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Oberon_: Why ? You think you wouldn’t be afraid in this kind of situations ?
Please, you think too highly of yourself then !
You don’t even know the difference between fear and cowardness!

System evolution of Soul · C4
3 days ago
Why ? You think you wouldn’t be afraid in this kind of situations ?
Please, you think too highly of yourself then !
You don’t even know the difference between fear and cowardness! View More

Ardi_Yuniarsyah: The MC is bit coward to me. He is an ***** but why He this coward about about world? Maybe because his environment but author-san please make him more fearless because He like be retard to me if He still like this

System evolution of Soul · C4
3 days ago
great work ! View More
System evolution of Soul · C3
3 days ago
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System evolution of Soul · C3
3 days ago
good chapter author-sama View More
Paragon of Destruction · C337
3 days ago

Oberon_: Amazing work you awesome Moron !

Reincarnated in High School DxD
5 days ago
Amazing work you awesome Moron ! View More

Royal_Lurkers: I am the exp of my sword.
webnovel is my body, and exp is my blood.
I have created over a thousand useless review.
Unknown to death, nor known to life.
Have withstood pain to create many reviews.
Yet, those hands will never hold anything.

So, as I pray...Unlimited Exp Works!.

Reincarnated in High School DxD
5 days ago

Royal_Lurkers: I am the exp of my sword.
webnovel is my body, and exp is my blood.
I have created over a thousand useless review.
Unknown to death, nor known to life.
Have withstood pain to create many reviews.
Yet, those hands will never hold anything.

So, as I pray...Unlimited Exp Works!.

Reincarnated in High School DxD
5 days ago

GianP: Still fine for first... 200 chapters? I loved the idea, the incipit of the story: an artificial subspace for yourself, which helps you grow in streghts and has lots of potential for even political or military situations. Perfect.

Then the sh*tstorm began.

At first, it was a with fine dropplets of p!ss. I call it the "yellow festival" or "yellow rain". Because it's showering praises about chinese stuff... Name whatever you want: body, mind, technology, food, etc... They have it better. Bigger empires, bloodlines etc.

But that was only the beginning. The real gross natural phenomenon began when the MC went from "perverted but still somewhat respectful pubescent boy" to "rapist without remorse" without a single reason. I'm not exaggerating here. He actually tried to stick his thing inside her thing without her consent, while she wildly tryied to free herself. What. The. Actual. F**k.

It's not only the rape that greatly disturbs me. It's the total "I dont give a single f**k" about character development or actual reason.

Also, the story was just slowly becoming worse so that finally made me drop it.

Do you have a functionally brain? Do you have a gram of self respect? Don't start reading this. You will feel disgusted and sorry for the waste of potential of this story.

Castle of Black Iron
6 days ago

Oberon_: the hell is this ?

The god of fantasy reborn · C0
1 week ago
the hell is this ? View More
The god of fantasy reborn · C0
1 week ago

Oberon_: Pretty good for a start

Dc/Marvel Reborn · C1
1 week ago
Pretty good for a start View More
Dc/Marvel Reborn · C1
1 week ago

Oberon_: Hmmmm

Dc/Marvel Reborn · C1
1 week ago
Hmmmm View More
Dc/Marvel Reborn · C1
1 week ago

DevilTriggered: I see worst stuff though, just for fun, like:
Kriptonian who can be killed by bullets and got trashed by bane on venom and Solomon Grandy..... Yeah, see some ****.

Reborn in DxD world with a Fate System
1 week ago

DevilTriggered: I take back my review,it's dissapointing story.Because autor just need's to go with shounen/cultivation sh*t logic.Well you know,those kinda of logic that you will feel bad to hear.Let me give you examples.
Apparently most op dragons in multiverse is elemental dragon empress,who can control all five elements.....Cool right?Though,in original story,we have top dragons with conceptual powers like dreams and infinity,and sh*tty fire and ice is better....inhale,,,,exhale...boiiii,
Okay,let's brush it off for now...
For readers entertaiment and building up hype for future battles,we nerf mc like twice in a day.Without joke,rine-sharingan,even if im not fan of naruto eyes,apparently -trash......Yeah.
What's not thrash is cultivation and see people weak points,because you know,eyes of death perception,who can kill shinso vampire,who born from dead god's blood and flesh-is trash too.....BOIII..
Ofcourse we all understand that this is just for the sake of plot progression and entertaiment...so let's not take it close to a heart,right?
In my previous reivew,Im point out nicely,that revealing jason secrets,make huge plotholes and even worse logic seems to screams for me from the grave,that autor put down her.But,oh well....
Apparently,guy born from two apex existance is trash without help of others and his cheats.....BOIIII...
And now 12 years(or I don't give a F*CK) kid who descendant of king arthur,beats down our hero who train and bleed for 12 years of his life,not only in swords,OH NOOO,but in a raw power.A DRAGON,A DEMON AND HERO,GOT TRASHED AROUND BY OTHER HERO DESCENDANT FOR PLOT SAKE AND MAKING FRIENDS.......if you don't know what to writte in future and just slow down story pace to this almost filler like sh*t chapters and even more TO THIS LEVEL OF ABSURDITY,maybe just maybe,you need some insipiration for future plot,because right now,it's no more than a joke.Peace out.

Reborn in DxD world with a Fate System
1 week ago

Webzayne: Extremely disappointed. The concept is good, but the execution is lacking. The laziness of the dialogue is what really set me off... Seriously, don't use stage dialogue, not only does it break the immersion of the story; it also hinders your growth as a writer. You don't learn any dialogue cues and all around; you miss out on the foundations of a good novel.

Reborn in DxD world with a Fate System
1 week ago

Csokolade: Really good so far! Hope you continue it and wont just drop it :D









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Scam_Artist: Note that my reviews are quite harsh so I'm sorry if I accidently hurt your emotional well-being.

It's quite a common trope, reincarnating into another world, and is usually quite boring. You've managed to write a snazzy redo of the genre that honestly, I quite like. Having the MC reincarnate so early on, during the cretaceous. That's pretty ingenious.

Best bits:

- Humour
- Original plot
- Nice and enjoyable world building via descriptions.
- Very well written. High quality for WebNovel.
- Interesting main character and even the Gods are fun to read. Heracles for instant, was a douche. Written well!

What needs work?

- Grammar and spelling. Double check or edit.

- Slower development. The power jump seems a bit much for only seven chapters. Maybe make it take longer for MC to gain a omniscient, omnipotent status.

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1 week ago

JakeElliott: It's unique. Grammars good. The world background is well written. The MC has a unique ability and it reflects. Overall a good read :D

DC: God of Evolution (Dropped)
1 week ago

SexyBeast: Very well written with each chapter being a decently long, Also a lot of interesting ideas meshed together by the authors ability and way of wording to create an intriguing story plot.

If I was to criticise one thing it would be the cliche introduction but that’s not really of importance and hardly affected the reading experience I had when going through this eloquently written piece.

Hopefully you continue to write this and don’t drop this amazing novel.

Not to mention they’ve invoked all these positive reviews with only 4 chapter in.

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1 week ago

Jasonenrick: For real this is great and if this is gonna stop before 100 Chapters it is a shame because there is so much creativity in this one and i would love to read it

DC: God of Evolution (Dropped)
1 week ago

Alisha10onten: Looking forward to it. Amazing story. Creative writing. Keep up the good work. Can I post a review in another language other than English? 😀 love it 😍

DC: God of Evolution (Dropped)
1 week ago

EditorBr0701: When I started reading this story I thought "humn ... Another DC story full of clueless clichés, but now ... bro ... bro! Bro! Bro !! I'm sure this is one of the beginnings of Most creative and fun story I've ever seen, it sure will be getting better, with all my sincerity good luck, and please ...




DON'T DROP !!!!

DC: God of Evolution (Dropped)
1 week ago

Jayla_Yalch: This is really awesome I love the overall plot of the story and what it's about if u haven't started reading it I'm not gonna spoil it so ur welcome

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1 week ago

Kyoang: It;s great, nice idea and great?

Overall it is great, maybe there are plotholes about history but I don't know all that as it may also be correct! (Im bad with history)

The only worry I have is that this may contain a harem but that is my personal opinion. I just dislike harem and again it is my personal opinion.

The quality of writing is great, story development is also great but it is still in the early chapters so I won't really continue comment on that.

Stability is not that great but everyone has their schedule.

Charater design is above average I guess but again still in the early chapters.

World Background is pretty much the DC universe history about Earth with twists here and there because of the MC.

And why 5 stars? Because the novel is already pretty good even if it's in it's early chapters.

Just read it and you will understand me.

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1 week ago

LASTLIFEFIRSTFIGHT: I solemnly swear to give a true review unforced by any individual , this novel is a real gem , you read it and you that it will not make you bored so I hope the author reads it and feels proud at his work and does not put this into a hiatus I have never given any powerstones before but I will give them to this fanfic

DC: God of Evolution (Dropped)
1 week ago
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