I agree, I feel like the author is focusing way too much on the side plots. if he updated the story with like 14 plus chapters I'd be fine but like no matter what 20 chapters on this stupid competi9n when it should have be 5 max
ch 155 The winner
Fantasy · Gladstone_
It's the fact that Kyle is asleep and everything has been majorly.Info dumped with no emotional ties or real.Build up to it that I cannot get Uber.How horrible i'm feeling reading this novel. I don't mean that in a oh I feel bad for the world type thing.I mean I literally do not want to continue reading the novel because I am repulsed by what the authors done. Everything else has not been happy.Go lucky.But we've had a lot of explanation behind everything and having the world just completely go to s*** with nothing good in it.Within 5 chapters is not a fun read.Honestly and it has drawn me so out of the story that it's hard for me to actually continue reading
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Fantasy · _Orange_
stupid way to do this honestly. I feel like the planet immediately.Losing its veil as soon as the man leaves is beyond stupid. We know he's been weakening the planet's core.But I feel like it's way too forced to make it that as soon as Kyle.'s soul was ripped out and the dude leaves.The planet immediately loses its veil and becomes seen. The reason I say this is because it make such A. On natural field to watching everything that kyles can have to go through
ch 364 His soul
Fantasy · _Orange_
I feel like you focus way too much on side characters and sub blots. Usually that's not a bad thing.However, with this story I genuinely feel we only have maybe 20% of the total.Chapters used towards either the main story or a main character. There have been plenty of times where you've given 52 ten chapters of side story on a side character that either gets killed or is forgotten about not even twenty chapters later. Now, if this was a published book, I would 100% not caperiod. However since this is a web novel that is coming out with daily releases it makes it so frustrating to read. If I had a physical copy of the entire book and I was reading through these chapters. I wouldn't really care that. Some of the characters get a very long-winded introduction or an entire couple pages dedicated to them. However, since this is a daily release novel with a very small. Chapter size it's very unrewarding to read when I go multiple days in a row without hearing any word of the main character. I am in the story for the world.no the world He's in or the world you're creating. I just feel like you've taken too much of a novel approach to writing the story that it makes it hard to get into with the web novel. Cause I don't think the story's bad in any manner.I just believe that having such a limited quantity.At a time to read makes it very aggravated. There's a reason. A lot of webnovels focus around the main character and at most.There's maybe 1 or 2 chapters every so often.Dedicated to side characters. It's because the readers don't have an entire story to read.They have two chapters a data read and that creates a completely different mindset than having an entire story already written in front of you. It's a lot easier for you to get. The feeling of the world being built up and all the side plots happening when you know that there's a lot more story ahead of you. However, when I know that for the next 2 or 3 days. I'm only gonna get s***I don't want to read instead of getting towards the main character and his exploits. Because it gets really hard to justify wanting to spend any money on a novel.If realistically i'm going to be disappointed with seventy five percent of the Novel. Now, if this was a completely finished book I would not have. The the same critique. And it's like a buddy said because I would know that there's still plenty more story ahead of me that I could read at my own convenience instead of waiting for an entire day to get my next fill of the novel.
ch 400 City Of Adventures [Pt 1]
Fantasy · Magecrafter
I feel like you build up background characters way too much. I read a lot of stories where they don't build up enough of the background characters.Or even sub plots but you definitely do it way too much. Out of the 400 chapters you've released.I would say probably only one hundred of thave any connotation of our main character or even the main plot. There are so many times where you give us 10 to 15.Chapters worth a back story on a side character that immediately gets killed or is forgotten about not even twenty chapters later. It just makes it a bit unrewarding to read. Like I love the way that the story is progressing but every time I finish a chapter.I always have the same thought that I didn't really get anything new towards the story from this chapter. I could probably skip seventy five percent of the chapters and not be lost when it comes to the story. I feel like there. 's a difference between writing a story and writing a world and unfortunately what you've done is make a world.
City Of Adventures [Pt 1]
Fantasy · Magecrafter
love the chapters as always
ch 864 864 Show And Tell
Fantasy · Aoki_Aku
I know he means .1 but it'd be nice if it just have him awhole point
‘Special food resource detected. Type: Meat, snake, named as red single-eyed snake. If you eat 109 of its eyes, your agility will increase by 1.’ Zero reported. This was the reason why Ye Song went out. One agility increase was huge to him. Ye Song would choose this over strength for now. He also wanted to check out his training results after these days, and he wanted to know how much he could do.
Fantasy · Get Lost
harem are usually boring even in my favorite books. all it does is give the author an excuse to make every woman fall for the mc for stupid reasons
"I want to quit as you secretary." Nezard who heard what Hilda said looked at her stunned. Ren on the other hand had a sly smile on his face, while as usual Lara simply stared with no visible changes in her emotional state. Yet deep inside she was screaming in frustration, since she knows where this is heading.
Fantasy · lynerparel
One thing I dislike about most modern stories is they always go with the revenge leaves. Nothing fulfilled trait. that's utter b*******Because if you inflict as much misery on to those who caused misery on to you , you will feel better even if it didn't bring back your friends period
Taking revenge for Liopham and Pheli was good. It was great that the Teleporters were dead and that they wouldn't harm anyone ever again. However, killing them didn't bring Liopham and Pheli back. They were dead. Even revenge didn't change that fact.
Fantasy · HideousGrain
The real problem with this novel is the over.Focus on side characters. I don't mean that the author speaks about side characters. A couple chapters every few chapters. Know that's normal. What I mean is a fight between 2 side characters. That have no correlation to the main character or the story in any way other than the fact that they're mages have A. 7 or 10 chapter fight scene.That is very repetitive and very born. Even. When the main character gets in a fight, it drags on for way too long. Every single conflict that the character gets into does not need to be described for 5 or 6 paragraphs solely when it comes down to the fighting aspect period It's like I'm reading a book where someone needs to describe. Every tree and and it gets so boring and repetitive that the really cool aspect of the novel gets ruined. There's not many out there where a person who can't use Mana and's up becoming a Mage matter.Of fact i've never heard a book really like this one but the author's over description of every single fighting really makes it boring and repetitive. That doesn't mean I want to 3 paragraph fights.I mean, every single fight that the main character gets in.Shouldn't go for at minimum 2 chapters.If not more depending on how quote on quote story critical it is. Like this, novel has a really cool concept and honestly everything. Besides the overdescription of main characters, fight scenes and side fights. It's a good novel so much though. That I didn't want to stop reading UN till. About a 160 chapters in where the fight seems somehow managed to get more boring and even longer because at least in the beginning. The main character only had a couple skills so it wasn't 8. Chapters of the author throwing out a skill name, followed by the description of what the skill did to the enemy. I've seen it and in some novels that is also the case. However, it doesn't happen. for 8 chapters straight
Manaless Mage
Fantasy · Gladstone_