Webnovel Author: KikiLovesRainbows

KikiLovesRainbows

2yr

Commented

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ch 0 4 The Slave King

An Angel's Requiem

Fantasy · Asriel_Lynis

KikiLovesRainbows

3yr

Commented

I really love this! It's such an interesting story and I love how it was written. The characters are all dynamic and interesting and the writing is fluent and easy to read. I can't wait for more! [img=recommend]

ch 0 3 Interference

An Angel's Requiem

Fantasy · Asriel_Lynis

KikiLovesRainbows

3yr

Commented

What can I say, It's as amazing as usual! I can't wait for more and am loving the story idea!

ch 0 1 The Seventh Sin

An Angel's Requiem

Fantasy · Asriel_Lynis

KikiLovesRainbows

3yr

Commented

it isn't bad but I feel like descriptions are really lacking and the writing itself is very lacklustre. Also why do I need to know that his boots were made of steel? I think it's a nice try but it does need improvement. The story idea isn't bad but its just the writing itself that I find a bit awkward. I'm sure you will do better next time good luck!

Opening his eyes, he looked at the person in front of him. The person was not as Andre expected she would be. His boots were made from steel. As his gaze moved forward, that person was a white-haired woman wearing full-plate armor. It was totally weird. If she was a soldier, she could have worn the same combat uniform that Andre currently wore.

Modern Demon System

Fantasy · Blare_

KikiLovesRainbows

3yr

Commented

Ooh its good!

ch 0 1 The Sin of Hate

This Broken World.

Fantasy · Asriel_Lynis

KikiLovesRainbows

3yr

Replied to Asriel_Lynis

I'm sure people will like it! I definitely did :)

This Broken World.

Fantasy · Asriel_Lynis

KikiLovesRainbows

3yr

Posted

I love how so far there's only one chapter but it's already amazing! I love the ideas behind it and the powers that you have given. I think this ism ust so well thought out and can't wait for more! A lot of potential :)