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hello author I have request can you make Yvan very ruthless after the plan to kill him fails like make him realize that being weak and awkward doesn't work and can you make him slap his sister who is a real bitch like how can blame him alone when his mother was killed in front of him. If his mother was killed in front of her would she not have behaved like that make her realize that. And the MC should also berate his teacher and arthur. There are numerous logical mistakes and MC only revolves on his self pity. I would be very grateful if you could do that I think this would add spice and thriller to your story but if you could not make that happen this fast I think your novel will not become very popular because nowadays people really hate indecisive mc (not weak).

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