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male LV 13I'm a guy who's new to writing and has a few idea's for stories and I hope that over time I get better at writing/stories ideas and will be able to get a good community who read my story's .
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yeah, but I guess they're evil because there are those who aren't religious who don't attack those who are. while those seen as evil actively destroy and ruin everything they can.
Many of these groups were fresh and green, but some vertrans were still kicking around. They managed and guided these groups of youngster down the clean and righteous path and vowed to purge all evil in the lands.
The Game of Evolution
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New race without any skills or time to evolve and get stronger and is similar to human life spans of the time before modern medicine.
current lifespan:0-40 max
The Game of Evolution
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No lizard men, the creator wanted dragons but couldn't make them at the start, so he is doing the next best thing.
ch 0 -7 images of the races
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ch 57 The second day of the wave part 1
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maybe because they have high levels of strength,speed,durability, long life span,advanced technology, honour,fearlessness, and a high healing factor.
ch 0 4 Skill pool
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This seems confusing as if I took away what you say makes them one dimensional they'd be even more one-dimensional. The basic traits people have are their nationality and race, along with their gender and religion. Also, you must not be reading correctly as the mc Jack isn't American he's British and if you've read my work so far you would see I've littered around the chapters how Jack is far from a nationalist in fact I made an entire chapter talking about these things. I've also already spoken about how I'm trying my best to focus on Jack while having group chapters on the other characters as they play important roles later on where they will be more involved. As for the other characters, they're not meant to all be saints with no sins, and Jack isn't perfect, constantly doubting himself and his self-worth while also overthinking his actions. I understand my novel won't be for everyone, and some will say it can be done better, but most of what you're saying just doesn't make sense as if If wrote them your way it would just be their likes and dislikes that gets boring quickly. I hope you give it a re-read, but if not, thanks for your time.
ch 141 Candidate's progress pt1
The Game of Evolution
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perhaps
ch 151 A new type of warrior
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Nah, it's alright. You have the Jackrixis that are the main race , and each candidate has 2 minor races. For Jack, because he's in an alliance with Nancy, he has control over her race, and in return, if he wins, she doesn't die.
"I know, but I think the smartest thing to do is get an overall opinion as this will be for my 3 races. Who will lead the charge for the other races that will probably follow them aswell"-Jack
The Game of Evolution
Sci-fi · MRgold1
yeah it's only for the game
In case you forgot a wave happens once every 10 years for 3 days and for every 10 waves, the candidates or their race would get a skill.
The Game of Evolution
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hard to say as like your answer we haven't got any massive weakness but you could say the same for aliens. They could be stronger,faster,smarter versions of us, but if I had to choose, probably 4 as in this case its better to underestimate.
ch 150 Human reaction
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oh, it is free that why the game but those real-life screens for them and told them to choose who they're going to support.
ch 150 Human reaction
The Game of Evolution
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Possibly, but more likely no, and the reason is something secret, but its the reason the game exists.
"System, how many will be attacking my race? Is it a few hundred or the same number as my race?"-Jack
The Game of Evolution
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Good idea I'll probably use it
ch 149 The bronze age
The Game of Evolution
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yeah, there meant to be the dynamite you throw at a problem unless they're political leaders or scholars. they won't be around for long they're just unstable.
He asked his father what he was doing and only received a blank, almost weighted stare before a switch flipped, and he was back to smiling and laughing while throwing away the mutilated corpse of his plaything he leaves behind. Heliosad would pick his son up and take him away, and what his child wouldn't see past the tall grass was the 5 other animal corpses nearby.
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no, that's correct, but as it says that there are negatives to with living so long.
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the game just makes it impossible to go past it, so with magic, you can't grow or learn any more there's an invisible wall. As for technology its along the lines of it not working or the game rewriting memories to keep them from thinking of more advanced tech.
At the moment, the strongest mage was Gendrul, who was at the 2nd initiate rank, but the world's cap while in the game was Adept 5. The time it would take to reach this would involve multiple facts such as the element,affinity, and current environment.
The Game of Evolution
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fixed thanks, mate [img=recommend]
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All I can say is that he created them, so some of his personality will be mixed in, and they're all friends, so they'll act similar to one another. I think there's a bit of Jack in each of them, and they reflect differnt parts of himself.
ch 155 Moving forward
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