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It should be a problem with the shameless google translation. Months should be weeks and then it adds up.

If you keep going like that with a detach scientist wit some lustful tendencies, and with the future harem that is shaping up at chapter 4, this will be good :)

Very well done. The story flows like smooth butter! I like where it is going (as of chap 37), and really hope you don’t drop it. If you can increase releases a bit it would be even more perfect :)

This story is all over the place with no heads or tail. Most of the time we don’t know what’s happening, the relationships between characters are a convoluted mess, and everything is a testament of Beauty, grandeur, dedication and whatnot. All of this seems made to artificially grant the characters, world and plot some unfathomable profoundness. Let me say that it does the opposite. Too much of this makes this story almost a joke with how much the author wants to show us this ‘grand’ work. Author, you should tone it down a bit and stop jumping scenes all around and take your time in unfolding the plot. We don’t need to know everything that’s happening all the time at the same moment. If you want us to see this world as you want us to see it, it has to be subtle and not ‘in your face’. And please, slow down a bit and explain things at a normal pace to give us time to ingest what you want us to. Dropped near chapter 40 at the moment.

Very well made. I hope you continue your story and don’t drop like 99% of the authors in the fanfic section :) (............................)

Well maybe I exagerated a bit. My standard for the CORNBRINGER is set at The Prideful One, and I had no problem enjoying it from back to back. This one, though it is readable as you say, it goes all over the place and becomes hard to follow as you dive into a chapter. Couple that with somme grammatical mistakes and I’m feeling the CORN slipping away if you get what I’m saying. Maybe it’s too whacky for me idk... I’ll be back for your next Magnum Cornus though, till then I wish you well Venerable Bringer of the Corn :)

hmmmmmmmmmmm why do people say that the grammar is great when it is barely readable? Sentence structure is a mess and wrong words and/or filler words where left after a a rewrite.... I had to drop around chapter 20 due to how unreadable it got... Can you please fix it mighty CORNBRINGER? Thank you !

Oh hell yes. Finally some good fucking fan fiction. The writing, grammar, chapter lenght, character design, hell everything is perfect. It’s so rare to find that on webnovel. Could easily take number one if author keeps the story rolling at this level!

The previous work of author was quite good! I can’t wait to see if/how he will improve in this one. Good luck for your new fanfiction !!!!!!