Webnovel Author: Clockhours - Novel Collection

It's a fast paced story and I like it. The background of every character is well written. The world background is a believable one. Now, in my opinion, you should try different words for different characters dialogue. Like in 1st chapter I found different characters saying the the same words like okay, sure etc. You are writing it in the First person POV and it's a little confusing when, other than the main character's perspective is mentioned as I feel that you are transitioning very fast from character to character. Overall, it's a great read.

In the beginning, the description felt a little poetic and it was good. I have never seen a story open with such intriguing chapter. More chapters are needed to understand the story better, but from what I have read, this story has a very good potential. Don't put the translation in same volume, it distracts the readers and breaks the readers momentum. No one likes to get distracted while they are reading. Hope, you go forward with this story.

This GIF would be lot better if it had Sheldon in it.

Duly noted and will make sure of it.

Yeah, that sure is crazy but possible.

This is my first time reading a story based on India. I like the way you set up the world by mixing the culture and history. Overall, the characters are great and the story is solid. There are few things which I feel should be looked into. There is an excessive use of description. I totally agree with the world building description but when describing the characters it would have been better if you did it by mixing dialogues in midst of it. The mission part, where the head was briefing them, I kind of felt as the team members are amateurs going to a mission of national importance. I mean, come on, those who are selected for these types of mission are given atleast basic training before being sent to their mission. All the instructions given by the head would have been more interesting if they showed it through their actions or when they are in a situation and remembers the word of their head. Otherwise this novel is a pleasure to read.

The storyline seems interesting, the book will become more solid if you give the characters more depth. Keep up the good work and the book more unique.

This is my first time reading a web novel of crime genre. I was hooked from the first chapter. The way you introduce the characters are just mind blowing. I have only read few chapters and is eager to read more. This book is a hidden gem. I don't understand why this types of book never come in top 10 and all. Hope, many more readers would have the luck to read your work soon.

I just read few chapters and what should I say, I am unable to keep your story down. The first thing I liked about this book are the descriptions, it was just spot on. And the second best thing, characters. These characters and their reaction felt so realistic. Keep up the good work, I would like to read more of it.

Yeah, working on it.