Webnovel Author: StarsGod - Novel Collection

Dropado! Honestly your writing is good, but this gratuitous hate for dumbledore is exhausting, the main character doesn't help, he also has adult behavior, but children's actions. I think the author lacks empathy, trying to understand the other side is very important both to take the plot in a pleasant direction and not to make the main character unpleasant and irrational.

crap

flirting with a child congratulations

Rude to Hermione and Hagrid, you still have adult memories try to act a bit like one

Is Dumbledore the villain in this story? He didn't win anything and didn't even try to win anything, in the end why would he be a villain too? Even if some of his actions were wrong or questionable he always thought of the best for Harry and the world, what if I remember well it was Dumbledore who protected Harry's house.

Have you lived all your time in the modern era of the Muggle world, but you don't have any pressure to kill a person? I hate it when they do that to characters