I think you mean the first OFA user, and no. All for One can, in my little story here, see quirks someone has, and his brother doesn't have one. Instead, it's the stockpiling quirk that stockpiled All for One himself, and also his quirk, which let it give itself away.
ch 0 1 Waking Up
Anime & Comics · appleb0i
Tomura got saved by all might after the fight with All for One
ch 15 Choices
Anime & Comics · appleb0i
Id say so, yes, as while it isnt canon compliant, even if it was it would still be a fanfic
I hope that my brother comes to his senses soon. This little rebellion of his has to end, or he will be exploited by one of my enemies soon.
Anime & Comics · appleb0i
Thanks, its lovely to hear that people enjoy my writing. Its never too late [img=recommend]
ch 31 Have To End
Anime & Comics · appleb0i
Might sound better if it’s the Uchiha clan instead of Uchiha clan, but that might just be me
"Mom, who was he? With his tone of voice and emotions shown on his face, I think he could be a plant, no wait! Can Uchiha clan resurrect corpses!?" Ryuichi questioned as they neared near the main building.
Anime & Comics · dahnik
A throw through her left arm? Did you mean a throw with her left arm, as in using her left arm to throw someone?
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Anime & Comics · dahnik
Pretty sure you meant sparring here, not sparing
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Anime & Comics · dahnik
Pretty sure the dot at the end here is unnecessary
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Anime & Comics · dahnik
I think it will flow better if it says; as the sun was slowly hiding under the horizon, instead of; the sun was slowly hiding under the horizon
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Anime & Comics · dahnik
I think it will be better if it says with a not not exactly hidden laugh, compared to with not exactly hidden smile
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Anime & Comics · dahnik
I take this comment as some dislike of the ending, but I think it fit. It might be a bit to open, but I felt as if this was a good place to end. Remember, to All For One no price is too great, including his own life, something he is always willing to risk as long as the risk and reward ratio is good, which in this case it was.
ch 31 Have To End
Anime & Comics · appleb0i
I might make that, although I am not sure. I might also make a few more chapters exploring the relationship between Kuro and Kyoko, although school is kicking my ass, and All Might summed it up nicely; They are more or less on will with two bodies, and their bond through All For One makes it essentially impossible for them to disagree on a goal.
ch 31 Have To End
Anime & Comics · appleb0i
Thank you for the compliment! I might make some chapters after this where the two of them interact, but school is currently kicking my ass.
ch 31 Have To End
Anime & Comics · appleb0i
Perhaps a little late for any response, but I wouldn't say my story is that good. I'm just another idiot with a computer. But much of the content here, on this website, is... subpar translations and powerwanks, and I hope to avoid that atleast a little. At least you don't have to read it machine translated
Kleptomania
Anime & Comics · appleb0i