Webnovel Author: Nebula18457 - Novel Collection

Overall the stories there. But the author needs to work on their grammar. But well reading, the good parts of the novel outweigh the bad. Like the author's descriptions and the way that they describe the characters.

The novel was amazing, the storyline flowed well, the plot made sense, and the character design was good too. But the grammar wasn't up to scratch. There's a lot of work that needs to be done when it comes to this aspect of things. That said, keep going author, you're doing an amazing job so far.

Overall, the novel was amazing. One thing I loved from the novel most was the raw emotions shown between the characters. But I think the author could've added some more descriptive language in some places.

The novel's too slow-paced, the world-building is too messy, and the is non-existent. Not to mention, the first 20 chaps are all just filler. Lastly, the author seems to enjoy abusing the mc a little too much.

your welcome (bow)

It was honestly speaking a great read, I really enjoyed it. What I loved most about it was the heartwarming and humourous relationship between the friends. But there were just quite a few grammar mistakes here and there. I feel like the author could be a bit more descriptive in places as well. but overall good job author.

That's exactly what I was going for. And of course, I know my writing could be more polished, but I am still learning. I'm only 16, and have a long way to go.

I fixed up some of the things you mentioned so go check it out.