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TheBananaMan: Power leveling at its finest.

Spending My Retirement In A Game · C349
3 weeks ago
I WANT EFATE BACK ON WEBNOVEL. PLS!!!!!!!!!!!!!1 View More
eFate: An MMO Story · C65
3 weeks ago

WeavingSpider: Yep the old man is totally the 0.1 % bacteria which will survive the cleaning.

The Divine Wolf... or? · C116
3 weeks ago

WeavingSpider: And in the middle of the clearing was a little white table with two cups and from the smell, freshly brewed tea.
When ark came nearer he realised that he was tricked and it was some brown, dirty looking water in it.
Stinking like burnt beans at that.
...
Thanks for the chapter @tyrone

The Divine Wolf... or? · C116
3 weeks ago

Bartzabel: No. I'm 99.9% sure that bastard's alive

The Divine Wolf... or? · C116
3 weeks ago
Question for the Author. Will updates be tuesdays or fridays now, or will it be both? (pls be both, more chapters would be awesome :) View More
Farming For Gold · C58
3 weeks ago
Awesome chapter, thnks :) View More
Rise of The Undead Legion · C357
3 weeks ago
Holy crap I almost missed this since it's a friday, but thanks for the chapter and for coming back :) View More
Farming For Gold · C58
3 weeks ago
did.... did you have a stroke writing this, cause I got one just reading it View More

QEvee323: Much good and hahaaamazingly toloolkfjkffkfk is the time of time to get our new members to our alliance territory and we can do it again and we will have to go to the fortress and then we will have to go to the fortress and then we will have to go to the fortress and then we will have to go to

The Divine Wolf... or?
3 weeks ago

SenuOfTheCulture: LOVE THIS NOVEL
THE MC IS NOT A FUCKING BETA JAPANESE MC
HE PRETTY STUPID IN EARLY CHAP BUT DONT WORRY HE WILL CHANGE
HOPE AUTHOR WILL NOT MAKE HIM A GENERIC CHINESE MC
anyway the grammar is pretty good (for me at least)
The updates are stable for now (⌒▽⌒)
I would like to know more about the world and how he reincarnated, author will probably explain a little in next chapter.
Please don't make him change to human early on since its the whole point of this novel (#^.^#)
Again love this novel
Keep up with the good work!
*CULTURE WILL LAST FOREVER!*
ヘ( ̄ω ̄ヘ)(〜 ̄△ ̄)〜

The Divine Wolf... or?
3 weeks ago
Reading Status: C113
Writing Quality - 3/5, mainly because they're aren't a lot of mistakes, their are also times where several mistakes in a row have happened. I know English isn't the author's first language, but still, they're there

Stability of Updates - 4/5, mainly because there have been plenty of updates since the last time I started this series, (which it only had around 20ish chapters)

Story Development - 2/5, mainly because while there are places where the story can develop, their isn't a main plot in the story, just the ever-increasing strength of Ark

Character Design - While Ark at the beginning was pretty shaky as a good MC, now (on chapter 117) he has had time to develop, and a large growth in his development has happened.

World Background - While we are introduced to new places and are told about certain places, it's really hard to keep track of all of them, as well as we don't see how these different places interact with each other


Points to work on
- Showing more changes in characters
* Mainly saying, each character has a set mindset they have, and throughout the story, while Ark did have one change near the beginning of the story, that was the only change we've had throughout the entire book
- Polishing up Grammar
* There are times where problems in writing come up, rather it's a incorrect spelling, an extra letter or lack of letter, maybe take some more time to really read over the chapter to iron out the few mistakes. It'll take time, but having better quality can change a book from good, to great
- Get a Main Storyline
* Like I said earlier, the story only has the development of Ark, and other characters, and that's mainly it. While that may be what you want to write about, Character development is a means to an end, not the end itself. You need to have certain goals that Ark should have, or maybe even he doesn't know it yet, but the readers should at least know where the story is heading and what goal Ark should have. If the end goal is making Ark incredibly strong, almost godlike, then we should have goals that are the stepping stones to that end goal.
- Give more realistic scenes, both from characters and also the background as well
* What I mean is for things to be more realistic than it is now. An example is near the beginning of the story, Ark woke up as an Ice wolf in a cave. As a Wolf, Ark should've seen the world differently as to when he was a human from before. Wolfs have different strengths of senses than humans do, so Ark should've been using his sense of smell for the majority of his beginning time, but instead he only used hearing and sight. His thought process also didn't really change much from his time as a human. As the saying goes, the body reflects the mind, so his thought process should've at least change a little to be a little more wolf-like, maybe more fierce and law of the jungle like, which later it did, but for that first arc in the forest, I didn't see any major changes in thought process.

Overall - This series has a very shaky beginning, around 20 chapters into it it starts to get pretty good due to the development of the MC as well as just being with him on his journey. Their are points that could be worked on, mainly having more unique characters or also having drastic changes in characters due to certain actions done to them, like how when Ark was captured and tortured for 5 weeks, we at least saw some difference, but what I'm saying with a more drastic change would be how he see's the world, and how he thinks, because that didn't change, only how he reacts to things has, which to the readers doesn't show as much as thoughts do. View More
The Divine Wolf... or?
3 weeks ago

Tyrone_Bedoire: So, I've been seeing authors doing this, so I might as well do it myself, I mean why not? Anyways, I'm very insecure so if you're too harsh with your critique I'm going to go cry in a corner. Nah but for real though, I hope everyone enjoys the story, and if you don't then I hope you manage to find something better out there!

The Divine Wolf... or?
3 weeks ago

JadoBleu: Everyone rejoice! author has posted an updated om patreon.

Update: Back in the Saddle

Alright, I just released chapter 57. Sorry about the holdup. I was planning on taking a week off to get my thoughts in order, but it turned into more like a month off. There were a few reasons. Partly, I was having writers block on how to move the story forward. Partly, I was playing WoW: Classic way too much and I was just burnt out. I'd been writing FFG non-stop for more than a year and just needed some time to work on some other stuff and relax for a but, but I'm back and ready to go again.


I'll keep putting our weekly chapters of FFG, and hopefully some more of StS.

Farming For Gold · C57
4 weeks ago

WeavingSpider: Thank you for writing, as always!
Thank you for the chapter and i hope we will get introduced to some legal loli or a big oppai elf🤔. Some biggering between the dwarf and another companion would be nice.
Or pov from normal wolf meeting our mc.

The Divine Wolf... or? · C60
4 weeks ago

OrangePacker: KiLl ThE sCuM

The Divine Wolf... or? · C55
4 weeks ago
I want Ark to wield a weapon like Sif from Dark Souls, that'd be epic View More
The Divine Wolf... or? · C31
1 month ago
how in the heck did a wolfy skin a sheeple? View More
The Divine Wolf... or? · C22
1 month ago

BloodStone: When I read his background story I got goosebumps, the MC is very, very handsome, jobless and bullied, I mean W T F, there´s tons of jobs to handsome people that pay very well and he was bullied just because he is handsome and orphan at the same time. I had a hard time swallowing this background story, you could have just said that he was ugly and the realism would increase several times, he died and became a wolf anyway, who cares if he was handsome or ugly.
I liked the idea anyway.
Thanks for the chapter.

The Divine Wolf... or? · C1
1 month ago
Rereading, and that first intro with the samurai vs shadow assassin was awesome, and then when it goes into Eric, that was hilarious View More
eFate: An MMO Story · C1
1 month ago
See this! I just gifted the story: Balloon View More
Spending My Retirement In A Game · C323
1 month ago
I absolutely love this character development, but I believe that the symptoms are to sudden. Idk if that’s intentional, but suddenly these last two chapters eisen started actin strangely, for no reason except them talking about how the game was real View More
Spending My Retirement In A Game · C322
1 month ago
I absolutely love this character development, but I believe that the symptoms are to sudden. Idk if that’s intentional, but suddenly these last two chapters eisen started actin strangely, for no reason except them talking about how the game was real View More
Spending My Retirement In A Game · C322
1 month ago
I absolutely love this character development, but I believe that the symptoms are to sudden. Idk if that’s intentional, but suddenly these last two chapters eisen started actin strangely, for no reason except them talking about how the game was real View More
Spending My Retirement In A Game · C322
1 month ago
I absolutely love this character development, but I believe that the symptoms are to sudden. Idk if that’s intentional, but suddenly these last two chapters eisen started actin strangely, for no reason except them talking about how the game was real View More
Spending My Retirement In A Game · C322
1 month ago
I absolutely love this character development, but I believe that the symptoms are to sudden. Idk if that’s intentional, but suddenly these last two chapters eisen started actin strangely, for no reason except them talking about how the game was real View More
Spending My Retirement In A Game · C322
1 month ago
I absolutely love this character development, but I believe that the symptoms are to sudden. Idk if that’s intentional, but suddenly these last two chapters eisen started actin strangely, for no reason except them talking about how the game was real View More
Spending My Retirement In A Game · C322
1 month ago
I thought that their memories were used in the creation of the puzzles View More
Spending My Retirement In A Game · C319
1 month ago
guess this is dead, RIP eFate View More
eFate: An MMO Story · C65
1 month ago

EvilNCarnate: Second Tuesday in a row that the best novel on site hasn't posted. It's the end times my guys

Farming For Gold · C57
1 month ago

Dlustig2000: Checked with authors patreon site and found out that farming for gold will be back next Tuesday

Farming For Gold · C57
1 month ago
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