Webnovel Author: virus23 - Fanfic Collection

virus23

10mth

Commented

where are you? where did you go? don't tell me this is dropped

ch 71 Transferring Klee's Luck onto Oneself

Genshin Impact: Picking up a Little Loli at the Beginning

Games · fanticelove

virus23

10mth

Posted

sir author, I am getting hook on your writing, although it's confusing now, I hope in 10 chapter I would able to understand the world you are creating.

Is it wrong to pick up Maidens in new world?(Bell Cranel x Elden Ring)

Anime & Comics · Jumbo_Ignir

virus23

10mth

Commented

I think you make mistake here

"How about we go around Liyue Harbor together?" Jean proposed.

Genshin Impact: I Open Manga Store in Teyvat

Video Games · Otaku_Weaboo

virus23

10mth

Commented

what aether, are we in jams or aether. this is confusing

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Genshin Impact: Picking up a Little Loli at the Beginning

Games · fanticelove

virus23

11mth

Commented

what when did heroine become him.

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Villain Is on Vacation

Fantasy · Madwriter_2377

virus23

11mth

Commented

ch 31 31. A Contract

Genshin Impact: Spreading Anime Culture Across Teyvat

Video Games · UltimateSenpai

virus23

11mth

Commented

how aether? shouldn't it be jam

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Genshin Impact: Picking up a Little Loli at the Beginning

Games · fanticelove

virus23

11mth

Posted

hello sir, I hope you to continue this work, it's my guilty pleasure to read fanfic. and so onward I would like to read it

Genshin Impact: Cyber Zone

Anime & Comics · AntiUniverse

virus23

11mth

Commented

this make no sense, how come lumine got caught. rather it should lumine is the one who caught me(paimon) from lake. don't take this as personal, just let you know

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Genshin Impact: Picking up a Little Loli at the Beginning

Games · fanticelove

virus23

11mth

Commented

tugged on lumine, and said Rosalyn make no sense. hope to correct this para

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Genshin Impact: Picking up a Little Loli at the Beginning

Games · fanticelove

virus23

11mth

Commented

sir, author. thank once again. it was great chapter

ch 59 Paimon is a cute little thing

Genshin Impact: Picking up a Little Loli at the Beginning

Games · fanticelove

virus23

11mth

Commented

change it, you will only confused it again with archon.

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Genshin Impact: Picking up a Little Loli at the Beginning

Games · fanticelove

virus23

11mth

Posted

author nim, I enjoy your work and glad to be read it.. high rating is due to its being an already develop. so forgive me, but the writing quality is good, although I am not a English specialist, but writing quality is quite easy to read. your update stability is quite strong indeed. there are certain para which confused the heck out of me.. thank you of writing but sometime, I feel like committing some crime

Genshin Impact: Picking up a Little Loli at the Beginning

Games · fanticelove

virus23

11mth

Replied to fanticelove

I mean, you wrote sucrose, even though she didn't appear. in this para, shouldnt it be someone present there

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Genshin Impact: Picking up a Little Loli at the Beginning

Games · fanticelove

virus23

11mth

Commented

quite a irony, freya goddess of love and hunt, in methodology has many affair

Freya right now is turned on, since she met John when she was disguised as Syr, she never had s*x with another man and she has never been turned on by the other man anymore, it's like her body rejecting all men and only John was allowed to take her Body.

Chakra Progenitor

Anime & Comics · Alfon_Soultan

virus23

11mth

Commented

I'm confused, sucrose didn't appear. how come. I'm confused

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Genshin Impact: Picking up a Little Loli at the Beginning

Games · fanticelove

virus23

11mth

Posted

author nim, hope you continue your work. I love your work. rating are low due to low chapter, hope you can continue

Teyvat Gaming Cafe

Anime & Comics · Kryostar

virus23

11mth

Commented

45 degree is some kind of punchline. although it is interesting, but

Jams looked up at the starry sky at a forty-five-degree angle, and his deep eyes seemed to conceal countless untold stories. "It is precisely because I have seen through this point that I want to step out of this world and become an angler who lives in peace with the world."