just an artist looking for inspiration
2019-04-18 Joined United States
I will definitely try that out! Thank you
ch 11 Ritual prep
Fantasy · US_DreamerDon
Wow. I've already reported you.
ch 0 3 The Adventurer's Guild
Fantasy · US_DreamerDon
New chapter. This is where the story really changes from the old one!
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Fantasy · US_DreamerDon
UPDATED CHAPTER
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Fantasy · US_DreamerDon
Thank you for the offer, but I'm good.
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Fantasy · US_DreamerDon
For spacing. I wanted a break so readers can gather their thoughts. Think of them as empty lines.
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Fantasy · US_DreamerDon
Thank you very much
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Fantasy · US_DreamerDon
Okay. I don't know if you thought about this part: Her lips aren't going to match up to her words.
"Is this some kind of joke?" I addressed no one in particular, wondering if they even spoke the same language as me. But to my surprise the words I spoke came out in a language I had never ever heard of before, but apparently, I understood it. Shocking discovery, indeed. If I wasn't so confused I'd even start yelling at people, asking if I've been kidnapped. But if I really had been kidnapped, I wouldn't be lying freely on a grand double bed with a duvet which was soft-as-hell and looked extremely expensive. Oh Lawd, I was even wearing a silk gown. Warcrime.
Fantasy · Suoshi
If my brain is naturally translating, would I pick up on it? This is my point.
"Is this some kind of joke?" I addressed no one in particular, wondering if they even spoke the same language as me. But to my surprise the words I spoke came out in a language I had never ever heard of before, but apparently, I understood it. Shocking discovery, indeed. If I wasn't so confused I'd even start yelling at people, asking if I've been kidnapped. But if I really had been kidnapped, I wouldn't be lying freely on a grand double bed with a duvet which was soft-as-hell and looked extremely expensive. Oh Lawd, I was even wearing a silk gown. Warcrime.
Fantasy · Suoshi
How does she know that she's speaking a different language?
"Is this some kind of joke?" I addressed no one in particular, wondering if they even spoke the same language as me. But to my surprise the words I spoke came out in a language I had never ever heard of before, but apparently, I understood it. Shocking discovery, indeed. If I wasn't so confused I'd even start yelling at people, asking if I've been kidnapped. But if I really had been kidnapped, I wouldn't be lying freely on a grand double bed with a duvet which was soft-as-hell and looked extremely expensive. Oh Lawd, I was even wearing a silk gown. Warcrime.
Fantasy · Suoshi
"Yeah! You're right! AND soil men LIVE underground!"
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Sci-fi · Maryam_Zahoor
You have an ending ", but no starting. Thus, nobody's actually talking.
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Sci-fi · Maryam_Zahoor
Not the best opening. Try phrasing it as a question: "Well, what do you know? Rock is a soil man! Hahaha!"
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Sci-fi · Maryam_Zahoor
I forgot to mention that Jan 21st is my birthday so I will TRY to post two chapters instead of one in celebration. Figures crossed if I manage this.
ch 12 Scientific Magic?!?
Aristocrat to Adventurer
Fantasy · US_DreamerDon