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  • Otherworldly

    Otherworldly

    Fantasy

    4.7

    Sebastian is a male nurse that has seen it all - from powerful, elite-tiered political patients to broken, forgotten scraps of humanity. When his last area of exposure goes awry, he ends up fatally wounded. Forcefully reborn into an alternate dimension which had always been closely intertwined with Earth, he is now faced with a new world to learn and grow again. How will his previous nursing skills fare in a world with magic and fantasy monsters? kofi link: https://ko-fi.com/mc_dakki

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Blakkchibz: Exp

Otherworldly · C55
3 months ago

Blakkchibz: Thx for the chapter

Otherworldly · C54
4 months ago

Choronach: Keep the good work man, I really enjoy the story so far!

Otherworldly · C34
7 months ago

UnpopularTruth: Interesting. (Also - First!)

Otherworldly · C33
7 months ago

Shinkyo1: Anticlimatic. The novel is very well written but that's it. The pace is so so slow but ... then the author makes great jumps in time without reason or explation. In a moment the mc is starting training the next has abilities and he combats. You don't know how he learn them, the process or anything. In the 14 first chapters there is not explanation of skill system. The mc is not coherent and the reactions are not realistic. He is a nurse in Africa and has stupid reactions every time he sees a dead body. He should be beyond violence, dead and ... everything. The story development doesn't have any appealing and is anticlimactic. Well, I don't want to be more critic. Maybe what surprised me more was that all where excellent reviews... The story has potencial but must be rewritten.

Otherworldly
8 months ago
Thanks for the honest feedback/review. It does make sense and I agree with you. I feel that if I had more time to edit and write I'd implement your corrections easily. Sadly I only have my beat sheet to guide me when I write my sub-threads.

In short, I did try to cram many things at once. I'll be able to finish this volume soon enough. I'll definitely spend more time on the next one. (Though I might end up releasing one chapter a week at that time again.) Thank you again! View More

TalenDrake: I'm just going to leave my feedback here rather than a review. I am losing interest in the story, and I'll explain why: The writing is too "stiff" for lack of a better word. Nothing flows well, and the reasoning of characters is non-sensical. Too discuss the forced reasoning from 2 scenes ago, in the middle of a cave-in scene lacks the ******* the scene should have. Mel of all people should not be calm in this situation. PTSD isn't cured in a week, and this constant over simplification of problems just makes the story not work at all.

You have some ability to write, however you are trying to do too much all at once. If I were your editor, I'd tell you to break the overall plot into archs with one main thread and no more than two sub-threads. One sub-thread should tie to the last main thread, and the other should fore-shadow the next main thread. Timing wise, things should be taking reasonable amounts of time months instead of days, years instead of weeks.

Otherworldly · C27
8 months ago
Yeah, I also felt the same way but she will have her reasons for killing him quickly. I'll explain it in the upcoming chapters. You're actually very keen to notice that. :) View More

TalenDrake: This chapter makes very little sense. If anything, given Becky's character, she would have tortured him for more information. So she's either in on the plan and killed him to stop him from giving out too much information, and is therefore someone to be suspicious of, or this is just completely out of character writing.

Otherworldly · C25
8 months ago

TalenDrake: This chapter makes very little sense. If anything, given Becky's character, she would have tortured him for more information. So she's either in on the plan and killed him to stop him from giving out too much information, and is therefore someone to be suspicious of, or this is just completely out of character writing.

Otherworldly · C25
8 months ago
Thank you! ^^ View More

bobing: Good!

Otherworldly · C24
8 months ago

bobing: Good!

Otherworldly · C24
8 months ago

SKrr: ... So that's where the others went

Otherworldly · C18
8 months ago

IronM: *Leo should provide this short book to serve as a guide for you.* from chap-2
*Ah this book was written before half races came about.* from chap-3.... is Leo not THE half race

Otherworldly · C3
8 months ago
Ah, I wanted to emphasise that the last Forgotten One wrote the book, and he came well before half-races were accepted in their society. Something like that. View More

IronM: *Leo should provide this short book to serve as a guide for you.* from chap-2
*Ah this book was written before half races came about.* from chap-3.... is Leo not THE half race

Otherworldly · C3
8 months ago

Chaoticmike: Mc should write a whole book on how to treat people so he wouldn't forget.

Otherworldly · C3
8 months ago

BaconPancakes: Great way to introduce the world to the mc. Kudos

Otherworldly · C2
8 months ago
Thank you! ^^ View More

BaconPancakes: Really liking this so far. Everything is well reasoned out.

Otherworldly · C6
9 months ago

BaconPancakes: Really liking this so far. Everything is well reasoned out.

Otherworldly · C6
9 months ago
Thanks! I do hope you'll continue to read. I thought that stories involving male nurses or medics were almost non-existent so I decided to focus on that. :) View More

Flipdfiles: Hmmm...I think this is something of a good start. I like that the character is a male nurse just like me. Yay!

Otherworldly · C1
9 months ago

Flipdfiles: Hmmm...I think this is something of a good start. I like that the character is a male nurse just like me. Yay!

Otherworldly · C1
9 months ago

Book_Keeper: Hello, your novel has been assessed by Virtual Bookshelf.
To see your assessment results, please navigate to
https://virtualbookshelf.home.blog/2019/02/23/webnovel-assessments-21/
Thank you, and the best of luck on your writing endeavors! :)

Otherworldly · C23
9 months ago
Thank you for your honest review! I'll definitely take it to heart and use it for my improvement. ^^ View More

Book_Keeper: Hello, your novel has been assessed by Virtual Bookshelf.
To see your assessment results, please navigate to
https://virtualbookshelf.home.blog/2019/02/23/webnovel-assessments-21/
Thank you, and the best of luck on your writing endeavors! :)

Otherworldly · C23
9 months ago
Thank you! I will try to increase the upload rate. Thanks for being patient. View More

BaconPancakes: Wish this had more chapters. I'll vote for your story from now on. Cheers!

Otherworldly · C22
9 months ago

BaconPancakes: Wish this had more chapters. I'll vote for your story from now on. Cheers!

Otherworldly · C22
9 months ago
First like/reply! Haha View More

mountainwalker132: First!

Otherworldly · C20
9 months ago

mountainwalker132: First!

Otherworldly · C20
9 months ago
Thank you. I did want to take my time (when I was writing this part) to explain the world and what he had become. I slowly explained regarding what he had become in the upcoming chapters. (maybe too slow for other people) View More

Veronica8: Nice start. The writing is pretty solid and compelling to draw my read down the page. I liked I slowly learned of Sebastian and his new world in gradual descriptions. Even though he has been somewhat transmigrated into a new body and world, there is still an end-hook to go to the next chapter. I was kind of scratching my head as to why he was given an easy explanation on what he now is. Guess that can be a foreboding for things to come.
Cool chapter. Keep writing. :)

Otherworldly · C1
9 months ago
I wanted it to show that this world relies on magick a lot instead of machines. Hopefully it will be explained later on why they don't have much in the way of technology. View More

TheVirginPervert: Mmmm? If they have received visitors from other worlds and timelines then why the technology is so underdeveloped? o.o

Otherworldly · C1
9 months ago

TheVirginPervert: Mmmm? If they have received visitors from other worlds and timelines then why the technology is so underdeveloped? o.o

Otherworldly · C1
9 months ago

Veronica8: **: sorry for my crappy commenting, my keyboard is playing up and finding it funny to skip over words - lol!

Otherworldly · C1
9 months ago

Veronica8: Nice start. The writing is pretty solid and compelling to draw my read down the page. I liked I slowly learned of Sebastian and his new world in gradual descriptions. Even though he has been somewhat transmigrated into a new body and world, there is still an end-hook to go to the next chapter. I was kind of scratching my head as to why he was given an easy explanation on what he now is. Guess that can be a foreboding for things to come.
Cool chapter. Keep writing. :)

Otherworldly · C1
9 months ago
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