I love romance and I'm an aspiring author! I'm still young so my writing still needs work, but I hope you reed my novels and watch me steadily improve! I hope you enjoy my novels <3
2019-02-09 Joined United Kingdom
What can I say, It's as amazing as usual! I can't wait for more and am loving the story idea!
ch 0 1 The Seventh Sin
Fantasy · Asriel_Lynis
it isn't bad but I feel like descriptions are really lacking and the writing itself is very lacklustre. Also why do I need to know that his boots were made of steel? I think it's a nice try but it does need improvement. The story idea isn't bad but its just the writing itself that I find a bit awkward. I'm sure you will do better next time good luck!
Opening his eyes, he looked at the person in front of him. The person was not as Andre expected she would be. His boots were made from steel. As his gaze moved forward, that person was a white-haired woman wearing full-plate armor. It was totally weird. If she was a soldier, she could have worn the same combat uniform that Andre currently wore.
Fantasy · Blare_
I'm sure people will like it! I definitely did :)
Umm so I'm the author! I hope you like the first chapter! <3
ch 0 1 Chapter One : Psycho
History · KikiLovesRainbows
ur gay
ch 0 4 The Slave King
An Angel's Requiem
Fantasy · Asriel_Lynis