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  • The Claimant's Resurrection

    The Claimant's Resurrection

    Fantasy

    On a planet similar to Earth in size, there was a celestial empire which governed a large portion of the world called the empire of Dionysus. The empire controlled many races and factions until a rebellion caused by disgruntled Elves and Orcs made the outer areas of the empire gain independence. Smelling the empire’s weakness many different rebellions rose up in the name of independence and freedom. The empire crumbled, the royal family slaughtered and the memories of the empire faded as time passed. The story picks up 3000 years in the future, at the end of the dark age caused by the destruction of the once mighty empire. The focus of this story is the quest to bring back the empire that was lost and restore its claimed lands at any cost. Tags : Harem, System, Kingdom building, Army Building, Revenge, Anti-hero/Villain Mc. The main character will give in too his darker side quite consistently. This will effect everyone he comes into contact with even his potential harem. If you do not like this type of novel you have been warned. All rights to the original creator of the picture which can be found here https://www.flickr.com/photos/33037982@N04/15204145086/

  • Rewrite in progress.

    Rewrite in progress.

    others Harem R18 War Death StarWars Old Republic

    A young boy abandoned on a remote planet in the outer rim discovers a cursed holocron that infuses with his body. This is his journey to becoming one of the most feared and powerful force users. I do not own the star wars franchise or any affiliated franchises. All rights belong to the current owners. Tags: Harem ,System,Empire building, Anti-hero Mc

  • Code Geass: A Soldiers Retribution

    Code Geass: A Soldiers Retribution

    Anime & Comics

    This story is focused on a Britannian soldier who committed mass atrocities in undercover missions in both India and China prior to his death in the invasion of Japan in the year 2010. His cause of death? Covert mission gone wrong. He awakens in South Korea, in a mass grave following the 'death' of the 99th Emperor of Britannia,Lelouch vi Britannia. This is the tale of the soldiers redemption, rebirth and rise to glory. Tags: Harem, System, Nation building. I do not own the rights to any characters or media in the Code geass series except my original concepts and characters. The rights to the image used remain with the original artist,

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    A young Sith struggling to live a normal life, stumbles onto a Holocron that changes his fate and the fate of the galaxy as a whole. This is a re-write/semi-sequel to the The cursed Holocron. The will be major differences to the plot but old chapters may re-appear where they fit well.

  • The Dragon Amulet

    The Dragon Amulet

    Eastern Fantasy Harem Cultivation Weak to Strong Vengeance R18 War Death Cold Protagonist Clan Building Unique Cultivation Method

    Essentially disowned by the Shen Clan, Shen Nu lives in the slums of Harrowgate City, the capital of the thriving Azure Empire. Unable to cultivate in any of the three paths of the world, Shen Nu's prospects in life are extremely limited until he is drawn to a hidden ruin that his blood will unlock. In the ruin, he finds a single unlocked box with a small amulet inside. Upon Shen Nu's touch, the amulet begins to be absorbed into his skin. This is the beginning of the legendary tale of a abused and broken orphan and his rise to the top of the cultivation world.

  • Star Wars: The Cursed Sith

    Star Wars: The Cursed Sith

    others System Harem Military War Star Wars Weak to Overpowered Old Republic

    A young boy abandoned on a remote planet in the outer rim discovers a cursed holocron that infuses with his body. This is his journey to becoming one of the most feared and powerful force users. A rewrite of popular Star Wars: the Cursed Holocron, this story will be more like what I originally had planned before I removed a large part of what the holocron was. I do not own the star wars franchise or any affiliated franchises. All rights belong to the current owners.

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Skepparn: but that's wrong, his master obviously taught him basic jedi info, sith isn't all that he knows otherwise he'd be killing everybody, he's just plain stupid but not acting like a real sith anyways

Star Wars: The Cursed Sith · C6
1 month ago
Thanks for the comment, he makes enemies as that is what he has been taught is the correct way for a Sith to act, with no other influence on him, why would he act differently?

Arrogance, Oppression, Destruction are the ways of the Sith as the story will develop he will be influenced by other ways of thinking but as of right now he has two Sith Masters and no ability to fathom the light side.

In order to increase his strength he has to through himself further into the dark, increasing his rage, Hatred, arrogance and the like. As I said in my most recent comment, something will be introduced to him in the tomb that may slowly help to mellow him out however it is a long process.

I understand that is personality is flawed but it is meant to be, if the character was perfect to begin with then it wouldn't really be realistic as no one is perfect, it is what most strive to become.

I'm happy to keep discussing it with people, leave a comment and I will try to get back to you when I'm not in work :) View More

Skepparn: most of what he said is true tho, the biggest problem is the mc personality, his arrogance gets to the point it's stupid and attacks people left and right which frankly only retarded people do, why make enemies when you can be neutral

Star Wars: The Cursed Sith · C6
1 month ago

Skepparn: most of what he said is true tho, the biggest problem is the mc personality, his arrogance gets to the point it's stupid and attacks people left and right which frankly only retarded people do, why make enemies when you can be neutral

Star Wars: The Cursed Sith · C6
1 month ago
Love the long comments, enjoy talking about the novel so keep them coming!

Her fear may motivate her to kill him but that is part of the fun of being a Sith. The harem side of the story will come later, currently he is still an arrogant little **** who has been taught to act higher than he truly is. No one would love that and that is the point, things like love will affect him and make him more reasonable as the story develops, no character remains the same though out a story, they must develop!

Another thing I may need to point out (depending when you dropped the original) there will be more than one master within the holocron, for who they are that will remain a secret however it is fair to assume that they are not all Sith, light side masters will appear as well.

One of the aspect that will mellow out his character will be introduced in the next chapter(Although that may cause more issues xD).

I do intend for him to hold a Grand master type of position on the council this time around, like Lucifer, in control of the sins but not one himself. He will control order but keep it in balance. he will at times give in to his emotions while at others remain stoic, the struggles of being influenced by both side of the force.

Again thanks for the comment and have a good day! View More

BlueGrimmoire: Well, thanks for the answer, and now I must continue with some more observations.

Firstly, the danmachi status screen truly is better and I also like it, just try and not go rampage giving the MC too many skills, it will be better to maintain a balance.

Second, with the thing about the way a sith should act, well, it is the only way he has been thaught how to act so I can understand it, but still, you have already put in fact that the girl is no treat to him, and if he is carefull there should be no way for her to even get the chance to think about betraying him, and then again, the result of his action just now is that there would never be any trust between the two, after all, he backstabed her just because nothing now(like really, they just need to find artifacts and then reach their master), what about if she ever gets slighly strong, then she will always be cautios of him and her fear is one of the things that may cause her to someday try and kill the MC.
And I believe that if this is how his first ever relationship after years of being alone goes then I better don't get my hopes up for the harem part of the story, after all if he never puts even the chance of trusting someone else, any relationship with females you write later on will feel bland and empty.

MMM, aside from that, if you truly intend to make the 7 virtues and sins council latter on, don't make him take any of the sits there, instead make him just balance, a person that needs to have all the virtues and the sins in control and not be controled by any of them. He should be able to feel and he should be afected by the sins while following the virtues in equal terms. So he isn't a robot without feelings while also not being a person whose desires can cloud his judgement.

Well, if I think of anything more I will comment afterwards, for now this is all, good luck.

Star Wars: The Cursed Sith · C6
1 month ago

BlueGrimmoire: Well, thanks for the answer, and now I must continue with some more observations.

Firstly, the danmachi status screen truly is better and I also like it, just try and not go rampage giving the MC too many skills, it will be better to maintain a balance.

Second, with the thing about the way a sith should act, well, it is the only way he has been thaught how to act so I can understand it, but still, you have already put in fact that the girl is no treat to him, and if he is carefull there should be no way for her to even get the chance to think about betraying him, and then again, the result of his action just now is that there would never be any trust between the two, after all, he backstabed her just because nothing now(like really, they just need to find artifacts and then reach their master), what about if she ever gets slighly strong, then she will always be cautios of him and her fear is one of the things that may cause her to someday try and kill the MC.
And I believe that if this is how his first ever relationship after years of being alone goes then I better don't get my hopes up for the harem part of the story, after all if he never puts even the chance of trusting someone else, any relationship with females you write later on will feel bland and empty.

MMM, aside from that, if you truly intend to make the 7 virtues and sins council latter on, don't make him take any of the sits there, instead make him just balance, a person that needs to have all the virtues and the sins in control and not be controled by any of them. He should be able to feel and he should be afected by the sins while following the virtues in equal terms. So he isn't a robot without feelings while also not being a person whose desires can cloud his judgement.

Well, if I think of anything more I will comment afterwards, for now this is all, good luck.

Star Wars: The Cursed Sith · C6
1 month ago
Firstly my god, that is a big comment, thanks for the feedback, it will be taken aboard. The Status page will be re-designed and I will most likely use one similar to the Danmachi Universe as I like the way it looks.

As for the way he acts, he has been taught that that is the way Sith are mean't to act, in order to fit in while he is at the academy he will need to act how he is expected too, to make his life easier. His first Master is Darth Malek, the one who stabbed Revan in the back( Eventually getting his arse kicked) so it is likely that Xim will have been thoroughly taught about betrayal and how it is natural to the Sith, Meredith may not have betrayed Xim but why take the chance? When faced with the chance to eliminate a threat before it can become one, take it.

The mission also refers to one of his fellow apprentices, not necessarily one of the four that went with Xim into the temple or even one of Lana's apprentices, he will meet many more of them during his time in the academy.

The order wasn't done particularity well last time and this is one of the main reasons I'm re-writing the novel, I want to do the 7 sins and virtues correctly, I will be bringing that back in some capacity in the future.

Finally I want to address early on that my Mc will not be invincible, they will lose some battles and may even lose their life during the novel. There will be a degree of plot armour in the story as that is important early on (Before the character can defend themselves) however in the later stages of the novel everything is fair game. View More

BlueGrimmoire: Well, I don't remember too well the last version of this novel but I remember I droped it cause the MC wasn't really to my liking, also, if I not wrong, this was the novel that had the plot of the MC trying to find people atuned to certain characteristic to take the seats of his coulcil of balance, 7 sins and 7 virtues if Im not wrong also contributed to me droping this novel as the characters all feel the same and not really atuned to their 'place' in his council.

Also, the part of his interaction with the jedi, you replaced them with sids now as I remember that one bothersome thing was how he attacked them in the planet he found the holocron, forced them to take him to their temple and then again attacked jedis there before treating them and taking a remote place to seclude himself.

Also the padawan that he took there, a twilek that afterwars he erased his memory of himself and his order because he didn't like that his people feared him because he is a sid and the sids are the bad ones always. If you wan't him to be seen different from othe sids then you should make him act different from other sids and do important things that a normal sid wouldn't do.

And lastly, the biggest problem I found in almost any novel, the MC is always arrogant to the point of being stupid, yes, he is a pure blooded sid, he has a huge talent in the force(dark) and instead has just a poor talent in light that should already make him understand that he isn't the best under the heavens, and then he acts cocky and arrogant in front of all people, the battle with the other sids just now, he should have just started the fight without any word and just defeating (killing) his enemies without wasted words just to clarify his superiority feeling.
Also, didn't like the fact that he attacked the girl just now, even if he has reasons to not trust her, because she is a sid and obviously will betray anyone for a price, (and then he is the one that don't like people treating him as any other sid when he just did the same, after all, he hasn't been betrayed by anyone before), but well, he could just have told her to stay there, knoked her out or just simply beat her in a spar so she understand she has no chance of wining against him, but why did he sneak attacked her with his weapon and then just acted as if it was completely logical for him to do so? In fact, it makes less sence when taking into acount the fact that he need a strong bond with her to complete the mision, thats no way of starting a relationship man.

Well, Im gonna see where you take this novel now and how you are going to use the holocron now, also, try to make a better status screen using [skill - lv] and only showing the xp needed when he wants to see his proficiency in said skill, if not is just too ugly to look at right now with no order. Also, the abilities and skills, I could be worng but I feel that the two are the same, it would be better if you use skills for things like force lightning and use mastery for things like light side mastery, dark side mastery, any weapon mastery or form of combat.
And I would recomend not using numerical values, as he grows in strenght the nunerical value will get bigger ang bigger and at some point it wouln't matter as he is the MC and he will be able to defet oponent stronger than himself because of plot reasons. Better use the clasical letter system, from F to SSS or Ex, the holocron should have enought 'knowledge' to be able to diferenciate between the strenght level of people if the universe, like said a normal padawan has a status of C and a master has somewhere between B and A, and S and above being people that have already passed the level of being a one man army capable of taking down docen of 'master' level people without problems. Dunno, I am not really a fan of star wars so I don't know how strong people can get there or even if there's true inmortality or things like that, the universe is big after all.

Well, all is just my opinion and y

Star Wars: The Cursed Sith · C6
1 month ago

BlueGrimmoire: Well, I don't remember too well the last version of this novel but I remember I droped it cause the MC wasn't really to my liking, also, if I not wrong, this was the novel that had the plot of the MC trying to find people atuned to certain characteristic to take the seats of his coulcil of balance, 7 sins and 7 virtues if Im not wrong also contributed to me droping this novel as the characters all feel the same and not really atuned to their 'place' in his council.

Also, the part of his interaction with the jedi, you replaced them with sids now as I remember that one bothersome thing was how he attacked them in the planet he found the holocron, forced them to take him to their temple and then again attacked jedis there before treating them and taking a remote place to seclude himself.

Also the padawan that he took there, a twilek that afterwars he erased his memory of himself and his order because he didn't like that his people feared him because he is a sid and the sids are the bad ones always. If you wan't him to be seen different from othe sids then you should make him act different from other sids and do important things that a normal sid wouldn't do.

And lastly, the biggest problem I found in almost any novel, the MC is always arrogant to the point of being stupid, yes, he is a pure blooded sid, he has a huge talent in the force(dark) and instead has just a poor talent in light that should already make him understand that he isn't the best under the heavens, and then he acts cocky and arrogant in front of all people, the battle with the other sids just now, he should have just started the fight without any word and just defeating (killing) his enemies without wasted words just to clarify his superiority feeling.
Also, didn't like the fact that he attacked the girl just now, even if he has reasons to not trust her, because she is a sid and obviously will betray anyone for a price, (and then he is the one that don't like people treating him as any other sid when he just did the same, after all, he hasn't been betrayed by anyone before), but well, he could just have told her to stay there, knoked her out or just simply beat her in a spar so she understand she has no chance of wining against him, but why did he sneak attacked her with his weapon and then just acted as if it was completely logical for him to do so? In fact, it makes less sence when taking into acount the fact that he need a strong bond with her to complete the mision, thats no way of starting a relationship man.

Well, Im gonna see where you take this novel now and how you are going to use the holocron now, also, try to make a better status screen using [skill - lv] and only showing the xp needed when he wants to see his proficiency in said skill, if not is just too ugly to look at right now with no order. Also, the abilities and skills, I could be worng but I feel that the two are the same, it would be better if you use skills for things like force lightning and use mastery for things like light side mastery, dark side mastery, any weapon mastery or form of combat.
And I would recomend not using numerical values, as he grows in strenght the nunerical value will get bigger ang bigger and at some point it wouln't matter as he is the MC and he will be able to defet oponent stronger than himself because of plot reasons. Better use the clasical letter system, from F to SSS or Ex, the holocron should have enought 'knowledge' to be able to diferenciate between the strenght level of people if the universe, like said a normal padawan has a status of C and a master has somewhere between B and A, and S and above being people that have already passed the level of being a one man army capable of taking down docen of 'master' level people without problems. Dunno, I am not really a fan of star wars so I don't know how strong people can get there or even if there's true inmortality or things like that, the universe is big after all.

Well, all is just my opinion and y

Star Wars: The Cursed Sith · C6
1 month ago

DeVock: thanks for the chapter

Star Wars: The Cursed Sith · C6
1 month ago

DeVock: never read your original because never saw it but i glad i saw this one this is my first time reading a starwars fan-fiction because the others where not as appealing as this is, thanks for the chapters,

Star Wars: The Cursed Sith · C4
1 month ago
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DJROM: Dropped ?

The Dragon Amulet · C10
1 month ago
Well spotted, there is a reason for this... View More

Skepparn: He's only been training only light side for a while so why isn't it increasing? the difference between light and dark is increasing a lot which isn't a good sign

Rewrite in progress. · C20
1 month ago

Skepparn: He's only been training only light side for a while so why isn't it increasing? the difference between light and dark is increasing a lot which isn't a good sign

Rewrite in progress. · C20
1 month ago
Might get that tattooed on the side of the mc's head. View More

OukisLips: I don't understand. How was the Jedi arrogant? All he did was ask why this suspicious person was hanging around their shuttle. That seems like a perfectly normal concern to me. This MC is just a raging emo douche.

Rewrite in progress. · C4
1 month ago

OukisLips: I don't understand. How was the Jedi arrogant? All he did was ask why this suspicious person was hanging around their shuttle. That seems like a perfectly normal concern to me. This MC is just a raging emo douche.

Rewrite in progress. · C4
1 month ago
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McCallam: Plan too unless it pulls to much attention away form the main story.

The Dragon Amulet · C2
4 months ago
Plan too unless it pulls to much attention away form the main story. View More

Imperador12: Harem ?

The Dragon Amulet · C2
4 months ago

Imperador12: 👍👍👍👍

The Dragon Amulet · C5
4 months ago

TheOne8: Thanks for the chapter. An improvement could be how he feels about being back, the thoughts that are going through his head.

The Dragon Amulet · C4
4 months ago

DJROM: Thanks for the chapter

The Dragon Amulet · C4
4 months ago

LeiShem: +++++++

The Dragon Amulet · C3
4 months ago

DJROM: Good Novel
Just don't drop it

The Dragon Amulet · C2
4 months ago
Going to try and release a chapter for this in the coming few days, View More
Code Geass: A Soldiers Retribution · C0
4 months ago

Luxdark: Name: Jack Averre

Species: Human

Gender: male

Level: 5
5000 xp to lvl up

Attributes:
strength 55
Agility 65
Charisma 70
Intelligence 30
Willpower 60

Skills:
Shii-Cho 30
Makashi 65
Soresu 25
Ataru 50
Force mastery 35
Light side mastery 50

Abilities:
force pull 30
Force push 40

Backstory:
As long as Jack can remember he dreamed of being a hero, so when the jedi asked him if he wanted to join at the young age of five he agreed happily.
Young Jack did not fit in with the other jedi at his time for Jack did not like sitting around doing "nothing" (meditate)
So Jack disobeyed his master and went to learn how to wield his lightsaber (he used a stick as a sword)
Other jedi master soon noticed that Jack had a talent with the "sword" and great charisma even if he did not fit in with the other jedi.
So the jedi at the time saw it fit to let Jack start his training as a jedi guardian.
(Good to know, Jack is not so smart...)

Romance interest: Not in love with main character (If this story is not a harem story the love interest will be kira Carsen :P )
Additional information: Jack is 17 years old and have a blond yellow white hair, no facial hair and ocean blue eyes. Lean muscles and about 180 cm tall. Got a bit of scars on his back form his hard training.

Jack is not the best when it comes to love or hiding his feelings, you can see if he is lying on his face, in other words it easy to read his face, he is easily teased, friends with Kira, he jumps to conclusions easily, he is brave and he takes a stand for his friends if they are in trouble and need help. He also has a bright personality!

What i want to happen to my character: To join Xim on his journey and befriend him, later on the journey becoming best friends^^

Ps.
I looked up Kiras age and she is apparently 20 years old! You can also nerf Jack if he is to op...

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10 months ago
Thanks for the reminder I should add base levelsinto the template ^_^ View More

McCallam: Depends on the achievements he has, 2-6 would make the most sense in my eyes as level one would be padawan and 7 and above would be breaching Jedi Master.

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10 months ago
Depends on the achievements he has, 2-6 would make the most sense in my eyes as level one would be padawan and 7 and above would be breaching Jedi Master. View More

Luxdark: I'm trying to make a charater so I just want to know what is the "base lvl" for a jedi knight?

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10 months ago

Brezer: That's more like it ty

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10 months ago

Godslayer66: Thanks for the chapter

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10 months ago

aleksandar2003: Really good chapter
keep it up

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10 months ago

Luxdark: First!
Loved the chapter and hope for more already, thanks for the chapter!

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10 months ago
The next chapter may clear somethings up regarding this matter :) View More

McCallam: Thanks for the correction must have slipped my notice. His character will be explained as the story goes on, who says that the flirting will lead to romance? An easy way to control people is through their hearts. It will be a harem just not for a long time, the romance will always be secondary to the plot.

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