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  • The White Haired Loli [Dropped]

    The White Haired Loli [Dropped]

    Fantasy

    --------------------------------------------- Plutia Sagiri is a wide known adventurer that had the nickname of 'White Haired Loli', however people really never knew what she actually looked like and only used her nickname as reference. She the most famous adventurer had retired and is now working as a guild receptionist but also taking side jobs, that is until she goes to an academy and meets teenagers that will make her start her adventuring career again. Her powers are sealed and in order to finally be able to use them she will travel with this group aiding them in information and knowledge since she does not have the power to help them. Nonetheless, the demons actually have a network of information that knows what she actually looks like and starts to bring trouble to the area around her due to her fame. Join them on their way to becoming famous adventurers as Plutia who hides her identity as the most famous and helps them stealthily. ----------------------------------------------- This is my first novel I have ever written, I started this during my first semester of freshmen highschool. Please take care of me until I finish this novel! ^_^ Discontinued--- Sorry everybody that actually liked this series. It's just, the novel isn't going the way I planned it to go. You may all be thinking, 'Well nothing goes as planned.' However, this is something that is way off the plan. Something that should've been simple, but I messed it up. So sorry, I'll be making a new novel though. Patreon @ https://www.patreon.com/Plutia_Sagiri

  • Aiming to be the Best Magician in the World!

    Aiming to be the Best Magician in the World!

    Fantasy Action Reincarnation Comedy Adventure Female Protagonist Academy Level System Slice of Life SwordAndMagic Hidden Powers

    4.3

    Vol 2 is where stuff will get serious. Vol 2 = 2020 Vol 1 is just a bit of pre-writing for fun due to being in school. Recommended you skip Vol 1 when Vol 2 comes out if you don't want to injure your eyesight and brain. _______________________________________ This is a light-hearted comedy novel about a NEET shut-in girl from the modern world who dies and reincarnates into a fantasy world. There she will be able to accomplish her dreams like building the floof floof kingdom and finding a nice husband. There is also a goddess who attempts to help her by going to the human world in another body. To her demise, she forgets to give herself good stats and now has to live with others until she can find the protagonist to gain her abilities back. Join her on her way to her dream of becoming the best magician in the world as she makes connections with others, as well as the goddess who struggles to find the protagonist. ___________________________________________ Website @ rianovelcollection.home.blog Twitch @ twitch.tv/rianolinon Discord @ https://discord.gg/XcjsZ5Z Patreon @ https://www.patreon.com/Rianolinon Kofi @ Ko-fi.com/rianolinon

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Crowley_Black: Although I am absolutely disgusted by this man, I couldn't help but ask, does Ria actually want this kinda treatment?

Aiming to be the Best Magician in the World! · C386
9 hours ago
:sip: It'll get serious in a month. View More

WilliSugars: It doesn't take itself seriously most of the time, with all villains being 2 dimensional. They have their motives explained in exposition dumps, sometimes it's disguised as dialogue. But that's okay. It's supposed to be that way if you couldn't already tell from fake dialogue at the end of every chapter. It is just supposed to be lighthearted fluff with some villains here and there.

Aiming to be the Best Magician in the World!
1 week ago
indeed View More

GN00: The thug was lucky Silvie’s parents weren’t there.

Aiming to be the Best Magician in the World! · C370
2 weeks ago
Been a while einnad, I'll try that when I have free time View More

einnad: TRY READING THE ”DIVINE'S PHYSICIAN OVERBEARING WIFE” NEW NOVEL OF THE AUTHOR. 😉

Ghost Emperor Wild Wife: Dandy Eldest Miss · C2240
2 weeks ago

Rianolinon: Arrest who now?
Anyway, sad that this story is coming to an end. I remember those days when I was proactively gaining first comments on here.

Sad to see that I have to see both this story end as like Evil Emperor's Wild Consort.

Ghost Emperor Wild Wife: Dandy Eldest Miss · C2240
2 weeks ago
Arrest who now?
Anyway, sad that this story is coming to an end. I remember those days when I was proactively gaining first comments on here.

Sad to see that I have to see both this story end as like Evil Emperor's Wild Consort. View More
Ghost Emperor Wild Wife: Dandy Eldest Miss · C2240
2 weeks ago
uh... SAME! View More

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Aiming to be the Best Magician in the World!
2 weeks ago
You're telling me to die by telling me to succeed in my goals for Volume 2. 3k words a day :Cry: View More

Kiradeux: Hahaha, sorry it seemed long, just wanted to give you the best critique I could; like I said, I want to see you improve and just wanted to offer what I could. Thanks for taking the time reading and responding to it.

The quality of your writing, grammar and sentence structures have drastically improved even in the first 200 chapters, prior to chapter 50 would have been 1 star, and before around 135ish would have been 2. Even without the TTS suggestion, it's been getting better either way.

As for it going Premium, I certainly can't blame you, and should still return for at least a chapter or two to see how it is. Seriously, good luck - you've definitely got potential. I hope you can succeed in your goals for Volume 2!

Aiming to be the Best Magician in the World!
3 weeks ago
P.S, sorry it will be in premium xD View More

Kiradeux: I wanted to like this story, and plan to revisit after Volume 2 makes a bit of progress - It definitely has good things going for it and the potential to improve. That said, I feel the need to write a review, and I'll critique in the same order as the star ratings. Though some of this may seem fairly harsh, I hope you can find something helpful in it; I genuinely look forward to seeing what you can do with Volume 2.

Writing
The quality of the authors writing, grammar and general sentence structure in the first several chapters were concerning, but the author shows definite signs of steady improvement over the course of the series. My judgement is restricted to just the growth in the first 200 chapters, but it wouldn't be surprising if overall writing quality deserves even more stars than I've given it by now.
Like I said, I'm not sure of the structure of the current chapters, but if I were in their shoes, I would definitely consider listening to the chapters once through at 2x speed in Text-To-Speech before posting.

Story
Though lesser issues exist elsewhere, Story Development in the chapters I've read thus far has been roadblocked by the design of the main character's personality; She's ridiculously overpowered by this worlds standards, but lets everyone around her walk all over her, and is either complaining about letting herself be held captive, or taking a nap while the story goes on around her. Generally speaking, with the character and overall plot as they have been up until my current chapter (192), you could rip the main character out of the story entirely and it wouldn't be much worse for wear; perhaps it might even be better?

It's honestly not necessarily bad to make the main character miss out on events, or even make that the norm of the character, but to have a character who feels like the has nearly zero impact on the world beyond slight recognition in peoples eyes, who complains about their situation but makes no effort to change it just feels painful to read - and Sylvie is just one character.

Character Design
Imagine a world where girls are naturally concerned about their breasts by 2 years, with parents showing genuine concern if they haven't started to develop by 6. Character maturity and overall mindsets are all over the place in this world, and while a fair bit can be explained away through Isekai Reincarnation, there really are too many extreme factors in too many of their personalities and lack of any real character growth thus far.

In the occasions where the characters are acting a bit more stable and generally acting their age, there's fairly clean group dynamic in the interactions with the characters, building up interest and making you want to read more... and then all logic blows up, again.

World Background
Honestly, I had a hard time justifying not giving this 4 stars and, even now continue debating on 2 or 4. Overall, the world itself feels great, but lacks substantial story elements building it up. This world feels like it has potential and its power system looks like it isn't restricted by some of the common limitations requiring a "chosen one" to surpass, but by the same measure, that entire feeling could simply be from the lack of information. Generally, in Isekai stories, we would learn as the character's curiosity and sense of exploration leads us through the world, but Sylvie would rather just... sleep.

This story has potential, and has definitely seen some improvements over the first 200 chapters, but the Main Character has remained as a statically inconsistent entity that just seems to get in the way. I hope that, by Volume 2, the characters can grow out of their inadequacies and flourish (especially the MC)

Aiming to be the Best Magician in the World!
3 weeks ago
As for your problems (Excluding world building as I have no idea how to do that / as well as grammar/sentence structures as, ha I suck at English) Sylvie will proactively change in Vol 2. This will be a very devastating change that will make the novel take another route from her childishness overpowered self that is lazy.

As the story was only limited to the Arkite Kingdom, and the fact that I had no outline and am trying to find time aka waiting for thanksgiving break, I am unable to find what to write. Thus, my writing just ends up becoming gibberish.

I have no stockpiles, and I always end up typing in school in the morning to get my chapters. (Once again, waiting for thanksgiving break and winter break for this.)

I actually plan on making Vol 2 start on new years if you are interested in waiting for less than 2 months. Like how this novel started new years of 2019, I plan on vol2 starting new years of 2020.

No worries though, I will make sure I put a summary of what has happened within these nearly 400 chapters worth of bs just for you to read so you don't have to torture yourself with all this bad stuff, as well as others. View More

Kiradeux: I should note, I've read to 192 while logged out, but only logged in to comment, hence the "Reading Status: C0".

Aiming to be the Best Magician in the World!
3 weeks ago
why so long :glare: View More

Kiradeux: I should note, I've read to 192 while logged out, but only logged in to comment, hence the "Reading Status: C0".

Aiming to be the Best Magician in the World!
3 weeks ago
you wait for Vol 2 to find out :sip: View More

Lenara: Soooo. What about Shiro-chan?

Aiming to be the Best Magician in the World! · C359
3 weeks ago
doesnt mean Lance loves Sylvie. :glare: View More

Crowley_Black: Also why is Lance trying hard when he have Elise? Is he two timing or is this a triangle I see

Aiming to be the Best Magician in the World! · C355
1 month ago
because the poor usually doesn't have money so they cant feed themselves. View More

Crowley_Black: Also why is that in stories, it's always the fat friend that's rich and being used for money

Aiming to be the Best Magician in the World! · C352
1 month ago
$$$ View More

Crowley_Black: Also Ria, 3k? You got lazy with just 500±, how are you gonna get motivation for 3k?

Aiming to be the Best Magician in the World! · C351
1 month ago
HMMM View More

Crowley_Black: If somehow it ended up with Lance being on top of Elise then we can definitely call him the lucky pervert protag, if Elise the one on top we can call her the muscle head protag

Aiming to be the Best Magician in the World! · C350
1 month ago
Kaguya-sama: love is war all over again LOL View More

Crowley_Black: On a serious note, the commentator was right that Elise and Lance would suit each other but really, those two would be too prideful to admit it

Aiming to be the Best Magician in the World! · C348
1 month ago
its not Claude >_> View More

Crowley_Black: If that person on the other line is Sylvie father, then we can pretty much guess why Sylvie and Kenza have a bone to pick in this world

Aiming to be the Best Magician in the World! · C342
1 month ago
this was planned since day 1 :sleepless: View More

Crowley_Black: I was right haha! That or Ria id just picking idea from reader again as she had no idea of what to do

Aiming to be the Best Magician in the World! · C341
1 month ago
... View More

Crowley_Black: If this demon king is somehow the guy from Sylvie past life I'll be surprised, but what are the chances of that

Aiming to be the Best Magician in the World! · C339
1 month ago
Did you forget about the blacksmith part when they got the 3 boys measured? View More

Crowley_Black: Even then, measuring tape have been invented even in the middle ages

Aiming to be the Best Magician in the World! · C335
1 month ago
this isn't the middle ages. This is your typical isekai JP novel :sleepless: with a lot of fan service View More

Crowley_Black: Even then, measuring tape have been invented even in the middle ages

Aiming to be the Best Magician in the World! · C335
1 month ago
of course not, this isn't modern times. View More

Crowley_Black: .... This is not normal measurements procedure

Aiming to be the Best Magician in the World! · C335
1 month ago
sip View More
The Webnovel Writer's Chatgroup · C54
1 month ago
stab stab stab stab stab View More
The Almighty Tyrant · C89
1 month ago
In the description, I also say in 2020. I am currently in school trying to maintain a high GPA X_X View More

Xyrox: In description of novel u said to start from vol. 2 but when does that start?

Aiming to be the Best Magician in the World! · C324
2 months ago
Thanks~ View More

tylerostrander1101: I still realy love reading it lots of jokes and it flows very well.

Aiming to be the Best Magician in the World!
2 months ago
ecc, my grammar isn't good >.< Only in 2nd year of high school. View More

tylerostrander1101: Realy funny with nice action. The grammer could use some work but its not imposible to understand. I wish it didnt time skip every other chapter .

Aiming to be the Best Magician in the World!
2 months ago
ty? View More

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Aiming to be the Best Magician in the World!
2 months ago
me too View More

Java_Dream: I want to be like Sylvie~ all days sleep~ how wonderful~😴😴😴

Aiming to be the Best Magician in the World! · C315
2 months ago
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