power to do so. Seeing a genuinely powerful MC (or at least, one with a powerful powerset) that tries to be a more traditional hero archetype as opposed to becoming some power-hungry, selfish, harem king overlord is frankly a breath of fresh air. If I wanted a "darker" MC I could read literally any other Marvel SI, since thats practically the default setting they usually take in my experience.
All I want to say is that if you don't like that Wyatt is trying to be a good person and a hero who doesn't kill, then you might as well drop the story. I have written eleven chapters ahead of this one, and Wyatt/Atomic will continue being this way. He is striving to be an ideal hero. But that doesn't mean he will be perfect. He will stumble, he will fall, but he'll keep trying. That's the kind of character I want to write.
Movies · TikTak012
Unfortunately they're all R18 and basically the same scene, just stretched out for more chapters than strictly necessary.
[Three Chapters for Today.]
Book&Literature · shadowauthor0208
Funny, I've never heard anyone brag about American food specifically.
Ever since discovering the wonders of Eastern cuisine, pizza and Mexican BBQ had been completely erased from her memory...
Movies · Lover_of_Mysteries
The translation went completely off the rails on this chapter
One Piece: The Strongest Experimental Subject at the Beginning
Anime & Comics · Zypher_21