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spelling to be edit 'death' , 'they' .

Now she realized that she is always an eye sore to them. They have always shown their reluctance clearly on their devilish yet pretentious faces ever since her parents deatg. But she was in deep love with her cunning family  to notice it. Taking it as granted tgey used her in all the ways they can and dumped her now. 

Ms. Attractive and inciting CEO

Ms. Attractive and inciting CEO

Urban · Har_V

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make it affection not affecting

While his voice sounded touching, there was no affecting in his eyes as he glanced at the wooden table beside him. Ah, if anything, she should be the one thanking him, right? Who wouldn't want to get out of this hellhole?

The Bigshot Shocks The World When She Backs Home

The Bigshot Shocks The World When She Backs Home

Urban · Mountain Stream

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wrong again

The little follower continued, "I, I don't care about you. Just opened the shop. Brother Bao, brother Bao, I want you to pay. Just, that's right. ".

The daughter of a wealthy family who had been reborn earned a lot of money

The daughter of a wealthy family who had been reborn earned a lot of money

Urban · Yin Yiyu

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I think house should be shop here...just helping you...sorry to bother writer

Lao Min looked at the house carefully. It seemed to be newly renovated. The design and structure of the house was something she hadn't seen in a long time. It was very new and beautiful.

The daughter of a wealthy family who had been reborn earned a lot of money

The daughter of a wealthy family who had been reborn earned a lot of money

Urban · Yin Yiyu

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first sentence is again with errors

Two hours of practice was neither fast nor fast, but neither slow nor slow. It was enough to torture her. She casually learned etiquette because, as the daughter of the Lu Corporation, a party or something like that was indispensable Moreover, the Wang Mother and daughter would definitely find a way to mess with her, so she had to learn etiquette so that she would not lose face.

The daughter of a wealthy family who had been reborn earned a lot of money

The daughter of a wealthy family who had been reborn earned a lot of money

Urban · Yin Yiyu

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sentence has error...

Taking out her cell phone, Lu Yuxi made a call. "Hello, this is Lu Yuxi. May I ask if the Model I customized with you last time still has a special coat hanger completed? "

The daughter of a wealthy family who had been reborn earned a lot of money

The daughter of a wealthy family who had been reborn earned a lot of money

Urban · Yin Yiyu

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beautiful lines..and damm it's true

It's always the people in our life that defines our life. We don't get tired of life, we get tired of the people in it. Life doesn't become hard all of a sudden, it's always the people who make everything seem hard for us. Most of all, life in itself isn't that precious. The people we love makes it precious for us.

Imperfect Desires

Imperfect Desires

Urban · XiaoMeeHee

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