Webnovel Author: Alemaari - Novel Collection

A good example how webnovel ruins a good story by subpar translation. I remember reading this story with original character names but now everything is westernized and that too with inconsistent character names. I got headache by trying to keep up in first few chapters itself. Nothing against the author. It is a nice story.

the story is good but needs some editing. if grammar and spellings are refined it's really good as characters are strong and so is the storyline. I am no expert but I could help if the author is interest. because I really did like the characters.