Karnaaa
Lv 1- Joined Jun 2019
- Indonesia
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Its three because one has been taken
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Hetero X Chromia : Life Purpose of Heterochromia Boy
Bagas Askara, adalah pemuda yang hampir selalu bisa memecahkan masalah dengan baik. Namun tidak dengan satu hal yang bermasalah dalam hidupnya. Dia tak bisa menemukan tujuan hidupnya dan dia tak bisa memecahkan masalah itu. Putus asa mencari jawaban dia meminta bantuan sahabat-sahabatnya. Bantuan yang diberikan membuatnya bisa memutuskan hal yang paling sulit untuk dipilih dalam hidupnya.
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A Song for Aleyn
Roland was an Ex-Paladin who had thrown his dignity because of failure. Now he lives in a regretful life and doesn’t know what to do. Until a red-haired girl come to him and ask for an appointment he offers. At first, Roland didn’t know what the girl means until a meaning and painful memories bring him to a new choice. He wants to live for the girl and make her happy with her life. Start with giving the nameless girl a name with Aleyn.
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Pengantin Lima Ratus Juta
mila_kaisar: Bahasane cuuukkkk..hahahahahhaahahaaa....lanjutttt
Pengantin Lima Ratus Juta · C7
INdra_Saputra: Bagusbahjjxbhxhxhbxbxbxggxuuxjjdiskdjchhdkdkdjnxhhcksldmckcjcjcxhhxudodcldkjdhvdhxdkdjxchdhhdhsbhggsygdhhfkfldldkhshsgsyshdfjckdhdd&udusjdhyysbdh
Pengantin Lima Ratus Juta
Dinikurniawaty: Rian kamu ternyata lucu juga....
Siap2 aja dimutilasi ama bagas ....ha..ha..ha..Pengantin Lima Ratus Juta · C11
Actually I'm not very good at grammar and writing a story. but I will and still learning to level up my skill, looking forward for next comment View More
MidgetDwarve: Honestly, i dont know where to begin on this one. Like what time period was this taking place?
And why did the cat knight or whatever ask the most obvious question? Even an idiot could tell it was suspicious.
And also you never explain how did the character look like. I thought bird knight was just code name. Since when did he have wings?
And where was this taking place again?
And grammar was pretty bad in this one. In the first paragraph, i could spot a grammar issue right away.- a · C0
A Song for Aleyn
KEVIN_ESP: Nice story you got there, the background is also quite interesting even though this kind of story is everywhere. But I will still look forward to the continuation of your story. I'm waiting for the next chapter, O writer.
A Song for Aleyn
Overall, except the grammar, is good,.keep it up View More
ALKISAH - Doa Untuk Dunia [1001 CERPEN FANTASI INDONESIA]
For example when the sentence tells that riko is male "he" but in the next instance riko became female "she" View More
ALKISAH - Doa Untuk Dunia [1001 CERPEN FANTASI INDONESIA] · C0
Older reviewer said the grammar doesnt good, but I see the grammar quite well that makes me think you must had revise it and thats good, keep it up View More
Legend of Bumi
Legend of Bumi · C2
For the character, I think Lie characteristic is somekind good because he feels alive on the story, laslty its somehow make it peculiar when the archer said "Earth? Are you kidding ... " thats make the scent odd because somehow the archer know what is earth anyway View More
Legend of Bumi · C1
