thanks.
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Urban · Ultravioletx
Ultimately, I will be reusing a lot of the basic creatures for random BP masters & trainees. It's just easier compared to trying to think of an animals design for every tamer, and given how I added the concept of breeding and selling the same animals to multiple people, I have to show it as well. I like the idea you mentioned though, giving real names for significant creatures.
ch 35 Chapter 34 - Coaxing Zaututor's
Fantasy · Ultravioletx
I have to say, for a character that I used an existing template for, I spent a rediculous amount of time designing him. It was far easier designing Amber and John. I wanted to hit people with the nostalgia for those that would recognise him, while making enough changes so that I wouldn't get hit with writing an existing character into my story. His beasts too, once I reveal them, I can't buff them off screen so to speak. This guy is a Paragon character type, for reasons that will be revealed, although some can probably guess why. I altered the cloak, hair colour, clothing, and the original didn't have much of a personality, so writing one in fixed that issue. Some beasts, likewise have been changed. Lance used to give me nightmares when trying to best him in Pokemon Stadium 2 using rental Pokemon.
"This is Lance. He wanted to meet with you."
Fantasy · Ultravioletx
hmm, I don't think I explained myself well before. Ultimately, just claiming it as a 'rare 10,000 year old awesome plant' or something just won't cut it. People in the fictional world would have found some, and the Gov would certainly be searching the known areas such an awesome plant' would grow, sending high stage forces. And not even to use it, but to try grow more and expand it's supply, for long term growth. It's usually how a force focused on long term growth would act, instead of pillaging and using it immediately. Even if they were ignorant of such a plant, who in their right mind would eat a random plant. They would have to be aware it could increase their growth in the first place. Which leads back to the first problem. Just having Jamie be lucky is kinda a cop out. I can use that maybe once, but not repeatedly.
ch 27 Chapter 26 - Red Stripe Falcons
Fantasy · Ultravioletx
I'll admit, I've always kept that kinda option available from the get go. It's a pretty common occurrence in cultivation novels. He's not even stage one atm. He's simply too fragile, especially considering the collateral destruction his beasts will be capable of at later stages. The trick will be to make it rare, and something sparingly used, because if I use that trick all the time, the logical question people will ask is "if he can do it so easily, why can't other people in the story do so as well." I can maybe pull it off in the first portal entry, after all, the human race has just started exploring it. Maybe make a fruit that is toxic to the natives, beneficial to humans. It would kinda explain why other humans wouldn't have tried it. I'd also have to explain why he eats it though. Ultimately, I'd need to think more on the idea. Thanks for the idea.
ch 27 Chapter 26 - Red Stripe Falcons
Fantasy · Ultravioletx
Thanks. I don't plan on quitting this one. If I decide to start a new story the release schedule for this one will slow down to maybe 2-3 chapters per week. I have in mind starting a survival type story, that I think will be more suited to the readers of webnovel readers interests in general. Best of all, for the most part it won't require me to do research.
ch 26 Chapter 25 - Cleanup
Fantasy · Ultravioletx
Thanks. I don't plan on quitting this one. If I decide to start a new story the release schedule for this one will slow down to maybe 2-3 chapters per week. I have in mind starting a survival type story, that I think will be more suited to the readers of webnovel readers interests in general. Best of all, for the most part it won't require me to do research.
ch 26 Chapter 25 - Cleanup
Fantasy · Ultravioletx
Meant to be Jamie, thanks.
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Fantasy · Ultravioletx
Meant to be Jamie, thanks.
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Fantasy · Ultravioletx
Thanks, I'll fix it now
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Fantasy · Ultravioletx
Oh, and of course, I'm throwing in action, and various conflicts.
Thanks, much appreciated
ch 11 Chapter 10 - Ivan's Evaluation
Fantasy · Ultravioletx
Thanks for pointing it out, meant hoarse, as in the way a voice sounds.
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Fantasy · Ultravioletx
Dunno how I managed to mix them up lol. Thanks for pointing it out.
Battlepet Masters
Fantasy · Ultravioletx