Webnovel Author: lelisPw - Fanfic Collection

lelisPw

1yr

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this chapter washed my soul...😤😤😤

ch 89 Little Chat

Journey of the Immortal Grandmaster

Eastern · This_one_

lelisPw

1yr

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what hurt the story for me was "Gai" .he already tried to join the ANBU, but the Hokage himself said it wasn't for him. he was already recognized as a strong ninja. ANBU are for sober people.

ch 34 Chapter - 34 Miko's Request

Reborn into Naruto World with Tenseigan

Anime & Comics · Alex_Clive

lelisPw

1yr

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the queen betrayed zulong ?

ch 130 Son of the Dragon

Primitive age of Xianxia (Honghuang style xianxia, Pseudo insert)

Book&Literature · Christopher_who

lelisPw

2yr

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honestly, I really enjoyed this chapter.

ch 216 The Young Blacksmith

Cultivating Disciples to Breakthrough

Eastern · PurpleSpring

lelisPw

2yr

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please don't make ZARAKI just any weakling.

ch 14 Hearty Battle

Bleach Swordsman of Kusajishi

Anime & Comics · nyawdao

lelisPw

2yr

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thanks for the chapter

ch 188 Wooden Box and Demon Ape~

Cultivating Disciples to Breakthrough

Eastern · PurpleSpring

lelisPw

2yr

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thanks for the chapter

ch 168 Formation Pillar

Cultivating Disciples to Breakthrough

Eastern · PurpleSpring

lelisPw

2yr

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thanks for the chapter

ch 168 Formation Pillar

Cultivating Disciples to Breakthrough

Eastern · PurpleSpring

lelisPw

2yr

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Obrigado pelo capítulo

ch 162 Secret Realm?

Cultivating Disciples to Breakthrough

Eastern · PurpleSpring

lelisPw

2yr

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thanks for the chapter.

ch 154 Wang Hu and Wang Lan Arrive!

Cultivating Disciples to Breakthrough

Eastern · PurpleSpring

lelisPw

2yr

Commented

Another tip, try reading bad cultivation novels, it will help you not commit in your story.

ch 150 Cure for the Plague?

Cultivating Disciples to Breakthrough

Eastern · PurpleSpring

lelisPw

2yr

Commented

Maybe because you're leaving so many holes open...?Try reading in past chapters. It might open up new ideas... Try to focus more on the MC's martial arts instead of just cultivation. Try to focus on the kingdom's counterattacks, what they are doing under the plan... What are they doing under the plans. Note: this is a tip related to your lack of creativity... And I'm sorry if I offended you.

ch 150 Cure for the Plague?

Cultivating Disciples to Breakthrough

Eastern · PurpleSpring

lelisPw

2yr

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Obrigado pelo capítulo.

ch 148 Smash and Grab

Cultivating Disciples to Breakthrough

Eastern · PurpleSpring

lelisPw

2yr

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thanks for the chapter.

ch 148 Smash and Grab

Cultivating Disciples to Breakthrough

Eastern · PurpleSpring

lelisPw

2yr

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thanks for the chapter.

ch 147 The Double D

Cultivating Disciples to Breakthrough

Eastern · PurpleSpring

lelisPw

2yr

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Obrigado pelo capítulo

ch 141 Reaching the Border

Cultivating Disciples to Breakthrough

Eastern · PurpleSpring

lelisPw

2yr

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Although the main characters appear only in one room.does not mean that there is only Naruto's ... When Naruto failed.And I was on the tree swing looking at the gym. There were several families receiving their children who were approved.

ch 0 5 Chapter 5 : Academy Entrance Exam

Naruto : The Wind Calamity

Fantasy · Devil_Hex

lelisPw

2yr

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It is the first season of Naruto.

ch 0 7 Chapter 7 : Academy starts

Naruto : The Wind Calamity

Fantasy · Devil_Hex

lelisPw

2yr

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Naruto classic. It was bad ... I wrote in Portuguese BR

ch 0 7 Chapter 7 : Academy starts

Naruto : The Wind Calamity

Fantasy · Devil_Hex

lelisPw

2yr

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You have knowledge of ancient magic, and that making a serum to increase strength ...? The goddess of death (your sister) would be disappointed.

ch 0 6 Chapter 6

The Tale Of Loki

Movies · DickMcJones

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Journey of the Immortal Grandmaster

Reborn into Naruto World with Tenseigan

Primitive age of Xianxia (Honghuang style xianxia, Pseudo insert)

Cultivating Disciples to Breakthrough

Bleach Swordsman of Kusajishi

Cultivating Disciples to Breakthrough

Cultivating Disciples to Breakthrough

Cultivating Disciples to Breakthrough

Cultivating Disciples to Breakthrough

Cultivating Disciples to Breakthrough

Cultivating Disciples to Breakthrough

Cultivating Disciples to Breakthrough

Cultivating Disciples to Breakthrough

Cultivating Disciples to Breakthrough

Cultivating Disciples to Breakthrough

Cultivating Disciples to Breakthrough

Naruto : The Wind Calamity

Naruto : The Wind Calamity

Naruto : The Wind Calamity

The Tale Of Loki

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