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male LV 3I write stuff I don't like ruthless sociopath murder hobos who kill anyone who blinks at them I am a Broly fanboy
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Thanks dude
I don't want to keep you in the dark about what's happening, especially when some of you are still giving power stones. I also don't want to use the excuse of "This is my first time writing" but my inexperience and 'go with the flow' mentality really fumbled the trajectory of the novel.
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Mind the capital letters
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I think 'Has' should be 'As' here
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Very interesting idea I like the concept a lot but the formatting is a bit off for me When a character is speaking, I tend to describe the appearance and then give an indication that the person speaking in quotes is them Writing the characters name and then what they say after that breaks the immersion a little bit for me personally but the idea is interesting although you'll have to handle the power of the MC being very high from the start
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nah
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that's embarrassing
A young green-skinned woman looked out of the window in her spaceship, bored. She had short green hair and a slender curvy build. She wore a dark green scouter on her left eye and was wearing standard battle armour.
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ch 138 Outmatched (138)
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King Cole's strength was inflated for two reasons: 1. To represent the capabilities of Frost Demons 2. Out of those inflated numbers, durability is his highest, so while he couldn't hurt Broly, he wouldn't get one shot
ch 138 Outmatched (138)
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precision
"Haha! Flying robot go brr!" he shouted as he mashed buttons on his navigation desk.
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if you want to drop it you don't have to tell me
ch 15 Conniving Bastard (15)
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his personality changes
'That doesn't give you the right to put your hands on her!'
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lmfao
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I'm not a good author
ch 131 Greater Science (131)
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yah
ch 0 -1 Romances (SpOiLeRs)
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The gotenks ghosts
He stepped into the kitchen where several ki ghosts were whipping up meals as quickly as they could, drawing on the knowledge that Broly had while he controlled them mentally.
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mastered
ch 40 Organic Vs Artificial (40)
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lmfao
"OMEGASTORM!" he yelled, his loud voice echoing through the canyon, like an angry decree from God. He shifted his waist forward and pushed out his cupped hands, releasing every bit of anger he could draw from in one attack.
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Rebrand bro
ch 148 REWORK
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