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2018-12-12 Joined Grenada
Thanks for the feedback mate. I have enjoyed each and every bit of it. In terms of Chusei, I have too many arcs with him alive and well still. There will be romance but as with everything else it's slow burn, progressive and I tend to get rid of things that don't seem natural to me. I can confirm though at some point you'll see romance sneaking it's way into the story.
"Nope," he smirked then grabbed Kobaru and made for the exit once more.
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I have contemplated losing Chusei because of the plethora of effects it would have on readers and the characters alike. Nothing is final as of yet though.
"Nope," he smirked then grabbed Kobaru and made for the exit once more.
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He's ten and spent about four hours practicing with no instructions. Naruto spent at least a week trying and failing. I don't flaunt my knowledge of naruto much in this series because It's a slight AU and I want the characters to stand almost independent. But I will let you know that I've done my part to ensure that at the age of ten he is better than the rookie nine. Just less experienced than other prodigious shinobi. That's all.
At that point he could feel his pride lose value. Heck at that point anyone within a mile radius could feel his pride lose value. Nohara-sensei and his great sense of timing. Took that moment to increase the difficulty of the exercise. Allowing them to spar while channeling chakra to refine their control.
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Kobaru is only nine, Nagisa's eleven and Chusei's 14 at this point.
Moments such as those would remind him that he was almost four years older than Nagisa.
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Alright. I'll give it a look.
"No, I'm saying that you guys are related. Maybe extremely, barely even blood related, but the Uzumaki gene could turn the sky red. I can tell you that much. I remember seeing your head black and wondering if I cheated," his father smirked, "lucky you came across her and not a member of the Arashi's sect. It would still be raining if you did."
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Thanks mate.
ch 0 8 Literature is Often Useless
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I'll try my best😅
ch 22 Nation Free Of Borders
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Welcome guy. I'll stay working hard on them.
ch 22 Nation Free Of Borders
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🙏🙏🙏
ch 22 Nation Free Of Borders
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Yeah the early embers of it.
ch 21 Freedom With A Pricetag
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We pray
The panic he felt when the six-year-old closed the distance, before he could react, was one that shortened his lifespan by two decades. It was scary and physically impossible for someone of his size and stature to move at such speeds.
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Hallo. Hope you enjoyed it[img=recommend]
ch 21 Freedom With A Pricetag
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I should drop that chapter within a few days actually. I'll keep you posted.
ch 21 Freedom With A Pricetag
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You are welcome mate=)
ch 20 Fault of Expectation Pt.2
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You're welcome🙏
ch 19 Fault Of Expectation
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The mind's first instinct was to find a way to preserve itself. Which was why chakra moved in the first place. All systems were primed to keep the body alive. Rock-nin figuring out how to move chakra in a way that resulted in self-explosion, was simply astounding.
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I'll try my best to keep things going. Thanks for everything you're doing. It really helps.
ch 18 Beauty In Destruction
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It was a take that I don't see much ff writers using so... decided to use it. Plus it's kinda the only nerd i could give the technique without it becoming super weak
He actually did it. Sure, he still hadn't got over seeing from two different perspectives yet, but he just brought to life a perfect copy of himself. He wasn't one to repeat himself, but chakra was simply amazing. He had, as a novice, created a person. With mastery over chakra, one could probably cheat death. Heal themselves from usually fatal injuries. Give life to inanimate objects. Heck! If they were skilled enough, they could trap souls.
Train. Eat. Repeat. (A Naruto Fanfic)
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