Webnovel Author: Sloth_Incarnate - Fanfic&Novel Collection

Is this multiverse?

I don’t actually like many of the Main characters of Naruto ( The Main 9 or so) but I really enjoy the world and its past. I also like the past characters more. The previous eras are just overall more interesting to me. And finally I feel like it challenges/forces authors to not follow the plot of cannon. It basically forces creativity in fanfiction. So any story that is set before cannon is an automatic plus for me.

The idea seems cool but it’s way to close to cannon for my taste. If it was duringy other period in the world I would be all in. Goodluck tho!

You really have a problem with going into unnecessary history lessons.

I feel like none of the characters have a personality, even MC. Their has been no interpersonal connections shown at all. Everything is very robotic.

Umm, I really hope the MC gets his scheming nature back, it’s what made him interesting. Other than that he’s basically the same as every other si.

Not the story, just this fight

‘Stuck in illusion’ is such a boring trope. Love the story overall, this part just isn’t great

It’s starting to drag

Option 2

You keep saying 2D but it’s a FIVR game, so it would 100% be 3D

The og plot I mean

Original Timeline pls, no reason to follow the plot.

Is their gonna be a timskip soon? Or is the whole story about them at 7?

Wouldn’t Naruto’s family name still be Uzumaki? Since his father isn’t in a clan and Kushina’s Clan takes priority over his. Also it wouldn’ be to surprising if Minato took on her family name.

Do you have extras chaps for this story on your pat-reon?

All this comes off incredibly forced