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TOFIE: I am not sure, about the faults in you're story, but I can give ideas to spice up the plot of your novel. I would say since he is from a very advance field of medicine and since the original story is centre implied by emotions and graphic violence, you could give your character a sense of development by using what he is, like religion and the viewpoint of his religion about slaughter, let it conflict with the characters thoughts. Aka, A father kills his only child,, to his religion, the man is in the wrong for murdering an innocent child, but to the main characters knowledge the child is a ghoul and the father is a CCG member, there is no right or wrong to his perspective, simply because that is the law of society, but the main character has options to kill the father by following his religion's teachings or to ignore because of his own thoughts and morality or simply walk away from the conflict and not get involved.

What Authors on this site miss when writing stories is that your main characters are living people you write and they are not limited slowly because the plot demands it, you have the freedom to give them alternative actions other than the plot and their decisions will heavily affect the other characters of the story, either with severe consequences the next chapter for letting the father go or saving a ghoul which will bring him to the CCG attention, everything is interconnected and should hold the weight to each worth.

Plot and Character-driven stories are what drives the readers to commit to the story, a continuous plot is very boring and not fun to read, you probably know this, because Chinese novels share the same sin, but I believe you must learn about plotting and character choice consequences.

Tokyo Ghoul: Rewrite · C3
2 days ago
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TOFIE: Honestly, so much useless words , explaining and explaing with a boring main character, like wtf.

Tokyo Ghoul: Rewrite · C3
6 days ago
Thank you for reading. I appreciate the comment. Please point out the faults that makes the story. Its really a big help for me in writing. View More

TOFIE: Honestly, so much useless words , explaining and explaing with a boring main character, like wtf.

Tokyo Ghoul: Rewrite · C3
6 days ago
Thank you for the comment I really appreciate criticism to improve my writing. I would like to ask the specific faults of the characters. Thank you for reading. View More

john_someone: wow just wow. First time I told someone ITS DOESN’T MATCH meh good story bad character xdxdxdxdxdxdx d x d x d x. D d d d d d d d d. Did. D d d d d did x x x x x. Did. D d x x x. X d d d d. Xxxxxxx

Tokyo Ghoul: Rewrite
6 days ago
Thank you for the comment I really appreciate criticism to improve my writing. I would like to ask the specific faults of the characters. Thank you for reading. View More

john_someone: wow just wow. First time I told someone ITS DOESN’T MATCH meh good story bad character xdxdxdxdxdxdx d x d x d x. D d d d d d d d d. Did. D d d d d did x x x x x. Did. D d x x x. X d d d d. Xxxxxxx

Tokyo Ghoul: Rewrite
6 days ago
Thank you for the comment I really appreciate criticism to improve my writing. I would like to ask the specific faults of the characters. Thank you for reading. View More

john_someone: wow just wow. First time I told someone ITS DOESN’T MATCH meh good story bad character xdxdxdxdxdxdx d x d x d x. D d d d d d d d d. Did. D d d d d did x x x x x. Did. D d x x x. X d d d d. Xxxxxxx

Tokyo Ghoul: Rewrite
6 days ago

john_someone: wow just wow. First time I told someone ITS DOESN’T MATCH meh good story bad character xdxdxdxdxdxdx d x d x d x. D d d d d d d d d. Did. D d d d d did x x x x x. Did. D d x x x. X d d d d. Xxxxxxx

Tokyo Ghoul: Rewrite
6 days ago
Unbreakable Machine Doll on the works. View More
Magical Academy: Rise of the Supreme Magic Craftsman · C130
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Magical Academy: Rise of the Supreme Magic Craftsman · C130
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Vicarma: JUst confuse here is the mainframe computer of the A.I with Wallace or on his ship he left behind?

Magical Academy: Rise of the Supreme Magic Craftsman · C119
2 months ago
Reading Status: C119
Its getting good must read book because its all about magic and school stuff so a recommindable good stories I can say. This review is jut for xp while everything is meesed up in this world i suggest reading inside your house with this kinds of stories wold be very wonderful thing to get away from boredom. ITs goood that everything is normal situation in this story you can imgaine that it really gave a senses of wonderful succes to anyone. I am glad tha finaly it reach a good wonderful xp her just for xp here moment in its plot development. I hope the author would make this more exciting and stuff. View More
Magical Academy: Rise of the Supreme Magic Craftsman
2 months ago
JUst confuse here is the mainframe computer of the A.I with Wallace or on his ship he left behind? View More
Magical Academy: Rise of the Supreme Magic Craftsman · C119
2 months ago
congrats View More
Magical Academy: Rise of the Supreme Magic Craftsman · C117
2 months ago
Curios View More

Vicarma: Those magic fighters what will happen if they use Wallace's magic tools. Gettung exciting here.

Magical Academy: Rise of the Supreme Magic Craftsman · C116
2 months ago
Those magic fighters what will happen if they use Wallace's magic tools. Gettung exciting here. View More
Magical Academy: Rise of the Supreme Magic Craftsman · C116
2 months ago

Vicarma: Its amazing he has this power. Why didn't anayone notice the changes in his mana levels or whatever magic he has now?

Magical Academy: Rise of the Supreme Magic Craftsman · C115
2 months ago
Its amazing he has this power. Why didn't anayone notice the changes in his mana levels or whatever magic he has now? View More
Magical Academy: Rise of the Supreme Magic Craftsman · C115
2 months ago
Magic bus driver accelerate the speed please. View More

Vicarma: How far is the competition held at. The traffic is really bad on montego.

Magical Academy: Rise of the Supreme Magic Craftsman · C114
2 months ago
How far is the competition held at. The traffic is really bad on montego. View More
Magical Academy: Rise of the Supreme Magic Craftsman · C114
2 months ago
That was beautiful a new progress. View More
The Mech Touch · C1292
2 months ago

Vicarma: Sigh

Magical Academy: Rise of the Supreme Magic Craftsman · C113
2 months ago
Sigh View More
Magical Academy: Rise of the Supreme Magic Craftsman · C113
2 months ago
Just xo here View More

Vicarma: Why us the bus so slow, is the traffic in monetego worst?

Magical Academy: Rise of the Supreme Magic Craftsman · C112
2 months ago
Why us the bus so slow, is the traffic in monetego worst? View More
Magical Academy: Rise of the Supreme Magic Craftsman · C112
2 months ago
Reading Status: C1285
Vey nice the mech engineer is now engage in battle witha mech pilot how wasill he be able to withstand the capabilities of time. I must know ebertonr favorite as I pursue thr dramsb O had just for xp here. View More
The Mech Touch
2 months ago

Vicarma: Nice xp here

The Mech Touch · C1285
2 months ago
Nice xp here View More
The Mech Touch · C1285
2 months ago
Reading Status: C1280
Xp here just so you know like everyting iesls mech is wonderful and a lot of wonder couod be ssenne. Onside the story i mist say the author did jua beat in manking sucj wonderduos storys i appreciated the storu hsododnd. Just for xp. View More
The Mech Touch
2 months ago
Thanks for the chapter View More

Vicarma: I wonder what will be the expression of the two mana technicians when they meet wallace with different mana level inside hid body.

Magical Academy: Rise of the Supreme Magic Craftsman · C110
2 months ago
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