The storytelling is good. I love the description of each scene which seems compact, understandable, and alive. It made me feel like I'm sucked into the story. Yet, the problem is the way each chapter is quite short, and how sometimes the author mistakenly uses first-person pronouns although the story is the third person. Overall, it's a good story.
Urban · ssun_ara
Pornographic Content Hate or bullying Release of personal info Violence Spam Other
Webnovel
The storytelling is good. I love the description of each scene which seems compact, understandable, and alive. It made me feel like I'm sucked into the story. Yet, the problem is the way each chapter is quite short, and how sometimes the author mistakenly uses first-person pronouns although the story is the third person. Overall, it's a good story.
NAN'S DREAM AND SECRET
Urban · ssun_ara